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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
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Congrats Tanu for your first attempt in writing . I know you are awesome at poetry..and once I too told you to write but it was you who was little reluctant to write ..and see yourself ..your OS is perfect ..
chota sa hai but cute hai..It conveys all the feeling of a girl who is going to be tied in a relation with the person whom she does not know...whom she has met only once or twice...I can feel it more as I too have an arranged marriage😛😃

And for you... I thinks It's a beginning only...I m expecting some more from you..and I hope you won't disappoint me😉
I want to say thanks to Shruthi who blackmailed you emotionally😆😆
when some one do a bad act for some good result then that act automatically converts in to a good act..👍🏼

wish Bindu on my behalf for her marriage..I wish her a very happy married life ahead

banner is very good but font is little confusing
I was reading it in chat moment and I was confused
finally it was cleared from the title from the title given by you in the Thread
Waiting for more from you-Rashmi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Good attempt. I loved it Tanu.
But when I saw your pm I thought it was an FF. Sigh! NOW, I'm eagerly waiting for your FF.


Do put your pen to it.


The confusion you expressed here is so real. In fact I won't be sure even at the climax part. Lol!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You should definitely write more. I loved this :')
I like to read such stories and yours was such a hopeful one at that. The moment which instilled that faith in her, I'd known, that it will work out and it made me happy.
And thulasi_arshi, wish you a great new life! Congratulations. :)
Edited by Anupama. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
You have been able to put across the feelings of the bride and groom very beautifully.
It made so much more sense to leave out names because quite honestly it could have been any of our very own tale.
And all the best to the bride to be !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
now, this was a surprise and a pleasant one.
loved it Tanu di.
i loved how you described the anticipation a girl faces before marriage and her insecurities regarding her in-laws and her husband to be. i loved how her in-laws tried to make her at ease. and mostly how her to-be-husband paid attention to her and showed that she meant something to him.

it was short, and sweet and meaningful.👏
liked and loved it.
Do write more di.
Will wait for more stories from you.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
A very good first attempt. You have aptly portrayed the emotions of a girl when her marriage is fixed with a complete stranger.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sindhuramakrish

the first ever os that has spoken about the feelings of a to-be-bride in a simple yet elegant way. u have a different shade for ur writing. keep it up and try it on some more. will eagerly wait to read more of ur stories if u decide to write.



dont worry ,i will make sure of that😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

😆😆😆

Congrats Tanu for your first attempt in writing . I know you are awesome at poetry..and once I too told you to write but it was you who was little reluctant to write ..and see yourself ..your OS is perfect ..
chota sa hai but cute hai..It conveys all the feeling of a girl who is going to be tied in a relation with the person whom she does not know...whom she has met only once or twice...I can feel it more as I too have an arranged marriage😛😃

And for you... I thinks It's a beginning only...I m expecting some more from you..and I hope you won't disappoint me😉
I want to say thanks to Shruthi who blackmailed you emotionally😆😆
when some one do a bad act for some good result then that act automatically converts in to a good act..👍🏼

wish Bindu on my behalf for her marriage..I wish her a very happy married life ahead

banner is very good but font is little confusing
I was reading it in chat moment and I was confused
finally it was cleared from the title from the title given by you in the Thread
Waiting for more from you-Rashmi




😆😆

you dont know how much i have to push her,nevermind,,,finally efforts paid...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@shruti46
Now i understand wat tanu meant by encouragement...
I shud thank u too...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: daffodils06

@shruti46

Now i understand wat tanu meant by encouragement...
I shud thank u too...



😆😆

welcome but
i think blackmail is more apt word...
Edited by shruti46 - 11 years ago

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