|| Combined FF : Dented Scars || Part 9 , Pg 33

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index


Part 1A - Updated (Nidhi) Pg 1

Part 1B - Updated (Rads) Pg 1
Part 2 - Updated (Zoya) Pg 3
Part 3 - Updated ( Arushi ) Pg 7
Part 4 - Updated ( Anu ) Pg 9 :)
Part 5 - Updated , (Mitra) Pg 12
Part 6 - Updated (Priya) Pg 22
Part 7 : Updated (Supriya) Pg 25
Part 8 : Updated (Payal) pg 28
Part 9 : Updated ( Sasha) Pg 33
Part 10 - Ashiqui will be writing :)
Part 11 - Tanya will be writing it :)
Part 12 - Kriti will be writing it :)







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"To Sanyukta ." Kaustuki picked up the letter lying on the
ground .
"What? For me ?" Sanyukta questioned.


"Yes Sanyu, just see it"Kaustuki said .


Sanyukta was surprised as to who would write her a letter .
No one she could think of at this moment . She opened the letter and there she
saw his name in BIG BOLD LETTERS : Randhir . She hated him from the inner
depths of her heart . He had wrecked her life , she didn't want anything to do
with him . She threw the letter . Kaustuki by the looks of it guessed it was
HIS letter , she wasn't surprised at the way Sanyukta had reacted , after all
what he had done was irredeemable.


Sanyukta left the room , she asked Kaustuki to throw the letter
, burn it do anything with it but just to get it out of her sight. Kaustuki
held the chit she knew she was wrong , but she wanted to know what Randhir had
to say.


Sanyukta ,


I know you may not
even read this but I'm still writing this . I'm not worth forgiving , but there is this faint hope that lingers on .
I never expected it would end this way , I didn't even intend to do what I did
. The first time when we met I'd never in my wildest bad dream (nightmare)
imagined saying this but I Love you and
this time around it's with no compulsions , no motives .


If I have a heart ,
It'll always be waiting for you. I just want to say I'm sorry , I really am .
This'll be the last time you hear from me , I'm leaving . Always wish the best
for you .


We are all incomplete.

On the inside, we
are splintered, torn.

But we are eternal,
like the phoenix,

and, with our heads
held high, we fight on.


And I know You'll rise up
way beyond me ... I Love you dammit !


Randhir .'


Sanyukta came back and Kaustuki hurriedly hid the letter .


"What's the matter Kausy ?" Sanyukta enquired seeing a
worried Kaustuki.


"Nothing" Kaustuki tried putting on a fake smile.


"Really?"Sanyukta knew her better than that.


"He left"Kaustuki finally said giving in .



Author's note : I cant continue so if anyone wants to go ahead with this please do ..

'We are all incomplete.
On the inside, we are splintered, torn.
But we are eternal, like the phoenix,
and, with our heads held high, we fight on.' - A friend wrote it .





Hey Guys ! Rads(Serendipity ) and I Have come up with the first part , I urge writers , if they want that is to please continue . Rads's creative idea , of making this a combined FF . So please , do continue :)



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Effervescent_R thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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errr...I can give it a try...i.e. if u don't mind
PS : I love the poetry part a lot...the phoenix one...
great lines..truly inspiring
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Serendipity-

errr...I can give it a try...i.e. if u don't mind
PS : I love the poetry part a lot...the phoenix one...
great lines..truly inspiring


They're not mine , but I'll tell my friend definitely .

Sure please go ahead , I've read your work and I really like it :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its beautiful. I hope and pray someone from forum can give a proper ending to it.
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" Left?? Never thought he was that spineless!! " Sanyunkta replied in a rather angry tone.
Kaustuki being the sentimental one couldn't resist handing the letter to her instead saying.."There's more,you need to read this Sanyu..u really have to "
"Kaustuki hadn't I told you to burn it in the 1st place, I don't want to read anything related to him, not after what he did..." she was nearing a tear now
"I can't , not after reading its contents Sanyu,u MUST read it once..for me...please..then you can do whatever you want with it, I'll burn it myself if you say so"
Sanyu seemed a bit hesitant ,but finally took the letter,opened it and began to read...
When she finally had read it, Kaustuki chanced a look at her,she could see tears forming in her eyes...but not of love or pain these were tears of anger,
she crushed the piece of paper immediately, having various flashbacks..
their 1st KISS full of hatred...
their fights...
their never ending argument...
yet those times when they worked as a team..The Dream team...
and finally his Betrayal...striking a match she burned the letter!!
and shouted to one in particular...
" WHY now????
YOU SAY YOU LOVE ME??
YOU COWARD YOU DON'T EVEN HAVE GUTS TO FACE ME"
that said she wiped those HOT TEARS and left the room...
leaving a stunned Kaustuki and a crying Randhir,hidden outside her room behind...
He realized for the 1st time...
that he had lost her forever!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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ummm...I m not sure if u all will like it...
but oh well...thats my piece...anyone is free to cont. if they like
😃
PS:@ Topic maker,whats ur name? I m Rads😃
Edited by -Serendipity- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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^ I lo e it... it never seems that it was started by another author and continued by another... its good beyond words. You must continue buddy.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You're amazing , I couldn't have written it like you :)
Thank You So Much 🤗 Rads :)
I'm Nidhi :)
Hmm and Rads what should I name the topic OS/SS//TS ?
Edited by Sarunforeva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sparkling_gems

^ I lo e it... it never seems that it was started by another author and continued by another... its good beyond words. You must continue buddy.


I m glad u do😃
continue?? err...I don't know...it just came in my mind..when I read and wrote it...will have to think abt it..😕

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Originally posted by: Sarunforeva

You're amazing , I couldn't have written it like you :)
no honestly its ur concept that intrigued me and made me write the 1st scenario that popped in my head😆😆 u're pretty gud Nidhi😃😃😃😃😃😃

Thank You So Much 🤗 Rads :)
anytime😃
I'm Nidhi :)
Hmm and Rads what should I name the topic OS/SS//TS ?
errr... Incomplete ???
cant think of a title at the moment😕

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