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daffodils06

@daffodils06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

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Originally posted by: shruti46

😆😆

welcome but
i think blackmail is more apt word...

now blackmail looks lik a sweet word😃...so u mean to say tanu sugar coated the word blackmail as encouragement...if the end result of blackmail is this good u shud do it more often..

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Take_That

@Take_That

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Beautifully written...

Loved it!

Do write more often!

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: shruti46

😆😆

you dont know how much i have to push her,nevermind,,,finally efforts paid...

Good

kisi ke efforts to kaam aaye

you know after chating for so many months she revealed to me that she had written some poems..and Now I m being obliged with her poems for my fiction😃

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shruti

@shruti46

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: daffodils06
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now blackmail looks lik a sweet word😃...so u mean to say tanu sugar coated the word blackmail as encouragement...if the end result of blackmail is this good u shud do it more often..

OH YEAH I M DEFINATELY GONNA DO THAT..

sugar caoted words..🤣

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shruti

@shruti46

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

Good
kisi ke efforts to kaam aaye
you know after chating for so many months she revealed to me that she had written some poems..and Now I m being obliged with her poems for my fiction😃

absolutly,

i know she writes poem,but i like stories more..so..

my next mission...A SS from her..😛

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: shruti46

Hmm

keep your efforts on... I will mine😆😆

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

tanu...

sirf like press karogi ya kuchh bologi bhi

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Oh wow, what a lovely story , Tanu. The most perfect gift for a friend. I loved this story.

You have described so beautifully the strange mix of fear, anticipation, doubt, and excitement that an a girl goes through at the threshold of marriage. And then given her the most beautiful reassurance that it will be alright to step across the threshold.

I guess, this exactly what you felt when you put up this story on IF! You have done excellently well! Keep writing girl! 👏 👏

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Aww, Tanu, this was really sweet... A great beginning, into the world of writing... Keep it up... Thanks for the PM :)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

it doesnt matter no names were given
am gonna imagine it on my fav couples
not just one mind ya all of them
goes for them all
am glad you wrote this though
the apprehension of the bride to be
the love from her in laws
and care from her fiance
well that was all so cute

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