Virman - LoVeRs.. or RiVaLs.. last part 25 updated 18-05-2015 - Page 32

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Prepation for sangeet ware going on in ful swing..

Jevi : viren do the step.froperly.. Ill fall down if u continue to dance like this..
Viren : jevi im trying..
Vini : no uncle.. U have to do it perfectly..
Viren : yes maam..!!

Vini n manan were instrusting all othera how to dance.. Their both grandparents.. Tani and kuskal's parents..

Manan : Mumaa dadi aunty.. Nt like this...
Vini : wait i will show u..

Vini performs the step wich the elderly ladies were to do..

Manan : try it again..

After a lot of scoldings from manan n vini finly the 4 oldi couple was ready to perform

M mom : thats it vini baby i cant dance more
V mom : she is rite.. If i reherse more i will nt be able to atend guest n perfirm..

Vini : ok fine.. Bt u have to perfome as we taught u..

All : yess maam

later in the evening..

The hall was beatifully decorated with lots of diferent clr curtains lites.. Many floating candles lit up in water..

Hall is full of guest.. Family members are runing here in there in order to atend guest..

Lites goes off n anousment..
"Thank u soo much people for cuming n blesing the couple in pre weding cerimonies.. Enjoy the sangeet party..!!"

Spot lite falls on jevika n viren..!!
N both stars dancing..!!

{song mehroo
film super nani}

Haan..
Thoda thoda shor hai dil mein, thoda thoda gum sum hai
Thodi thodi saaf hai baatein, thodi thodi uljhan hai

Thoda thoda shor hai dil mein, thoda thoda gum sum hai
Thodi thodi saaf hai baatein, thodi thodi uljhan hai
Maheroo de sukoon, kar meri chahat qubool

Kar qubool, de sukoon, maheroo, maheroo

Now enters virat n manvi's parents followed by kushal n tanya's parents.. Four couples dance togethwr..!!

{song aye meri zohar jabeen..}

Aye meri zohra-jabeen, tujhe maalum nahi
Tu abhi tak hai haseen aur main jawaan
Tujhpe qurbaan meri jaan meri jaan
Aye meri zohra-jabeen
Ye shokhiyaan ye baankpan,
Jo tujh mein hai kahi nahi
Dilo ko jeetne ka fan, jo tujh mein hai kahi nahi
Main teri
Main teri aankho mein paa gaya do jahaan
Aye meri zohra-jabeen
Tu meethhe bol jaan-e-man,
Jo muskuraake bol de
To dhadhkano mein aaj bhi,
Sharaabi rang ghol de
Oh sanam
Oh sanam main tera aashiq-e-jaawida
Eh meri zohra-jabeen

Now the stage is taken over vy kushal...!!!
He stars singing..

{song dill kyu ye mera shoor kre
movie kites}

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahi Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale Zara der main
(move towards tanya.. Taking her hand starts a couple dance..)

Yeh kya ho gaya Nazar milte hi
Kahan kho gaya
Zara der main Yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi

(virat pulls manvi n viren puls jevika on the dance floor...)

Kahan kho gaya
Bheed mein logo ki woh hain wahan
Aur pyaar ki mele mein akela Kitna hoon mein yahan
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahi Udhar nahi
Teri ore chale

Tanya comes out the from the close dance n stars dancing..!!
{song lovely
movie happy new year..}

Tere naal naal sajna ve
Mera dil dhadke, Mera dil dhadke
Habibi, Aashiqui, Hayati, Asidi
Habibi, Aashiqui..

(manvi n jevi joins tanya on the dance floor.)

Main lovely ho gayiaan
Naam tera padh ke, naam tera padh ke
Main lovely ho gayiaan
Naam tera padh ke naam tera (x2)

Virat sinhs the songs loking towards manvi.. n a guitar in his hand..!!

{song hai mera dill
movie hate story 2}

Hai dil ye mera
Mujhe hardum ye poochta:
Kyun hai mujhe tujhse itni wafaa..
Kyun teri hasrat
Hai har khwahish se badhkar mujhe
Kyun naam tera hi leti zubaan..
"Saathi tera bann jaaun"
Kyun hai yeh junoon!
Har aansun tera pee jaaun
Or de du sukoon
Har din tujhko chaahun
Teri raah takun
Apni baahon mein tujhko
Main salamat rakhun

now MANVI comes in middle of stage..!!

