OS: In That Moment - Page 6

Originally posted by: shruti46

definately i will ask you,,still its long battle ahead..

but i thing i assure you,she is not getting away easily this time..

😆 u bet 😈 ... We r going after her with full force ...
P.S. Now where will u go Tanu 😈 😛

Originally posted by: Mou_farah

😆 u bet 😈 ... We r going after her with full force ...
P.S. Now where will u go Tanu 😈 😛

wow... this was tooo good and cute...

very beautifully written loved it to the core ...felt like a slow sensation😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

Tanuuu!!
A great progress...I used to read ur analysis comments on Anony's story and Now I m impressed with ur writing too...
Such a sweet and realistic story...I felt like It was a real life experience...
Well I have not passed thorugh that stage but I have seen many couples getting married in the same way...Some1 suggest a alliance,,families meet and if they find it suitable the alliance is fixed...and Girl esp middle class girl like us is left or rather thrown into a vortex of emotions...What to think,,how her future husband would be and what about her dreams...what would be in laws behaviour...And here Khushi was experiencing the same..But A little shopping trip with her In-laws ensured her that it would work...sweettt...
Awessooome...Though I felt it should b a little longer...But it was good in its own way...I found Arnav very sweet regarding Accidental touches part and his protectiveness in the end...*fun fact*His name was not mentioned anywhere..hehehe...I am happy that I was scrolling through forum when I stumbled upon this piece...
P.S I wish U good luck with ur writing...and thanx to motivating forces behind U...
P.PS I really love the title and banner...

😊 will edit my comment soon.

Tanu 👏
Very beautifully written.
Since he and she do not have names they can be anybody like you n me.

You are beautiful writer and it shows in your first attempt,
I would love to read more .
With name or without name.
Thanks a lot Tanu.
My Shrubbery thank you for the recommendation.
Take care.

hey Tanu beautiful...loved it!!! 👏

i was thinking to demand another o.s from di...after such a beautiful o.s rukna nai chahiye..😎

Originally posted by: shruti46

i was thinking to demand another o.s from di...after such a beautiful o.s rukna nai chahiye..😎

wat say farah😈

Obviously Shruti ... When it comes to stories we r always greedy ... & we r not satisfied with just one OS ... It's about time u wake up Ms. Writer & the inertia increases again 😉😆

awesome
lovely update🤗