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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
I hope res is not a spam

Unres Part-1

Yes we got the teaser and we were expecting some fireworks but it was an explosion. What more can I say?
In the scene in the kitchen with her eating the chocolates I felt him kissing her albeit with his eyes alone - When would they actually kiss Juhi Ji, I really want the dam to start cracking😳 Arnav sharing with her the reasons behind his behavior , about the pills and helping thing, felt good. He may keep telling her that their marriage is not completely real but at the same time him sharing his thoughts with her indicates that he is giving her some sort of rights at least. The first step of marriage is getting to know each other. Normally people do that during their courtship time but as our couple is unique, so are their methods.
Khushi getting married to Arnav plays a big role in Akash's mother not only agreeing with their marriage but also taking part in arranging it enthusiastically. But I'm sure there is more to it.
I was breathless reading it, I don't know how Khushi handled herself in that close proximity!! I would have fainted right in Arnav's arms after it, may be his hand was injured so Khushi didn't faint.😉 Smart girl 😆 Khushi is a brave girl, she stood her ground even after helping with his pants. But she has a habit of getting foot-into-mouth situations. 😆
Manorama was angry on Khushi because she was gong on work when her husband needed her. Pheww!! I tell you Arnav is a very charming man, everyone loves him. 😳 But how could she tell Manorama that she is doing it for her safety alone. Last night's help hasn't gone well with her body. 😉 NK's curiosity is natural given how his boss has stayed away from marriage all these years. Obviously even if it's a contract marriage his wife has to have something special to make Arnav choose her.
Aman lost the contract and now Khushi is fired. Whenever something happens I feel it's Arnav's doing. So has he any hand (not the injured one) in this contract lose for Aman's company? Khushi is jobless and going to shift in a new home, so what will she do now? Study easily or will she be spending some more sleepless nights 😉😆

Part-2 ke liye hum aayenge EK BAAR PHIR!!! 😳

Unres Part-2

You know before reading part-2 I was thinking to drop in a comment that they kiss at least (like I said in part-1) or may be they can start backwards, I mean from south😳. I wasn't thinking like this before. All these gutter thoughts are a result of those lovely amazing poems I read on the last thread. ☺️
I love this selfish Khushi. One should do what they love an want to do. And what she wanted to do or still wants to do is no drugs. I mean yes the man in front of her is addictive and lethal but he is good and she better stays addicted to him for her whole life.
Aman is upset because his career is ruined before it could start and more than that it is the fact that he can't prove his family that he was right. Roadblocks do make people irritated and sometimes bitter. It is just like that for Aman but hey every closed room has an opening. He too would find his own if he looks around for it.
Payal's marriage finally got fixed but three months is a short time, isn't it? But it's a good thing. Khushi got what she wanted. Her being feeling bad is quite natural given that her sister told her to get married so that she and Akash can marry and now when it has got fixed Payal doesn't even feel the need to ask her before fixing the date and all. Is it because Akash's mother didn't give them any option but to agree? Even then Payal should have told that to Khushi. They are three in family and Khushi is her elder sister who has looked after the finances for so long. She isn't expecting much from them.
I'm so happy that Arnav made her feel special and wanted in his own way and kept her occupied so that she has no time to think about Aman or Payal. Manorama's approving gaze 😆😆
Khushi has finally found the man who understands her - her husband Arnav Singh Raizada.
She is quite innocent to think she can stop at one kiss. Arnav doesn't mince his words or his actions, I love that. I got red only imagining it hearing. Khushi ka kya hoga !!!! She can have fill of more of her cravings if she wants. 😉

About your note: Here or on blog I will be your reader hamesha!! I wish you didn't have to move it to blog though and some rules could be mended. But that's not in our hands. I'll wait for the CC thread and blog link. 😊

Edited by aquagal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Congrats for the new thread! and res.( This is not considered spamming na? i hope so)
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Part 1:
The start was well...😳. No more comments.
This khushi is straight-forward and is falling but rather slowly to Arnav's charms. From her uneasiness when he got injured to the previous night's incident have all effected her deeply.
So NK knows. Though i don't feel and problem with him since he seems friendly and you did mention Lavanya was there but there is a chance for the green eye monster to play his part. Don't you think?
And what shall i make of this Aman. I just feel Arnav is related to BioSys. And fired? I hope khushi is fine...

Its well over mid-night and you haven't updated the second part yet?

Part 2:
So. Arnav isn't related to BioSys in any way. I agree to every word Arnav spoke about Aman. Idiot Aman.
Dissapointed at Garima and Payal. How could they not even ask for her approval or could have just asked her view upon the marriage even after Khushi has done so much for them. Don't they know or are they just ignoring her as she is married and not their responsibility any more?No wonder Khushi is desolated.
Glad that Arnav understood her sorrow and tried to divet her mind. And they been close only for 3 weeks or so.
Didn't expect her to ask him for kiss. She did want something for herself but Kiss? Well, it was cute and adorable. Loved the way Arnav made her kiss him and kissed back only when she asked him to kiss her. Witty witty boy.