{song bole chudian
movie hum apke hai kon..}
Bole chudiya bole kangna, haye main ho gayee teree sajna
Tere bin jiya naiyo lag da, main te margaiya
Le ja le ja soniye le ja le ja, dil le ja le ja ho...
(jevi n tanya also starts dancing with her..)

Haye haye main marjawan marjawan tere bin
Abb toh meree raate katatee tare gin gin
Bas tujhko pukara kare, meree bindiya ishara kare

(Vitin virat n kushal also joins them..)

Hoye lashkara lashkara, teree bindiya kaa lashkara
Aise chamke jaise chamke chand ke pas sitara
Meree payal bulaye tujhe, jo ruthe manaye tujhe
O sajan jee, ha sajan jee
Kuchh socho, kuchh samjho meree bat ko
Bole chudiya bole kangna, haye main ho gaya teraa sajna
Tere bin jiya naiyo lag da, main te marjawan
Le ja le ja, soniye le ja le ja, dil le ja le ja ho...

Manan n vinya takes the hold of stage...

{song wah wah ram ji
movie hm apke hai kon}

Waha Waha Ramji, Jodi Kya Banaai
Didi or jiju Ko,(pointing towards kushal n tanya..)
MUMY OR PAPA ko(points towarfd virat n manvi..)
Badhaai Ho Badhaai
Sab Rasmon Se Badi Hai Jag Mein
Dil Se Dil Ki Sagaai
Aapki Kripa Se Yeh, Shubh Ghadi Aai
Jiji Aur Jija Ko, mummy or papa ko..
Badhaai Ho Badhaai
Sab Rasmon Se Badi Hai Jag Mein
Dil Se Dil Ki Sagaai

after a rocking performance by kids.. Jevi along with manvi n tanya's mom..

{song meri bano ki ayegi barat
movie aaina}

Meri banno ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri laaddo ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Aaj nachungi main saari raat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri banno ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri laaddo ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Sajna ke ghar tu jaayegi, yaad hame teri aayegi - (2)
Jaake piya ke des mein na hamko bhulaana
Aankh baabul teri kyon bar aayee, betiya toh hoti hai parayi - (2)
Abb rahegi yeh saiyaan ji ke saath, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri banno ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji
Meri laaddo ki aayegi baraat, ke dhol bajaao ji

After a bet senti performance..
Virat kushal n viren comes up on stage..!!
n drags other too...!!!!
{song abhi toh party shuru hue hai..
movie khoobsurat}

Darwaaze ko kundi maaro
Koi na bach ke jaane paaye
DJ ko samjha do,
music ghalti se bhi ruk na jaaye
Thaka thaka jo feel kare wo jaake dou RedBull gatak le
Aur jisko dance nahi karna
Woh jaake apni bhains charaye

Bas aaj ki raat hai
Kal se wohi siyaape hain
Jee bhar ke naach lo
Na ghar waale na maape hain
Sab pe apna raaz hai
Darne ki kya baat hai
Yeh toh bas shuruaat hai
(Yeh toh bas shuruaat hai)
Arey abhi toh party shuru hui hai..

with lots of msti n dhamal sangeet party came to an end..

next morning..!!!

the weding couple were locked intheir respective rooms so that they dont meet each other..

ladies were bsy in arranging for the upcuming cerimines n gents were bsy in cheking food preprations..

cerimonies for virat n kushal were suposed to take place in the garden outside n for manvi n tanya in the hall..

1st cerimony that was to held was Chuda (On the wedding day the rituals at the girl's home begin with the Chuda ceremony. Chuda is basically a set of red and cream ivory bangles that is touched by all present which is gifted by girl's Mamma (mother's brother..) After that, the girl's uncle, aunt, friends and cousins tie kaliras (silver, gold or gold plated traditional ornaments) to a bangle worn by the girl

manvi n tanya were made to sit in the middle of the rum..
manvi's mom sat infront of manvi n made her wore the bangles follwed by other present there..
All the girls present tied kalira's to manvi's chuda..

n then came the turn of tanya..

both the brides were sent back to their rum as next cerimony was to take plaace in the afternoon..

later in the afternoon..

