|| Combined FF : Dented Scars || Part 9 , Pg 33 - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sarunforeva



Hmm let's just say I'm slowly loving Delena . Damon <3 OHMYGOD ! Damon <3


hahahah welcome to delena fandom!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 and yea Damon is Damon his dialogues r so brilliant
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Posted: 11 years ago
Girls...agar aap logo ka chat khatam ho gaya to...

😔 I want update yaar...

How long I have to wait


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -pearlblu-

Roorkee was a blue town at night. The green from the trees, brown from the soil and ivory from the moon seemed to submit to the dominance of the mesmerising ocean of the night, adorned by the shadows of quiet and peace. As he sat on the rain-washed lonely bench, he wished that the colour of the limitless sky somehow soothed the red fire burning his life. The crumpled paper in his hands dropped to the ground as he rested his head on his palms. It was over. The part of his life where he had felt alive, it was over.

Thses were definitely the best lines in the whole chap...gotta say, the way u use ur words to twist the storyline n characters...bloody brilliant...m so glad randhir didnt go ahead with the idea of a fake gf but told sanyu...oops, i mean told SANU everything...ws smiling like an idiot reading his letter...the way he knew which all reactions she would give...amazing!! Really!! So glad that now everythings fine between sandhir!! Waiting for next part...

Just one complaint...u didnt pm me!!

Thanks Soumee 😳 These were the only lines I wrote without being half-asleep 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Girls...agar aap logo ka chat khatam ho gaya to...

😔 I want update yaar...

How long I have to wait





Kaveri [Di?]
Thank you for being so nice .

Actually Priya ka update Saturday/Sunday ko hoga .
Boards hai naa ?

Thank You for liking this fic<3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MitraAvinash

Thanks Soumee 😳 These were the only lines I wrote without being half-asleep 😆


It goes without saying that if u wrote this well under the effect of sleep, then mashallah, if u had written this wide awake...it would have been out of this world, eh? 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sarunforeva

^^ Prachi :D thank you so so much :D
You're such a sweet reviewer . Bad writer ? Writers can never be bad , I'd love to read your work :D Pm me if you can ?

Thank You *A big Hug*

- Nidhi <3



I havent written any i am planning but after my boards on 25 or 26 march
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: federized2210


Prachi!
Thank u so much sis! Glad u liked it!! And fear not, u've got all the names correctly :)



Thank god i wrote everyones name correctly
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MitraAvinash


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Aww Prachi thank you so much doll! There I no 'bad' writer darling, just different styles of writing. I am sure that you'll write an FF sometime which will stun all your readers. 😃



Thank u so much i will try to write
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Posted: 11 years ago
👍🏼Holly Golly Molly! 👏👍🏼⭐️ Brace yourselves...lamba lamba comment coming your way!
First of all...thanks to Rads and Nidhi for having such a kick-ass idea of a combined ff!😃

@Nidhi:
We are all incomplete.

On the inside, we
are splintered, torn.

But we are eternal,
like the phoenix,

and, with our heads
held high, we fight on.

*sighs* I like this poem! Did you come up with this?👏

@Rads:
She crushed the piece of paper immediately, having various flashbacks..
their 1st KISS full of hatred...
their fights...
their never ending argument...
yet those times when they worked as a team..The Dream team...
and finally his Betrayal...striking a match she burned the letter!!
and shouted to one in particular...
" WHY now????
YOU SAY YOU LOVE ME??
YOU COWARD YOU DON'T EVEN HAVE GUTS TO FACE ME"

Whoa! This is angsty! Do you write well or what!!!👍🏼

@Zoya:
"It hurts when you Love someone deeply , but cannot have them in your arms"

"I love you Sanyukta!" he whispered only to be greeted by a slap.

"Issi bahane se usne mujhe chuwa toh sahi!" he smiled sadly while his tears had become unstoppable and he sank on the floor.

*sniffs noisily* Oi! Kitna rulaoge! Tissue khatam ho gaye!😭👏

Ahaan! @Arushi:
Tears were streaming down their cheeks. They were broken
because of such a beautiful memory they had recollected. She was broken because
she was reminded of the moment of his betrayal. He was shattered because he
would never be the reason for her happiness.

I loved their date...and their rain-wali kiss!☺️
And the last paragraph! Heart-breaking!💔😭

@Anu:

And Sanyukta realized that some scars were harder to eliminate than others. And this particular scar was dented deep, so deep that it disrupted her very being.

"What does forever mean to you?

When you couldn't even keep it true;

You said to me that u would forever be there;

But were those mere words, pulled out of thin air?"

Umm...holy shit. No kidding. The freaking beauty of your words!!!⭐️👍🏼👏

@Mitra:
No use quoting you! Your part is my favouritest! Lol,I probably sound like a suck- up now! You added a tinge of humor to the angst...and look! Your part is like a tikkhi mirchi for the vada pav! (Hope you understand the food analogy.)

👍🏼👏⭐️ To all the pyaari Sisters who wrote this! It was a wonderful idea to make this a combined ff! Ek hi thaali main alag alag swaad!

Congo to Nidhi, Rads, Anu, Arushi and Zoya!!!

P.S: KEEP ROCKING!
Edited by Galadriel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
just now read all the 5 parts
awesome updates
all the writers were mind blowing
hats off to u guys

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