About the note:
I just come here for reading stories on Arshi and am not acquainted with the forum rules. I am ok with whether the story is available in blog or here as long a i get to read it. But have you thought about how we would make comments on the update in the blog?
***Do continue soon !
Edited by ...Iyla... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Congrats Juhi di :)

Well deserved...

I so love this story...

Desperately waiting for the update...as teaser has already made me impatient😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
ress
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OMG OMG OMG that was hot!
the UNDRESS part left me blushing like anything :D
I was fannibg myself 😆
poor khushi wonder how she is resisting that super sexy husband of hers :D
he is IRRESISTIBLE :P
both had sleepless night :P
aag dono taraf se badh rahi hain ;)
I wanted Khushi to leave Aman's job!
I don't think he is good guy!
he is definitely planning something or maybe not!
khushi's family didn't even bothered to ask her before finalizing Payal's marriage!
how could they?
if only they knew what khushi did for them!
she needs someone to shower his/her love on her & to give her some priority!
Arnav is already doing that?
love it how he diverted her attention from all her problems!
awww sweet husband he is :D
you really surprised me with their kiss!
OMG it was so unexpected :D
now I want some more *ahem ahem* moments you know :P
Edited by moumita03 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
RES like anything
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Part 1:

1. I need to drink water. That was HOT. And they did nothing. When they do do something, I can't even imagine how explosive that is going to be!
2. That was so worth the wait. I can't even remember what was there in the update, because all I was waiting for was the button scene!
3. Ok! I am calm now. A little. But hormones are all over the place still.
4. I sort of understand why he doesn't want to take medication. Especially when it is associated with such a painful memory.
5. So, I like NK now!
6. Manorama is adorable, giving Khushi the could shoulder! Hahaha!
7. Lavanya is still fishy. There is something off there.
8. WHY IS AMAN SUCH AN EFFING IDIOT?
9. Did a Jealous Arnav do this?
10. She had her hands on his p..pants!
11. I loved it J!
12. :D

Part 2:

1. So a jealous Arnav was not responsible. That's nice.
2. I'm trying to calm myself down, hell who cares, THEY KISSED!!!!!
3. I love this khushi! I really do! She knows what she wants and she goes and gets it. She isn't some damsel in distress waiting for a man to come and save her.
4. Can I also say how much I am not liking Payal? She seems spoiled and selfish.
5. Forget Payal, how can her mother also be so indifferent to what she is feeling? I mean the girl just got fired. And for no fault of her own may I add.
6. I LOVE Arnav! He understood her! I'm such a sucker for things like this!
7. Their chemistry is so explosive!
8. Ok, listen, is Sheetal a dog? Because then I may find it in my heart to like her. Currently, hate her. A lot. And we haven't even met her!
9. but, THEY KISSED!!
10. When will they do more?
11. Next update!!!!!! Soon!
12. Should I say that it was awesome? Or is that understood?
13. Because it was!
14. :D
15. Because 15.

Now coming to your note, thank you for sticking by your readers. there are very few writers out there who actually have the guts to stick by their readers.
It is extremely demotivating for a writer to be told that they are encouraging spam, when in fact they have no control over it. Also, I fail to understand what constitutes spam and I shall leave it at that.
Moving to a blog is a very smart idea! And thank you for continuing this unbelievably sexy story of two headstrong, independent individuals! I hate rona-dhona heroines!

Here is a big, bone crushing hug for you! *HUG*

:D
Edited by rith123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
W*F!!! someone reported your thread?
this is ridiculous!
jealous people!
congrats on the new thread Juhi *party party party* :P
Edited by moumita03 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Hola!
OUG!
... OUG is Oh your God...
Actually... I am reading from last 1 hour..
I was on break and then found this 3rd thread today...
The addictice this story is...
I was 2nd part..
And reading and reading...
A sharp gasp left Khushi's mouth!
Oye! But not only Khushi's mouth from mine too...
Coz I realized that That part was just half! :p
gosh! I am liking it more and more..
Coming to the note: :p I really dunno what to say.. I am a reader and being the respect I get from My lovely writers... I do post poems or pics. Me toh going to stop this...
I don't want this with My writers... Bas!
Not making a new post.., i want something fast in ur story is..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
yet another awesome update!!
W*F reported ur thread 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Loved part 1 Juhi!!! Poor Khushi sheis falling for Arnav, who can resist him right😉
I can see the NK and Khushi are going to be good friends in the future!!!!

Arnav might put the money in Aman's company so that Khushi would be happy!!!!

Cannot wit for the next part!!!!! Please update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
For part 3rd section 1:
Aisi help kon chahta hai Bhai!
I had not read teaser about which Pooji was talking...
That scene was.. Oh!
I was not prepared so didn't knew what was coming..
That scene.. When Khushi was stuck at zipper...
My eyes go round and I stopped reading..
Took a deep breath to come around!
Not Like Khushi, I would say Never stop doing this!
Giiving us scenes like this.. :p
Oh! As Now Khushi is married to a millionaire, Akash's mother is showing her bhukhines shamelessly! :D
Millionaire se yaad aaya...
What is this about Aman?
Why the hell was he fussing so much about Khushi's marriage?
Who is that company's owner, Arnav?! Hein! :D
will come back to read section 2..
Good luck and Take Care..

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