Ghara gharoli The decorated pitcher of water (ghadoli) is brought by the groom's bhabi (brother's wife) & the bride's sibling or sibling's spouse. they visits the nearby temple and fills a pitcher with holy water. The girl n boy is then bathed with this holy water. Thereafter, they wears their wedding attire

this ritual was perfomed by jeevika for both bride n the groom.. aas jevika was like a sister to manvi n tanya.. n also bhabhi to kushal n virat being viren's wife..
with a band the ladies of the house left home singing gharoli songs towards a near by temple n after filing the pot came back...

next cerimony was Vatna involves applying the paste made from turmeric powder and mustard oil all over the girl's n boy's body by their friends and relatives.

both the brides were made to sit in the hall n ladies surrounding them.. n all of them applied vatna on their face legs n arms..
after all the elderly ladies aplied vatna.. jevika n vini covered the complete face of manvi n tanya..
after a lot of mansti n teasing sesion.. both the brides were made to bath in the holi water brought from temple...

in the lawn..
many ladies were gathered around virat n kushal
both were bsy making diferent face expresions wen someone or the other tried to apply vatna..
Virat : thats it yaar.. How much more..
Viren : relax bro.. Its a rasam..
Kushal : taking advantage of ritual u guys are bsy making me yellow
Manan : oho dad.. Its too much fun.. U both are enjoying hoki 2nd time in this year..!!
Kushal : ohh ya i forgot holi is ur fav..
Manan : yes jeju..
Virat moves towards manan n puts vatna on his face.
Manan : yukkk.. It is to stiky.. Daaaddd...!!
Virat picks him up..
Virat : manu baby enjoy holi..!!
Manan : nt fare dad..!!

V mom : enough of ur masti now go n get ready..

Ufff...
Finalyy i wrote something..!!!

hope u guys like it..!!!

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. IT WAS SO SWEET AD MINDBLOWING UPDATE. LOVES SANGEET CEREMONY VERY MUCH. VINNY AND MANAN R SO CUTE. UR SONG SELECTION IS AWESOME SUITED IT VERY MUCH. I LOVE ALL THE SONGS. ALL THE RASAMS I LOVED THE MOST. CHURA CEREMONY,GHARA GHAROLI ,VATNA ALL RASAMS R AWESOME. I AM AWARE OF ALL THESE RITUALS AS I AM FROM PUNJAB. SO LOVED THIS UPDATE VERY MUCH. NOW WAITING FOR THE NEXT. SO UPDATE SOON DEAR. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊

Awesome update dil.

Frst of all welcome back dear...
Abt update...its really sweet n beautiful...
Love all the song selection ...
Srry dear ,,,bt song bole chudiyan ,,,bole kangna is frm movie...kabhi khushi,,kabhi gam...
Love the way u explain all ritual ,,,,,virat n kushal part of vatna was awsm..
Manan n vani rock the update..
Love the way they taught dance to their grand parents..
Totally sweet update ..
Thanks alot for pm dear..
Keep rocking

Awesome update...
I really loved it...
The song selecty was really good...
Loveee how you explained all the rituals...
Virat and Kushal part was really nice...
How they taught there grandparents to dance was really nice...
It was a really sweet update..
Update soon..
And thank you for the PM...

Finally you are back...
I hope you will update soon...
You are going to end this ff soo soon why???
Pleasee update soon...

hiya after a long time pls do update😊

PART ~ 25 (LAST)

(plz read the note on next page.)

After the haldi ceremony was over both groom families went to a nearby hotel From where barat will leave towards the wedding venue.. I.e. the chaudary farm house..

Both the couples were ready in their bridal attires waiting for the moment went they will officially become each other's..

Now was the time for last few ceremonies before the departure of barat..

At grooms place..
Hall was full of relatives n frnds n were waiting for the grooms..

Virat came down the stairs holding aman's hand(virika'son..)
Both were looking same..
They wore a skin sherewani with golden n mehrum embroidery.. N were holding swords in their free hands..
Followed by kushal n manan in the same maner..
Kushal n manan wore off white sherwani with silver n purple embroidery..

