Virman - LoVeRs.. or RiVaLs.. last part 25 updated 18-05-2015

Lovers or rivals..!!!

Heye peolpe..
I have been a silent reader from a long time..

This idea came to my mind so just thought if sharing it with u...

Im nt a gud writer n its my first atempt to write... Plz give ur valuable comments should it continue or nt..
All ur critisism accepted whole heartedlyy..

This story is written wuth two of my fav couples AR and virman.. Same story but just the names different..



PROLOGUE...



A cute girl of 8 is playing in a park with her best frnd a smart boy of 9..
Years passed and their friendship grew stronger and stronger.. And both started feeling special for each other..

Now girl is 21 and boy is 22 its friendship day.. Both decided to confes their felings to each other..

But destiny has its different plans..
What happens when these best friends instead of becoming lovers became biggest rivals of each other...

INDEX

AR (armaan ridhima - dill mill gaye) version of sane story.. https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3946958/ar-lovers-or-rivals-part-25-last-updated-18-05-2015-pmz-later


for Virman fans..
PART ~1 PART ~2
PART ~ 3,4,5(i),5(ii)
PART ~6,7
PART ~9
PART ~10
PART ~11
PART ~12
NOTE ~ 1

Part 1 begining..

A small girl enters a new house with her parents. She is surpired on seeing her new house where they just shifted as her father decides to start a new business in a new city..

M.c :[Mr madan chaudhry (girls father) ] so did u like ur new house princes
Girl : ofcourse dad its realy nice.. Ill go n see the whole house..
Little girl runs in excitement..
P.c :[mrs pinky chaudhry (girls mom)] be careful.. Dont run.. Ridhu.
M (girl [ manvi chaudhry] ) : yes mom..!!!
Manvi in the balcony sees a big park in in her localty n finds many kids playing there.. Seeing them she missed her old friends... Her face fals..
Madan reaches balcony to see her little princes..
M.c : wat happen ( shoked) y my babies upset..
M :( pointing towards the park)
Dad look so many kids playing ... I miss my friends..
M.c : oh my baby such a small problem... I have an idea.. Y dont u go n make new friends..
M : great idea dad ur the bst..
N she runs to the park..

In the park

Girls were playing badminton n boys football..
Little manvi became confused
She thinks.. Whom to talk with will the become my friends... She tried to call a girl but she was so busy in her game that she just ignored her..

Our cute little dads princess got upset.. A tear fall from her eye.. She turned her back n started to move away..

Ball came n hit her on back n she fell down she got hurt n started to cry..

A boy came running towards her side to take his ball..
Vi ( viren sharma ): (boy who came to take the ball) how many times do v boys have to remind u girls nt to come to this side at this time...

M looks at him confusingly

(Another boy came ruming from behind) :wat happen viren wat tok u so long..

M :( in her sobs ) im sorry i didnt knew about that girls cant come her.. Im new here..
V : heyy plz dont cry.. Actualy this is our park's rule that every evening v boys play here foot ball n its an advise to all to all to nt come here as they can get hurt like u got..

M: im sorry.. I spoiled ur game
V: its ok.. New here.. ?? Bye the way im virat virat singh vadhera.. Frinds?? (Moving his hand towards her.
M: ( wiping hwr tear ) sure im manvi.. (n she shakes hand with him)

Vi : im atul sorry i didnot notice that u are new here..
Frnds
(N shake hands with manvi m she gives him a smile..)
M : no.need to be sorrry...

V: can i ask u a ques manvi
M : ya sure virat
V : i meam wat are u doing this side of the park.all alone..
M : actualy virat i came here to.make new frnds bt all of u guys were so busy (n her face fell again n a tear drop from her eye)
V: hey dont cry.. I guess u got two new frnds rite bro
Viren :yes ofcorce
M : thanku virat ( a big smile apears on her face)
V : no.sorry no thanku n manvi plz cal me viru like my all other frnds..
M : in that case viru cal me mannu..

Vi : lets go viru its geting late i dont wanna get scoldings from mom again
V n vi: bye mannu see u tom..
M : bye...

Mamvi comes back to her house wuth a big smile on her face as she made new frnds on very first day in an new city...

This waa part 1 begining of a new friendship ..

nice update viren,virat,and manvi became friend
update soon

Part 2

Days passed n thier friendship grew stronger... Coz of manvi's freindly n sweet nature of other kids became her new friends.. She was very much the part of the kids park club..
Ever evining all the kids played togher n talk about their lives their schools.. N holidays were spent mostly in park..
But there was a secret that no other friend knew.. Virat n manvi use to meet one hr before the others came n they talk about everything n nothing... They both shared a very spl bond n when from new frnds they became bst friends even both didnot realised...

Virat is one year senior to manvi...
Today is manvi's last exam of her last year collage n virat has already completed his graduation n has just joined his dad's busines as he took one year break...

