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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sphobic

ya...maine pehle se hi read kiya tha na😆...bas comment karna tha...

vo toh maine bhi padha h..but alas...baad mai

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Monika Saxena

@monikasaxena05

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Superb nd amazing os..

U have portrayed a girl feeling so well..

Loved it😛

Keep on writing more..

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Sindhu Ramakrishnan

@Sindhuramakrish

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

the first ever os that has spoken about the feelings of a to-be-bride in a simple yet elegant way. u have a different shade for ur writing. keep it up and try it on some more. will eagerly wait to read more of ur stories if u decide to write.

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ARS24

@ARS24

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Lolz tanu di...loved it !!!!
Thank u for pm sruthi baby !!!
And all the best wishes for my bindhu 😃 😃

Edited by ARS24 - 11 years ago

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tanurocks

@tanurocks

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

it was beautiful my dear... hesitation, questions, hope, shyness .it all happens when u are going to start a new phase in ur life with a stranger ..and there is always a moment/a word/an incident in that phase which help us to believe in that person .and we will become sure about the decision to start our life with him.

and u wonderfully wrote about that..

well done

from one tanu to another tanu...😉

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thulasi_arshi

@thulasi_arshi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Finally i'm here to edit my res comment😳

i want to hug u tightly for this wonderful and beautiful gift 🤗🤗

thank u so much di😃 love u *kisses*

aww..your first work is my wedding gift😉😉

i'm the lucky girl right? * rising the collar*😛😛

she was still on bed..lazy girl ..like me😆😆

you had written well about girls emotions in the case of arranged marriage ⭐️⭐️

little blase,curiosity,in security,unknown fear,nervous,eagerness...

"The stolen glances, accidental touches"

her heart silently entreats to be with him*dhak dhak*😎😎

"she wished. To be with him, talking, sharing, just trying to understand each other, knowing more about each other"

"He was well aware of every single thing about her. Her restlessness, her urgent glances seeking his opinion, her hesitation, the way she shied away while walking in public, the way she wanted to speak to him,(exactly like he wanted too), and the way she was shy"

its so so adorable di❤️❤️

and that moment..i wish that every girl in her life would experience that precious moment😊

"They might not know each other yet, but they had all the time in the world to understand each other"

i cannot assure that every sasuma do that😆

who are the couples di?😉😉

k..i knew😳😳

lovely os di👍🏼

ps: thanks sruthi for blackmailing😉 & thank u Aji for encouraging tanu di to pendown😉and spo..beautiful banner yaar..👏👏

~bindhu😊

Edited by thulasi_arshi - 11 years ago

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Farha Naz

@farha_ipkknd

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

aww ,that was cute ..sweet, simple & warm .. 👏

Di , keep writting & write on ArShi haan ?

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daffodils06

@daffodils06

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

That was lovely...

Simple but yet so beautifully written...

U didn't even name the characters...it didn't matter...

We could imagine anyone in it..to b frank I thought the name Khushi and arnav wud com up any minute..but then towards the end I realised the name really doesn't matter..it cud b any one..not necessarily a couple on tv..it cud b any common girl and boy in an arranged marriage...

For a first attempt u hav done a fab job...

I shud thank anonymous for her encouragement that made u write...

And wishing ur friend a happy married life too..