Aman n manan were "sarbalas" of virat n kushal respectively..

All four of them were made to sit in the centre of the hall..

Mehrun turban was tied on heads of virat n aman folwed by purple turban on heads of kushal n manan

A small puja was perfomed by the pandit n later parents of both the grooms came forwards n attached kalgi on the turbans of their sons n their salbalas'

all those who witness the cermonay touched the turbans of virat n kushal give gifts and cash as a token of good luck.

Next was Ghodi Chadna
The Ghori Chadna is the final ceremony at the groom's place.

Jevika being sister-in-law lined virat n kushal's eyes with surma n virat n kushals mother gave jevika shagun..
Thereafter, cousins sisters of kushal n virat feed the horses.

And finally virat n kushal with aman n manan climed up the horse and left for the main farm house..

It was a distance of 5-10 mins on foot..

The barat entered chaudhary farm house with lots of dhol n fire works..

Milni Ceremony
When the groom's barat reaches the wedding venue, Milni ceremony is performed to welcome the barat.. In the Milni ceremony, the girl's relatives give Shagun (a token of good luck) to the groom's close relatives n exchange garlands...

1st mili was of fathers of both couples followed by mothers n then the other close relatives..

Ribon katai...

one of the most entreating ceremonies... brides sisters tie a ribbon on the enters of wedding venue n groom cuts the ribbon only after fulfilling demands of his salis'(sis in law)

Again jevika hoped to side of brides.. N along with other cousins of manvi n tanya were standing on the enters holding plate in their hands.. two ribons were tied one below the other

jevika : so my to be jiju's u guys wanna go in..

virat : ofcouse jevi..

jevika : then pay the entry tax.. 10,001/- n each...

Viren : hey thats nt done..

girl 1 : my jijus dear brother.. u need to stay of this...
girl 2 : jijaji u know wat manvi is looking too adorabe.. dont u wanna see her..
girl 3 : Tanya even no less... ( n winked)

vini comes towards virat n ask him pick her up..

virat : my angel is looking like a royal princes.. (n kisses her cheek)

vini : dada u look hot.. n mom (after taking a short pause..) even more... Or should i say sexy.. (in winks at him..)

kushal : only manvi..??

vini : no jiju.. tanya di is nt less.. u wanna see her pic..

kushal nodes his head..

vini opens pic of manvi n tanya n before virat or kushal could see the pic she shows them her tongue n runs to jevika..

vini : dada n jiju pay our tax n then see them live..!!

Viren : virat she is ur daugher y do u always forget... n come in her pranks..

virat n kushal accepted their defeat n gives the money..

jevika feed sweet to kushal n virat n then give them scissors to cut the ribbon..
other girls standing showers lots of flower petals in virat n kushal whle they cut the ribbon..

shail n pinky did arti of kushal n virat applied tika on their forehead n welcomed them to the weding...

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gupta farm house was loking nt less than a palace...

two exact same mandaps were set in the middle of the hall n hall was decorated in the combination of white in pink curtains...
with white n light purple orchids..

virat n kushal were made to sit in the mandaps..
pandit chanted n few manters..
after hearing vini's coment about their beloved n her prank of nt showing them the pics made virat n kushal impatient..
With every pasing mantra they were cursing the ancestors who made the marriage rituals too long..!!

Manan who was siting next to kushal ran towards the stairs
Manan : mom...!!

This made virat n kushal look towards their lady love coming down..

Manvi was wearing mahroon lenga with golden embroidery n heavy jewelry n was nt looking les than a queen of a palace..

Folowed by manvi... tanya came down wearing a purple lehange with silver embroidery..

Virat n kushal looked at their love with intense gaze.. Virat winked at manvi wen their eyes met.. This made manvi lower her head n blushed.. turning her cheks to the deeper shade of red..

Now bride n groom were standing next to each other.. They exchanged garlands.. N pandit ji started the kanyadan cermony...
After kanyadan cemonay.. Vini n manan tied the knot "gathband" of virats stol n manvi's dupata.. Then of kushal n tanya's even..

As this was a unique weding.. Kids that were the source of the parents reunite thus kathbandan was done by them...

Both couples completed the 7 rounds "pheras'," around the holy fire n took voves..

