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Posted: 11 years ago
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likes are increasing
not bad😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Anony_mous



Since I proof -read this piece, I know how amazing it is. No wonder people want you to continue writing Tanu :)


You seem to have a knack of capturing right emotions at the right places in your writing. I absolutely loved the part where discreet saree selection/ approval was going on. It is small small gems like this which infuse life into a story. Stolen glances, innocent or not so inncents brushes, dissipation of justified apprehensions regarding your new family, a man's protective instincts towards the female he deems as his, her realization of companionship and protection... you've captured all the beautiful emotions in this sweet little love saga which all girls dream of.

And for Bindu, this dream is coming true. My heartiest congratulations to her for the beautiful journey called marriage that she is embarking on.


PS: You should definitely write more :)


thank u so much Aji for your wishes 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruti46

i was thinking to demand another o.s from di...after such a beautiful o.s rukna nai chahiye..😎

wat say farah😈

Count me in too.
mujhe ye bahut tang karti hai to ab main hi demand kar rahi hoon
Tanu I need a big story ..
ghar me settle hone ke baad ...I want a new one from you😉😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This one was very very good but I am upset why was it so short?

The emotions were very well displayed and I enjoyed reading it :)

Thank you :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written tanu...
Could feel every emotion she went through... hesitant... nervous... her mums appreciation... relief of having understanding MIL... and most important him...
Loved her every thought about him... if he was admiring her secretly... she was highly aware of it... and that sweet gesture to save her from stranger was really cute...
Okay though you didn't name them... ill take them as Arnav khushi my favorite...
Will you continue this os..??
You must write more... will wait for more...
Thanks.. 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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waiting for the new concept
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Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
awsuummm first attempt :)
too gud!! d fears and den d trust was perfectly written :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved the whole set-up. It was unconventional yet alluring. You got me hooked from the first word.

You dealt with the whole arrange marriage concept so beautifully. It was portrayed so realistically but at the same time it had its own romantic and extra ordinary moments. The one that makes it so beautiful.

Loved the whole one shot. Amazing writing and amazing show of emotions. :)






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