|| Combined FF : Dented Scars || Part 9 , Pg 33

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yatup

@yatup

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

The words you write were so philosophical. From the proposal to the betrayal, all words were magical and emotional. The 1st sentence were so good. The combine SS idea is rocking

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soumee

@-pearlblu-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Hi...anu, u have beautifully penned down both the perspectives...sanyus heartbreak, randhirs helplessness n guilt...evrything...waiting for the next one!!😃

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

omg this one is awesome

poor sanyu...i feel sorry for her,...as well as for randhir

that vidhushi,...😡

mere sandhir ko alag kar diya...😭

u girls are amazing...this story is just awesome

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Liz

@Sanyu_Aggarwal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Simply Incredible!!!!!An awestrucking update!!! Keep it up!!! LOved this part!!!😊❤️

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arshifan2012

@arshifan2012

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

aaahhh! This story is getting more and more beautiful with each passing day! Im loving it and thank u so much anuradha for dedicating this part the other writers! It was perfect! Rula diya yaar mereko! 😭 but it was SPLENDID! Oh , and by the way i love your writing style! 😃

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Poulami

@Sunshine_Ami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

"It is strange how that one person you trust and love beyond all others, ultimately becomes the reason behind your misery.."

Absolutely marvelous... You portrayed the pain of a girl amazingly ...

Brilliant & claps... 👏

"What does forever mean to you?

When you couldn't even keep it true;

You said to me that u would forever be there;

But were those mere words, pulled out of thin air?"

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WitchGrave

@..WitchGrave..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Wow wow wow wow it was sooo amazing anurada girl you have got the best in him eeeps ❤️

I hate vidhusi I know I know everyone does saying on behalf of all 🤣