OS: In That Moment - Page 5

wow its superb dear

kitni achi tarah se u explained the inner feelings of the couple who are going to be one through marriage their anticipation to be with eachother and their understanding without expressing verbally.


expecting more works from u tanu😉

Res :(

It was beautifuly written👏...a moment lots of girls can identify with.

Originally posted by: Anony_mous

Since I proof -read this piece, I know how amazing it is. No wonder people want you to continue writing Tanu :)

You seem to have a knack of capturing right emotions at the right places in your writing. I absolutely loved the part where discreet saree selection/ approval was going on. It is small small gems like this which infuse life into a story. Stolen glances, innocent or not so inncents brushes, dissipation of justified apprehensions regarding your new family, a man's protective instincts towards the female he deems as his, her realization of companionship and protection... you've captured all the beautiful emotions in this sweet little love saga which all girls dream of.

And for Bindu, this dream is coming true. My heartiest congratulations to her for the beautiful journey called marriage that she is embarking on.

PS: You should definitely write more :)

Originally posted by: shruti46

res

UNRES..

this was 👍🏼

i it..

constant blackmailing u made me🤢...

ushud write more🤗

otherwise🤬

Hi Shruti ... this is Moutushi ... I was telling Tanu that she should write more as she has written an amazing OS at her 1st attempt & she told me how u r after her to get her totally into writing stories ... If u want someone to join ur club I'm in😉 ... I was even thinking about opening some club or a petition " We want more stories from Tanu " 😆

Originally posted by: Mou_farah

Hi Shruti ... this is Moutushi ... I was telling Tanu that she should write more as she has written an amazing OS at her 1st attempt & she told me how u r after her to get her totally into writing stories ... If u want someone to join ur club I'm in😉 ... I was even thinking about opening some club or a petition " We want more stories from Tanu " 😆

Originally posted by: tanu3579

had it nt been fr u.. it wud hv been a very depressing piece to read anon.. i knw .. the suggestions u made, the thgs u md me realise fr writing it... hv made it wht it is.. :)

:) :)

Very beautifully written...loved it .u should write more.