In the evening.. Park
Jv ( jevika one of their friends) cum on yaar manvi atleast ab toh usse btade that u like him.. Kab tk aise..

( as the year passed mavi asked al of his frnds nt to call her manu As she thinks manu is a kidish name n it does not suit her personality...:-P:-P manvi is a strong brave girl who knowz how to take a stand...)

M: ur rite jevi i guess now its time to confes.. Ill surely tell...

V : tell wat manu
M : nothing viru its jst im planning to.help dad in his business..
Messing virats hairs..
A : manu how many times i have told no dont mess with my hairs.. N not to call me viru its virat virat d great.
( same reason for no more kick name of virat too)
M: wat ever viru.. Ill always call u viru only
V: as u say manu ( as he knows he can never win from her manu..)

Vr : hey manu how was ur exam
M : (irrtated) how many times viren its manvi nt manu... Ppr was great
Vr: thats not fair manvi virat also cal u manu.. (making a cute face)
V : only ill call her manu coz she is my bst frnd rite manu...
Manvi smiles n response...

Jv: guys we are here to decide somthing remember... Tomorow is a spl day...
V : ofcorse jevi.. Tom its friendship day.. N we will celabrate it for sure
M : a grand party

V : so its decide tom at club blue blazer i have done ol the arrangemnets see u tom guys at 7 sharp..
M : thats not fair i wanted to help in arrangements viru
Vr : its a suprise manvi
Rite virat ( and winks at him)

They all leave to their respected homes..

Virat thinking... manu tom will be a spl day for us ill tell u how much i love u...

On the other side manvi to her self : i think jevi is rite i will confes my felings to him tomorow for sure...

Originally posted by: pink1

nice update viren,virat,and manvi became friend
update soon

thank u soo much dear..
😊 😛 😃

both are grown up and both are love
each other but still not confess each other
update soon

Originally posted by: pink1

both are grown up and both are love
each other but still not confess each other
update soon

thanku for commenting...

Ill surely update soonn..!!

Part 3

Friendship day nite..
This nite was to bring two people together bt destiny played its own game

A girl dreased n a beautiful royal blue coloued one piece cumming upto her knes.. Running in hospital crying.. N reaches in front of ot

(girl is none other thanmanvi)

M : muma wat happen.. Hows dad..??
(unable to control her tears.. Hugs her mum.)
P.c : manu dont cry baby.. Nothing will happen to ur dad doctots are operating him..
M: mum bt wat happen .. Sudden heart atack dad was fine during lunch..

Doctors came out..
M : doc hows dad
Doc : his condition is really critical.. He wants to meet manu
M : its me doc his daughter
Doc : u may go in.. Bt plz keep in mind dont let him take any stress

Madan was shifted to icu
In icu
M.c : manu
M : yes dad im here..plz dad take rest.. Nothing will hapen to u
M.c : no manu listen to first.. U love ur dad rite.. N u will do wat ever i ask u to do
M : ofcourse dad i love u alot.. I promise u what ever ull ask me ill do
M.c: what ever loss our business has suffered in lst 2 mnths is bcoz of that VK enterpise.. Promise me manu u will take revenge from them for the loss our company suferd n will do what ever u.can to get back our companies old position.. Promise me manu
Madans condition gets more critical.. N he faces problen in breathing..

M (shouts) : doc nurse...
M.c : promise me manu..
M : i promise u dad...ill bring back our companies old reputation..

Doc came n ask manvi to go and wait outside..

Manvi was sitting on bench holding her head in her palms...

**FLASHBACK**

Same day in the evening
M : jevi plz come fast im waiting for u.. I wanna look bst tonite
Jv : manvi im on my way.. Ill reach in 5min..
N she hangs up the call

Beep beep
Manvi looks at her phone n smiles reading virats msg
"" hey manu.. Liked my gift.. Im sure u will look beautiful in that dress..
Come soon will be waiting for u.."
Manvi to her self.. : todays party gonna be a blast.. Viru u will get biggest surprise of ur live today.

Jevika reaches her home n both girls get dress up n leaves for the party
Both are looking beautiful..
Jevika wears a black colour knee lenth dress n manvi a royal bue coloured

On the way
Manvis phone ring
M : hello yes mom..
M : (shocked) wat..?? Dont worry im cuming...
M to jevika : jevi i cant come to the party i have to go its realy imp.. Mom needs me
Jv : manvi wat happen.. Y are you so tenesed..ill come with u
M : nothing jevi.. U go to the party every one would be waiting for us..
Jv: bt manvi..

Manvi cuts her
M : no buts jevi plz go... N plz make viru understand That the work is really urgent i cant come..also tel him nt to worry il talk to him latter.. N u guys enjoy the party to the fullest..
Jv : ok bye manvi. Ill try n handle him..u take care..

*flashback end*

Her thoughts were broken by doc words
Doc im sorry pateint has gone in comma v tried our level bst...


This was my 3rd part...
Plz let me know how was it..

nice update so vk company means
virat company right update soon