|| Combined FF : Dented Scars || Part 9 , Pg 33 - Page 17

Wow.. Amazing..
Beautifully written...
It was seriously a bliss to read..

Originally posted by: ArushiKotecha

Oh man! This is the bestEST (pardon my aberration) story I have ever read! What's more, it is the most gratifying feeling in the world to have been part of this venture!

*GROUP HUG* :D

Priya, you know how much I adore you and your words, so as per tradition, I shall not comment on a particular part or quote specific lines because they all blew me away, literally and metaphorically :P

Loved how this was so atypical, clearing misunderstood circumstances and expressing love while not being oh-so-Bollywood about it! Reveling in your usage of vocab, so don't you dare to ask me my source of vocab :P

Priya, I say it again, I adore you & your words to bits! Rock on, mi lady! Eager as hell to see Of Mosquitoes and Madness updated :D

Great choice of song. Love Pink. There lyrics are sooo true. The part, not at all mushy or cheesy. The last scene reminded me of a japanese anime. The anime was cool and is your part. Loved the work of all

nice story

Superb !!!!!!!!! This was great !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Next update soon

Omg...what a roller coaster ride full with surprise hurts pain

Ome moment I feel like finally everything is solve my sandhir is become as same as befor that kiss...


But very next moment I fee like...thoda jaldi bol diya...

Sanyu emotions were so unpredictable she was in happy or sad mood after reading that letter is not able to say in one go...its like some pages are s5ill more to turn...

And that vidhushi...god...I remeber her evil smile in that dark shadow ready to eat my sandhir...

Randhir...what to say about him...it give so much to see him like this...I mean it...
I always saw him to hurt sanyu by his words or physically ...even I read some stories where he hurt her so much without listing a single words from her side...it really make me cry in it...poor sanyu...

But here everything is opposite sanyu accuse him for betraya her...wow

I want to imagine randhir to manaofy her like hell...


I just love to read it...


But I have a complaint with u all ppl...why don't u send pms to ur readers

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Omg...what a roller coaster ride full with surprise hurts pain

Ome moment I feel like finally everything is solve my sandhir is become as same as befor that kiss...


But very next moment I fee like...thoda jaldi bol diya...

Sanyu emotions were so unpredictable she was in happy or sad mood after reading that letter is not able to say in one go...its like some pages are s5ill more to turn...

And that vidhushi...god...I remeber her evil smile in that dark shadow ready to eat my sandhir...

Randhir...what to say about him...it give so much to see him like this...I mean it...
I always saw him to hurt sanyu by his words or physically ...even I read some stories where he hurt her so much without listing a single words from her side...it really make me cry in it...poor sanyu...

But here everything is opposite sanyu accuse him for betraya her...wow

I want to imagine randhir to manaofy her like hell...


I just love to read it...


But I have a complaint with u all ppl...why don't u send pms to ur readers

Thank you for your review! I love it when readers tell me what they liked, what got them excited, got them thinking :D
I am so sorry, but you probably aren't in my Buddy list, so I couldn't PM you :( Send supriya.ipkknd a Buddy request, she's up next :D

lovely update , waiting 4 next😊

awww... the end was so perfect...nd that witch pls i beg to get her barbequed pls writers...
and lovely part thnk u sooo much...*eager fr next*

Chapter 5