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undercoverhappy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

very interesting concept

Kushi not able to tell her husband that she's pregnant made me laugh silly wife tell ur husband forget Nani and the Dr😆

Payal's character has intrigued me she seems feisty and can read well into people

Nani not happy about the chosen daughter in law not surprising

So Arnav's an editor i think its the first time I'm reading Arnav character being something else than a business tycoon which is very interesting

thank u for the 2 fab updates 👏

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kclovearshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

My comments for Twisted

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Sj236

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Ur villain characters are not d villains dat are usually written by everyone , dey have and identity of their own after which der identity as a villain is shown. I dunno whether payal is a miscreant over here but i am impressed by her attitude ;)

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sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Payal is a dancer and what sort of person she is can be easily depicted from her conversation with khushi... She is not one bit of worried about her husband disappearance... and what I guessed of khushi's description of Akash, he is no saint either...

Arnav is hiding something??? His secretive call and that too midnight... Its fishy... This all suspense is making me more and more curious...

Loved the update...

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lala rukh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

awesome update...so akash is missing ...arnav is calling for his rescue or something else ...very interesting...payal seems weird ...khushi and arnav relation seems lil uneasy too...

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sonal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Amazing update...atleast we know why nani hates payal and akash...arnav is a journalist great what is his condition that suits him to be in this profession...why is arnav under the supervision of a doctor from last15 years..

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ZN

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

very interesting and mysterious looking forward to the story to progress further

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Poju

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Chaitu...

Update was great.. was waiting for one for long...

Regarding the story am not able get hold of it... So many questions like WHY and HOW...

Guess will have to wait for couple more chapters..

This time u have portrayed a diff image of Payal... as per the descripation was trying to imagine her.. 😊...

So much more to know.. yet to see some Arnav Khushi chemistry..

waiting for ur next update... 😊

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lakraj80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Very very interesting update! Thanks for the email. Good luck with ur project, hope u do well. Sorry cannot be of any help due to the resident status!

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mpuhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

this is so so interesting

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