An ArHi SS:Shaadi #3 *Completed, Moved to open blog* - Page 9

Sizzling update. Usually i am not a fan of the first person narrative style but I am loving it. Do keep the updates coming fast.

Oh god! The slow strip tease was great..It was nice to read about the accelerated heartbeats and tension in the room...Loved Manorama for her concern towards Arnav...NK is interesting while I feel sad for Aman...is Arnav behind this?

pure torture for both of them.. hahaha.. lets c how long they resist..

Fantastic update

well written,waiting for the update.

oh I feel bad for khushi but awesome update

Loved it you are an amazing writer ! Can't believe your previous thread got reported and shut down ! Some things are beyond Crazy and this is one of them!
Can't wait for the next chapter !

Part 1

My god juhi!!! I have never known a simple 'helping the other undressing scene' could be written so amazingly! The whole scene was so seductive! I mean khushi only unbuttoned his shirt n pants, nothing much! But they way you have written the scene, how one can not feel the underlying tension, the sexual undercurrents, the escalation of heartbeats! It was seduction in its purest form! It was simply superb! I know m seriously falling short of words here but it was one of those updates where you just dont want to say much!
You simply want to sit back, feel n enjoy!

M glad Arnav apologised!! It was much needed! N it was interesting to see how well khushi understood arnav!

I see begining of a beautiful friendship between khushi n Nk!! Hope it turns out that way!
I dont understand the exact feelings of lavanya towards khushi! Her chacter has this mysterious air about it! There is more to her chatacter thn it seems!

Oh khushi is fired!!!! Its gud, she can now pursue her PhD!!

Waiting for part 2!!

Part2!


My god!! What a an update
Really felt bad for khushi ya! I mean if a person had such thankless n ungrateful sister n mother then she is bound to feel that way! To have compromised her life for ppl who dont value her enough, anybody would feel that!
Actually she wouldnt have felt that hurt if that aman fiasco hadnt happened! Aman had already hurled so many accusations on her!
N after that she just needed to talk to somebody! Wen she turned to her family, they further aggravated her misery !
I loved how she opened up n shared her problems with arnav!
But the best part was wen she asks arnav if he was behind all that n instead of getting all angry or riled up , he calmly answered her query! This was really a high point for me! Coz nobdy Likes to be accused no matter how cool you are n to be accused wrongly will get better of anybody's anger! The way arnav responded simply made me fall of his character even more!

N i loved arnav's aritude regarding khushi's one kiss request! His take your kiss n leave attitude was so cool!! N Their kiss had so much of fire! It was so sexy!!
M sure in no time khushi will be sharing more than a kiss with him

Now coming to the note!
Its unfortunate what happened juhi n things shouldnt have taken this turn! Given that update soon' n congratulating on a new thread is also considered spamming then i believe we all are guilty of it! In this case i totally support your decision! We are your readers n will follow the story wherever it goes! I just request u to keep this thread open so that we can post our comments on chapters here! I mean if its not an issue fr anyone!
N no way m gonna stop reading this story or any of your stories because of these issue!!
We wholeheartedly support you in your decisions!