Both kushal n virat filed the partition with sindhur and tied mangalsutra around the necka of tanya n manvi...

And finally they were declalared as man n wife...!!!

Both couples took blessing of the elders n they proceed towards the gate for bidai...

Manvi's eyes were full of tears.. She had mixes felings.. The dream she had sen from her teenage days... To be with her viru her besti her love of life.. father of her kids.. Had finaly come true.. Now her family will complete in true sense.. Now her no their kids will get love of father n mother both.. Bt she was also sad about the fact she will no more be manvi chaudhary.. Now her idienty will change from a daughter to wife.. All her id profs will have w/o virat vadhera instead of d/o madan chaudhary.. No doubt she has taken responsibility of her family n kids after her father went into coma.. Bt still she was a daughter.. Bt now she has to perform duties of a wife as wel as daughter in law... She was confused whether to cry or to be happy...

Bidai is the most emotional stage of wedding.. As it turns life a girl upside down..

With this confusion n heavy heart manvi steped into the car...

Virat along with manan n vini saat with manvi n left for the hotel were couples will stay for tonite.

For virman a double room was boked.. Kids will sleep in the attached room so that couple could get privacy...!!!

Virat : manvi.. u go n get fresh till then ill make them change..
saying soo virat took kids to the attached room..

after 15 mins manvi cam wearing a red simple saree.. she just wore her mangalsutra in her neck and her chuda in her both arms.. she had removed her entire makeup.. bt still her face had a difernt glow...

virat was stining on bed with manan n vini who were leaning on his shoulders.. n the three of them bsy taking..
manvi too joined them..

after spend some family time.. virman made manan n vini asleep n moved towards their rum after closing the door of kids room...

virat went to the wash room to get fresh.. while manvi was stood near the window adoring the full moon..

virat came out of the washroom wearing his nite suit.. without making any noice virat moved towards manvi.. n wraped his arm around her waist from behind...
manvi was soo much lost in her own dream world she did not realize wen virat came.. she came out of her la la land wen she felt something cold on her bare waist..
n it did not take her even a fraction of second to realize it was none other than her viru...

virat : manu u know wat.. today u were soo sexy in the weding dres.. only I know how I was able to sit just next to u n could nt even compliment u,... n had to listen to that boring pandit.. from does he rember so much.. don't he get bored of these long mantra's...

Manvi : viruuu...!!! We were getting married n u were bsy curing the poor pandit who did the rituals of our marriage...(she looked at him with surprised cum angry face...)

Virat leaned forward n kissed her chek

Virat : I missed these expression of urs a lot...

Manvi blused hearing the weirdo compliment of her idiotic hubby.. bt she was habitual of this.. virat never used to compliment her directly.. his every compliment were too confusin.. sometimes it become difficult to understand was he actually complimenting of making fun of her.. bt manvi loved this side of virat n she knew he would never change.. n she didn't want even..

Virat : omg manu.. did u get some kind of allergy with that make up or any thing else..

Manvi : wat allergy..

Virat : ur cheks.. they are soo red.. just like ur saree colour...(n winked at her in a mistivious way..)

Manvi hit virat on his chest n hid her face by hugging him tight...

Virat : u look beautiful wen u blush...
(n kissed her forehead..)

Virat picked manvi in his arms n moved towards the bed.. switching off the lites...

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( he switched of the lites.. that has a purpose...

Don't kill me for stopping here... let them enjoy their private moment... )

dont forget to read the note on next page..

NOTE..!!!

Finaly after a long journy of sepration viram become one..!!

And with this my 1st ff come to the end...

Hope u guys enjoyed the journey of viram from frnds to rivals n finaly a couple...

Ill post the epilogue soon..!!

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i know many of u have a question y i ended it soon...

bt actualy wen i had started writing this a year ago it was suposed to be ss og just 14-15 parts as per my rough draft.. it reached 25 parts that was just coz of the suport u guys gave.. all ur coments n likes had encouragd me alot..

i dont have words for the confidence u guys gave me.. this story is even very spl to me as it was my 1st ever work...

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i do not want to drag the story further.. as finaly virman are one.. n they are married after a long seperation... hope u guys understand this..
bt dont wory guys ill come up with something new soon...