An ArHi SS:Shaadi #3 *Completed, Moved to open blog*

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cosmina

@cosmina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

i'm sorry for whatever spam-thing is ,because they really don't know what are they missing! the blog ideea is a great one,but ,please made an open one ! thank you!

i love the new Kushi,i love how she try to make something for herself,and i love the support Arnav give her ,either in proffesional or personal problems.

please don't forget the blog link,i just wait to read further this story!

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Aparna Gopal

@aparnasvj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Fantastic...loved it... eagerly waiting 4 next part...
I think ur r8 in blog decision...

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Chapter three part two.

Fantastic update

These two lines said all about khushi

"I want to be someone's top priority. I want to be the center of someone's thoughts"

While reading this update i felt pain of loneliness and ignorance she bears in her life. I think khushi shared a very close relation with her father who used to pampers her and treat her as princess but his death ends all. I think khushi was forced to do her duties as an elder to provide every necessity to her family. Her story is very similar to that of Arnav. He also started his life from scratch and himself covered the journey to fame and success.

That's why when khushi told about her problems to him he made her busy so that her mind won't get divert and upset her more. I love Arnav for this.

Isn't she now her top priority and center of his thoughts. Though the reason is a little different i mean they are attracted towards each other n share an intimacy.

Love the way khushi trusted Arnav and spoke out her heart to him and he patiently listens khushi's whining n disappointed. whatever happen. her being fired from the job, was in her favors but she didn't wished for the way they occur.

I understand Aman, he has started his business investing his every single penny. That's a huge responsibility and he won't tolerate any mishap or loss to his dear company so he took out his frustration on khushi n blamed her because he is coward and can't accept that he can't even take care of one news which leaks out showing his incapability handling his business especially his PR section. He is still learning n will learn a lot.

khushi asked for a kiss to Arnav. She wants to feel the effect on the desires which have awaken in her and who would be better than her husband who is already willing to share more than a kiss. khushi now don't want to miss a thing especially after the cold behavior she felt from her family. She think she wasted her time for them who were capable of handling everything on their own. Now she wants to explore everything.

I hope next chapter will reveal something about Sheetal.

Can't wait for the next week to read more.

Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago

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IDatIF

@IDatIF

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#234

Finally Kushi has realised her importance

Aman behaviour is bit weird

Agree with your decision .plz don't stop writing on arhi .

I m not in ur pm list as I have recently started reading your stories so can u plz pm the blog link .thanks and another thanks for writing on arhi

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beenish

@beenish248

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Di ,I am with you in this decision of yours ..

I will love to read on Blog too ,

Amazing Update di . :)

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famiya

@famiya

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Amazing update

Loved it

Please send blog links for next updates

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anjubua

@anjubua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Lovely update, once in a while

its good to be selfish especially

when you are not being appreciated.

Its going to be proper shaadi soon

Arnav will show her where all th feelings

leads to.

Having a blog is a good idea cos

you've got all your work at one place.:-) :-)

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Omg. ...loved the update. .

poor khushi...she had to listen to all the nonsense from aman that too when she is not at fault. ..also I feel so bad for her that her mother and sister have sidelined her so soon...I can imagine how lonely she must be feeling ..

j guess all the things piled up together for her to ask arnav for a kiss. ..and what followed was complete magic...

I loved the way arnav taught her about the kiss...leaving her craving for more

and about your note...I completely agree with your idea of moving to the blog. ..it will give you more independence to write the way you want and also the readers will be free to express their love for your fictions. ..

continue soon on the blog