AR - LoVeRs.. or RiVaLs.. part 25 (last) updated 18-05-2015 pmz later

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Dik

@Dik..

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Lovers or rivals..!!!

Heye peolpe..
I have been a silent reader from a long time..

This idea came to my mind so just thought if sharing it with u...

Im nt a gud writer n its my first atempt to write... Plz give ur valuable comments should it continue or nt..
All ur critisism accepted whole heartedlyy..

Story will be wrinten on my two fav couples AR and virman... Same story with just just di fferent names

virman version of the same story..!! https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3947571/virman-lovers-or-rivals-last-part-25-updated-18-05-2015

INDEX

prologue page 1
Part 1 (page 1)
part -2 (page 2)
part 3.4,5(i).5(ii) (page 3)

part 6.7.8 (page 4)
part 9,10 (page 5)

part 11 (page 6)
part 12 (page 7)

note 1

part 13

part 14
part 15
Banner..
Part 16
Part 17
part 18
part 19
PART 20
PART 21
NOTE 2
part 22
PM post..
PART 23
PART~24
part 25 (last) & note

Edited by little_angle - 10 years ago

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Dik

@Dik..

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

PROLOGUE...

A cute girl of 8 is playing in a park with her best frnd a smart boy of 9.. Years passed and their friendship grew stronger and stronger.. And both started feeling special for each other..

Now girl is 21 and boy is 22 its friendship day.. Both decided to confes their felings to each other..

But destiny has its different plans.. What happens when these best friends instead of becoming lovers became biggest rivals of each other..

Edited by little_angle - 10 years ago

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indiantvlove

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Posted: 11 years ago

Interesting start ! Please update more .

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Dik

@Dik..

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: indiantvlove
Interesting start ! Please update more .

thanku sooo much for ur comment..
Ill be updating as soon as possible...

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Dik

@Dik..

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

PART ~ 1

A small girl enters a new house with her parents. She is surpired on seeing her new house where they just shifted as her father decides to start a new business in a new city..

Shishank :[Mr shishank gupta (girls father) he one of the top busunesmen] so did u like ur new house princes

Girl : ofcourse papa its realy nice.. Ill go n see the whole house..

Little girl runs in excitement..

Padma :[mrs padma gupta (girls mom) she is a house wife] : be careful.. Dont run.. Ridhu.

Ridhima ( girl [ ridhima gupta] ) : yes mumma..!!

Ridhima in the balcony sees a big park in in her localty n finds many kids playing there.. Seeing them she missed her old friends... Her face fals.. Shishank reaches balcony to see her little princes..

Shishank : wat happen ( shoked) y my baby is upset..

Ridhima :( pointing towards the park) papa look so many kids playing ... I miss my friends..

Shishank : oh my baby such a small problem... I have an idea.. Y dont u go n make new friends..

Ridhima : great idea papa ur the bst.. N she runs to the park..

In the park

Girls were playing badminton n boys football.. Little ridhima became confused She thinks.. Whom to talk with will the become my friends... She tried to call a girl but she was so busy in her game that she just ignored her..

Our cute little papa's princess got upset.. A tear fall from her eye.. She turned her back n started to move away..

Ball came n hit her on back n she fell down she got hurt n started to cry..

A boy came running towards her side to take his ball..

Boy 1 : (boy who came to take the ball) how many times do v boys have to remind u girls nt to come to this side at this time...

Ridhima looks at him confusingly

(Another boy came ruming from behind) :wat happen atul wat tok u so long..

Ridhima :( in her sobs ) im sorry i didnt knew about that girls cant come her.. Im new here..

Boy 2 : heyy plz dont cry.. Actualy this is our park's rule that every evening wen v boys play here foot ball n its an advise to all to all to nt come here as they can get hurt like u got..

Ridhima : im sorry.. I spoiled ur game
Boy2 : its ok.. New here rite... ?? Bye the way im armaan.. Frinds?? (Moving his hand towards her.)
Ridhima : ( wiping hwr tear ) sure im ridhima (n she shakes hand with him)

Atul : im atul sorry i didnot notice that u are new here.. Frnds (N shake hands with ridhima Ridhima gives him a smile..)
Ridhima : no.need to be sorrry...

Armaam : can i ask u a ques ridhima
Ridhima : ya sure armaan
Arman : i mean wat are u doing this side of the park all alone..
Ridhima : actualy arman i came here to.make new frnds bt all of u guys were so busy so i was walking alone.. (n her face fell again n a tear drop from her eye)
Arman : hey dont cry.. I guess u got two new frnds rite atul
Atul :yes ofcorce
Ridhima : thanku arman ( a big smile apears on her face)
Arman : no.sorry no thanku n ridhima plz cal me amu like my all other frnds..
Ridhima : in that case amu cal me ridhu..

Atul : lets go amu its geting late i dont wanna get scoldings from mom again
Arman n atul : bye ridhu see u tom..
Ridhima : bye...

Ridhima comes back to her house wuth a big smile on her face as she made new frnds on very first day in an new city...

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This was part 1 begining of a new friendship ..

Edited by little_angle - 10 years ago

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Dik

@Dik..

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Heya peole
i just updated part one...
In.ar virsion
for virman ill be updating the link soon..

Plz let me know was it worth reading..

I know guys there are many other awsome writers on if eho have writen far btr stories than mine..

I just wanted to give a simple start of new friendship...

Edited by miss..chalana - 11 years ago

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pink1

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

this is story is ridha arama or virman

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Dik

@Dik..

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pink1
this is story is ridha arama or virman

this thread will have story with characters of arman and ridhima ...

N ill be starting a new thread with same story but characters would be different virman...

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pink1

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: miss..chalana

this thread will have story with characters of arman and ridhima ...

N ill be starting a new thread with same story but characters would be different virman...

waiting that thread update soon