An ArHi SS:Shaadi #3 *Completed, Moved to open blog*

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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Loved part 1. Eagerly awaiting part 2.

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Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Ohhh i was so right !!! Ekdum Right !!

Seeing the change in title i all but screamed.

Juhi yaar...just tell me how do you do it ??? Just how ? How can you make each and every chapter so Freaking Amazing ??

It was plain marvelous. I loved the first part of the chapter. It was full of ArHi... and damn you girl ! The sexual tension , the undercurrents is like so so so powerful , it makes the readers breath hard.

In fact in each and every scene the air turns thick , just with the mere presence of you two protagonists.

Arnav oh boy , it seems like if he gets a chance , he'll tear her clothes and take her then and there . He want her more than i realized earlier.

And girl i have to give you a standing ovation for some of the dialogues and also their insinuations which are f**kINFANTASTIC.

The entire..erm...'Arnav Stripping' portion made me blush like an idiot dude ! It was like they were literally having sex without even touching each other that way.

And Khushi i have to say has got a saint like control.

The 'Zip' part was nothing if not excellent. I could so imagine Khushi gulp down seeing a certain part of his anatomy so excited.

She really has got some self control but i can't wait to see her succumb to the desire gradually.

And haha ! the morning scene was hilarious , especially the conversation between a certain Raizada and Gupta.

Arnav very well knows that she is affected too , but the way he teases her is a treat ! How much can one run away when the desire is so mutual.

I absolutely loved his one liners.

NK the character seems interesting...is he gonna play an important role in the story ? Can only wait and watch...

And then the happening in the office was quite a shock !

How can Aman consider Khushi to be responsible for all the mess ?? Seriously dude ! She agreed to stay back at his request and he's being such an ass now !

Hmph !

But really Juhi ! This was all totally worth the wait !!

You nailed it girl !

By the way , i'm doing Bhangra now because as for in my case , my Bhavishyavani was absolutely right.

Can't wait for Part 2 of this chapter !

Will be waiting palke bichaake 😆

-Nikita

Edited by Arshi-Nikita123 - 11 years ago

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Hai Allah!
I am sooo hyperventilating right now.
I am sooo i love with this story.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Juhi...completely loving this, both are so conscious of each other and ofcourse the attraction is so strong, I'm wondering how long till they give in!

Everything is so perfectly sketched, it's feel like I'm watching a movie!

Awesome Juhi, just awesome.

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

That was an amazinggg update!!!

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Congrats on the new thread Juhi!

Absolutely loved reading Part 1...a mixture of both warmth and passion, I liked how they still managed to talk about Arnav's past despite the buttons, pants, and the zip loll!! Im looking forward to where Part 2 takes off, especially, after Khushi getting fired for no fault of hers...Im already sensing more hubby wifey time happening =D.

and like most of us, I am also wondering how long will it take for this attraction to reach its peak and just given in, considering how strong it is! Especially, from Khushi's side...since we all know Arnav is already ready ;)

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sarahjac

@sarahjac

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Totally loved it, am in Lala land, and planning to stay there at least until I read part 2

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dima_a

@dima_a

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Congratulations on the new thread. ... can't wait for part 2...
I think there's passion between both of them and he can read her mind too..I think he the one how's destroyed aman work

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Arathy-V

@Arathy-V

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

What the hell is wrong with Aman?? How can he be so rude to khushi?? Hope Arnav has nothing to do with this deal loss..

Anyways Back to good stuffs ☺️..What a scene yaar...Arnav is such a shameless guy..his naughtiness seem to rub on Khushi now😃 Didnt think it will get that far..anyways cant wait to read the next update

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#110

-Edited

Thanks for using the banner in your story.. Really glad you liked it.

I so loved part one! It was fabulous. Will unreserve my full comment when Part 2 has been posted.

Don't forget my tips for the next chapter 😉

Parts 1 & 2 were such an enjoyable read! Loved part 1 with all the innuendo and tension between the two.. Part 2 was also interesting . Wonder what the deal is with Aman and Sheetal...

Loved the kiss and am glad Khushi isn't afraid to explore her feelings 😉 Can't wait to see what comes next.

As far as your blog, I look forward to reading your stories there. Under the circumstances, an open blog with a cc seems like the best solution. Nice of you to keep it open for everyone :-)

Edited by ssyahoo - 11 years ago