Virman - LoVeRs.. or RiVaLs.. last part 25 updated 18-05-2015 - Page 6

Thank u sooo much people all those who commented n liked my previous parts..
Im a bit busy so could not individually rply to ur posts..


Part 9

V : friends..
Mani n vini : yess.. N shake hnds..
Mani : ur name virqt vadhera i dont like it can i cal u buddy
V : sure champ..

T : thinking thak god manvi just left.. If she would have seen virat with kids.. God knows wat wpuld have happened..

T ( tanya tani.. Manvi only close friend after she left virat . She knows every secret of manvi.. Kids are very close to her and often come to her olace to play..)

T : hey are u virat vadhera ??
Mani : yes di he is the one aunty was talking about to mumma
T : move inside u two.. Who keeps their quest standing on door..
Vini : chill di he is our buddy...
T : hello im tanya...
Plz come inside
V : hi..

Virat was talking to tanya s mom n mani n vini were continously disturbing them.. Virat had a grt time with mani n vini
V : aunty if dont mind can i talk to tanya alone
T mom : sure.

Tanya n virat went to terrace
V: im sorry
T : sorry for what
V : u are a realy nice girl bt i cant marry u..
T : really...
V : y are u so happy.. I just rejected u
T : actually virat i love someone else bt he is abroad for a year n i cant tel mum n dad about him... So dont be sorry friends..
V : sure.. Can i ask u something..
T : sure
V : who are these kids...
T : my bst frnds kids..
V : ohh.. They are really cute..
T : can i requeat u something
V : sure
T : plz dont say no now.. Ask then u need tm plz.. Till then ill try n find some way to tell mum n dad about kushal..
V : sure... Infact if u need any help ask me..
T : thanku..

Mani n vini reaches terrace
Di anuty caling u down
T : ill leave
Mani : buddy plz dont marry di she loves kushal..
V : im nt marring her.. I already said no champ n now im also in her team..
Vini.. : really.. Thanks buddy..
Mani : come lets go aunty has made my fav snack pani puri..

(Pani puri reminds virat about manvi.. How crazy she was abbut pani puri..)
Vini : nt only urs paner prantha my fav fav also..
V : hey thats mine fav too.. Come lets go n grab them...

Virat mannan viniya n tanya had a grt time...
Virat 's mom was here after a while she was really happy ti see his old virat back today after 5 yrs..

T : kids aunty called she is sending driver to pick u up..
Vino : i dont wanna go..
Mani : me to wnna play more with buddy..
T : its late n u have schol tom..
V : here take my no.. When ever u wanna meet me give u a cal..
Ani m vini hugged virat n bid bye to others...

Viray n his mom also left..

Nxt day in school
Vini : dont cry mani..
Mani : al other boys tease me i dont know how to play foot bal
Vini : idea..
Mani : wat..??
Vini .: lets go home ill tell u... Bt promise u will nt tell mumma about u cried.
Mani : gave a hug to to his sister n they both went home..

Mannnan n viniya rum
Vini : on phone
Lady other side : yes maam how can i help
Vini : give phone to buddy
Lady : budddy..??
Vini : whoz phone is this n who are u..??
Lady : maam its mr vadhera phine n im her pa
Vino : god buddy dont u think twise before giving job.. No comman scene.. If its mr vadheras phone that means he is my buddy.. Im nt mad ill dial a wrong no.

Lady : sorry mam sir is busy he asked nt to disturb him
Vini : go n tell its her little angle.. If u did not give phone to him ill ask him to fire u...

Lady : sure maam ill go n give phone to sir...

Virat 's office
His pa anters virat cabin..
V angrily : i told u not to disturb me
Lady : sorry sir bt maam was nt ready to listen

V : whoz that..??
Lady : some angle wants to talk to his buddy..
V : give the phone to me.. N nxt tm when ever she.cals give it to me.
Lady : ok sir.. N leaves..

V : hi angle..
Vini( sadly) : hey buddy..
V : wat happen angle y u sound like this.. Is every thing ok.. N where is champ
Vini explains him tge whole story..
V : champ u r a brave boy.. Boys dont cry.. Ill teach u football..
Mani : promise
V : promise.. Tom its sunday.. Come to my place ill send my driver..
Vini n mani excitedly..: Done..

V : calls his pa n ask her to cancle all her meeting for tom..

Vini n mani...
Ran towards pinky n hugged her..
Pinky : my kids are really happy.. Share with me also
Vini : tom v are going to buddy place.. Ge will teach footbal to mani
Pinky : who is ur buddy
Mani : ofo mumma that boy who came to meet tani di..
Pinky : ok.. Bt 1st ill tqlk to tanya n then u will be allowed
Mani : bt mumma..:-(
Pinky : strictly go to rum
Mani m vini : okk...

Pinky calls tanya n enquires about there new buddy.. N after talking to her she was satisfied n allowed then to go..
Mani n vini were super excited...

Next morning..
Mani n vini : gud morning mumma ( n hugged pinky.)
Gud morning mom ( n hugged manvi)

M : (surprised) today its sunday n both of u r up so early .
Mani : we are going at buddy's place he will teach me football
M : whoz dis budy..
Vini : new frnd..

Vini n mani left with virats driver

M : mumma whoz their new frnd
Pinky : relax manu.. The boy who came to meet tani hat day.. He is their new frnd.. N dont worry.. He is a nice guy n belongs to gud family.. I enquired b4 allowing them..
M : ok mom.. Im going for a meeting...

In car manvi was lost in her thoughts.. Football reminded her of viray .. He qas daamm crazy about it.. N was a gud player...



NOTE :-
1 )Pms will be sent later..

2 ) Im sure zore jhatka lga hoga.. Girl was tanya.. Nt manvi... N in my story tanyq is not at all evil like in show...

Waiting for ur comments..

3) Many had a doubt about two kids vini ( viniya ) n (mannan) mani..
Guys for now i can just tel u that they live with the chaudhary family.. That is manvi's..
Exact will be reveled in upcuming updates... I dont wanna spoil my surprise...!!!

4 ) plz ignore spelling as wel as gramatical mistakes...

Unres me first
awesome update
Loved it
read both updates in one go
thanks for pm
continue soon
Waiting for next part

wow dear..

nice update wow both kids became
good friend of virat when both
will come friend of each other
and when we will get to see there love stories
update soon

Very nice update want to read more

NYC UPDATE DEAR. WAITING FOR VIRMAN ROMANCE. PLZ UPDATE SOON.😊😊😊

Amazing update..!!!!loved it n thanks for the PM!!!

nice update... kids are so much attached with virat... the kids are virman kids.. virat is the father of the kids.. i'm confused...

nice one dear. like it. continue soon. thanks for pm.

Superb
i love this
thanks for scarb
fab work