Virman - LoVeRs.. or RiVaLs.. last part 25 updated 18-05-2015 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanls dear...
Im.glad u r liking it...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazynanulims

awesome yar. thanks for pm.




thanks dear...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 11

In plane
M : excuse me.. Is there any vacant seat i want to change my seat..
Airhostess.. : sorry maam flight is ful
M: plz try if any other passenger is wiling to change..
Airhostess : sure maam ill try.. After the plane takes off plz take ur seat..

Virat n manvi ignored each other..

After about 2 hrs manvi felt asleep n during her sleep her head moved on virats shourder...

V (to himself) : mannu u are still the same.. Y all this happen b/w us.. As much as try to hate u try to keep u out of my life.. Something or the reminds me of u.. Ur happy times... U know mannu i got 2 new frnds n they both always do something that reminds me about our times... Im sure if u ll meet them u will have same feling like i get...

Virat also drifted of to sleep with his head on manvi's

Manvi's sleep was broken with airhostes voise.. She felt somthing heavy on her head n then she realised what it was... She was surprised that she slept on virats shoulder n he did not say anything...

Airhostes : maam if u wish to change ur seat it is avialble..
M adjusts virats head n lood towards airhostes.
M : no thats alrite..

M shifts her gaze towards virat.. N closes his half closed eyes with her palm..
: u have stoped taking ur medicines..
** flashback

Early morning
Manvi enters virats room n finds him sleeping.. With his half open eyes..
M : viru u are awake n did not bother to pic up my call
V : no response..
M : viirruuu ( shouts at top of her voice)
Virats gets up suddenly n scared
: mannuu is this the way to wake up
Up someone..
M : lier u were already awake.. Ur eyes were open..
V : idiot use some comman sence i know u have less bt try using that..
M : wat do u mean..
V : idiot if was awake then would not have got scared of ur scream...

Virats's mom enters..
V mom : manvi are u alrite... U screamed so loudly..
V : to wake me up..
M : aunty his wyes ware open so i thought he was nt responding purposely..
V mom : manvi ..virat have this problem since childhood n he never listen to me n dont take medicines...
M : no medicines y viru
V : i hate medicines..
M : busted out in laughter... Omg viru are u seriously 15..??
Dont worry aunty ill give him medi..

It became msnvi's duty to remind him to take his pills. She forced n even blackmailed him if he refused to take..

Enof flsh back..

U know viru vini have same problem... At nite mannan often get scared on seeing her half open eyes...

Airhostes.. : v are about to land all passengers are requested to faten their seat belts...

With this manvi chain of thoughts breaks...

In taxi
Virat n manvi were heading towards their hotle..

A sudden break by driver makes both of them loose their balance n coz of that both hold each other tightly...

Driver : im sorry.. Suddenly a kid came running...
V & m leave each other : its ok...

And an aqward scilece takes place..

M : excuse me mr vadhers can u plz give me ur report so that i can read it.. As u know v are here as a team... I think it will be btr for us to keep aside our personal stuff n just focus on the motive for which v ade here.. V both have no other option...
V : sure miss chaudhry i agree instead of being strangers or ill use the apropriate word rivals.. Let us behave as team mates for this seminar...

Both reach the hotle..

Manager : hello sir hello ma'am
Im mr goerge inchage of the program..
V have a welcome party tonite.. N v still have 4 hrs to it.. U can take rest..
N gives them their rum keys..
Virman rums were adjustent to each others..

Party..
Manvi wore a lite pink saree with silver border.. Little make up n silver earings... She looked beautiful as ever...
virat wore jacket jeans...
Every one in the party praised manvi..
Nvirat was lost in her..

A guy came n offerd manvi dance to wich she agred..

After a while he tries to get more n more close to manvi .. She was strugling hard to get of her grip bt no use...

This was not left unnoticed by virat..
He got up from his seat n pulled manvi out of the grip of that guy..
Coz of a sudden pul manvi lost her balance n landed on virats chest... Both shared an eye lock which was broken by that guy..
Guy : what is problem man.. I waa dancing with her..
V :( angrily ) just stay away from her..
Virat n that guy wre about to fight manvi interupted..
M : virat plz lets go from here..

Out side party hal..
M : thank u..
V : no need to be.. If in ur place there was some one else i would have done the same..
N he left from there..

Late nite..
Loud sound like a bomb blast..
N lite went off

virat heard noice from out side he rushed to know wat was it..

Mr g : sir a mojor short cuircit took place n this block.. plz move down to lobby n do not touch any electic points
(Give him a lamp.. Coz it was too dark)

V : ok..

Mr g was knocking manvis door bt no response..
V : wat happen..
Mr g: sir maam is not opening her door ..if she touched any switch any thing could happen

Viratgot hel scared listenin to this..
: shit manu is scared of darknes.. Wat are u waiting for go n get dublecate keys...

Mr g runs from their...

V still knocking the door..
: manuu..manu.. Open the door...

Manuuu... Manuuu...

Virat heard a thudd sound from inside...


waiting for ur responses ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Nice dear
Beautiful update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nyc update. Now the story is turning interesting. Waiting 4 the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one. like it. continue soon. thanks for pm.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow am loving the scenario u create fr virman 👏 excited to read more pls pls do update soon😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Nice update
loved it
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice story. I read all the updates in one go. It is really very interesting. Can you plz pm me?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for late reply
Virat was helping kids its was really wow

And he remember its past and his mannu

And their cute fight was nyz

Poor mannu cant learn to kick the ball

Nice update continue soon

Plz pm me

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