Virman - LoVeRs.. or RiVaLs.. last part 25 updated 18-05-2015 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niaksharma

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: komalvirman

Awesome update i like it

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Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

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Originally posted by: Syed695

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Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Read all the parts.
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Do continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 8

Mannan n vini ran todawrs the girl on door... : mom.. N hugged her..
Pinky : mannu u back from your trip..!?? How was it
M : it was gud mumma.. This tome again i gave best presentation n got the project.. Nt those VK comp..
Pinky: thats it mannu.
Kids u go fresh n up
I remember my promise mannu.. Bt till whem u will leave ur life like this it has been 5 yrs... Day nite busness business...
M : (irritated) thats it mom jow many times ill repete.. This is my life n im doing what i want to
Pinky : i know mannu u will never give ans to my ques.. Even i guess u dont know these... By the way tom is vini n mani's ptm will u go .??
R : ill try mumma

Virat's house
Virats mom : virat its high time now get married...
V : i dont want to mom im happy with my life
Mom : i know son.. Ill wont force u meet that girl atleast if u like her only then..
V : im not gonna meet any one..
Mom : its enough virat... I wont listen anything.. If u love me respect me a bit then u wil go.. Here is her adress ( giving him a piece of papaer)
V : ok mom.. Iwill.. Bt u will nt force me..
Mom : promise..
(Mom thinking.. I dont know y i fel this girl will change ur life for sure.. I hope u like her..)

Nxt morning..
M : im sorry mumna i have an meeting cant come
Pinky : thats alrite mannu.. V are leaving..

Manvis pov
Im sorry muma... U suffer alot seeing me like this.. Bt i have no other option.. I keep my self busy so that i dont get time for myself... It was me who wanted this.. Bt now i cant see hate in his eyes for me...
Mani - vini ur are vry spl for me..bt im nt able to give the love that u desreve..
Pov ends..

Same day in the evening..
Virat reaches the the house of that girl
A small boy opens the door
Mani : are u mr vadhera
V : yes.. Hello champ
Mani : hello im mannan
Vini : mani is he came to meet her
Mani : yes vini
V : hello little angle u are really preity
Vini: thanku im viniya

A girl of late 20 's enter n was shocked to see virat there talking with kids...



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