An ArHi SS:Shaadi #3 *Completed, Moved to open blog* - Page 25

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Andro thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update :) started reading recently. Would love to read more of ur stories.
Edited by Andro - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Firstly, thanks for getting rid of Aman.
Hope he has permanently disappeared from Khushi's life.
But I do have a feeling he'll turn up again in her life (and ours too) like the bad penny he is!
My, my! Could anybody else make that whole undressing business as erotic as you did!
You had my poor heart thumping .
If I turn up again in hospital its your fault!😉
What is with Khushi's family?
She did so much for them and this is how they pay her back?
Wasn't her opinion needed on the marriage alliance?
Or when they fixed the wedding date.
Loved how Arnav is concerned for her and tries to distract her attention.
And then SHE went and asked him for a kiss.
And what a kiss.
Waiting now to see how dhe deals with ensuing emotions.

Regarding the note, I just fail to understand the rules about spamming.
This is a public forum and shouldn't the powers that be, be happy that they have so many active members on the forum. Isn't it a sign of the popularity of this forum that so many people are active on it. Bad and offensive language should definitely be banned. But a little bit of friendly fun and games is offensive? And do whom? Why do people have nothing better to do in their life then report so called spamming on certain threads. Get a life, people.
I will follow your writing whether its on a blog or here on IF!
Just keep writing and don't be disheartened by all this hullabaloo over nothing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I don't think I like to comment before giving my bekar opinions.. Here I give you an applause for considering to move this to a blog. Much as much I got despised with the rules of this forum I would like to thank this forum to have given me opportunity to read some of the best stories in my life. I myself had got a chance to explore my little ability to pen down a few stories. Leaving aside the gratitude; something which I don't understand is how a thread is being reported for spamming when the excellent readers take out their time to display their creativity through poems and stuff discussing the story. Requesting for an update is not a crime I believe but closing down and posing harsh rules when some people among the writers just start a thread with just one update and the rest of the thread showering congratulations on the new thread. With the sheer consistency showed by JUhi on her updates this was just a bit too much i believe. Many leave the story hanging in between; still making their readers wait. I apologize to my readers as well as I had been forced to delay my updates now a days..

Well .. No offense meant to anyone here.. I would say this forum would be missing its one of the rarest gem of authors from their crown. I would be more happy to comment( & spam )in your Blog J (whenever I get time of course😉)

Back to the story - I missed commenting on 2 B.. Our boss was hell bent to impress his wifey with the new house and his skill. but man, he was hit by reality which smacked his head saying "Your are not Rajnikanth Thalaiva .. dont try to show off as hero" 😆 Arnav is all the more showing his self restrained character to her - one which every husband and wife would like to know each other after marriage. While he voluntarily makes her aware of his own character he on the other hand gets hold of hers without a word from her mouth. Part 3 B had the wonderful exploration of their desires pooling inside especially Khushi's. When she herself thought she holds nothing in this relationship and gets herself mechanical towards him, her own self ditches her principles. The discomfort clouded by her desires gets diverted as she finds the truth that NK knew about their marriage. So she found a nice friend in NK and a staring body guard in Lavanya..
part 3 B - Aman's furious out burst wasn't really an after effect of his deal loss I think. He wasn't very much happy with her marriage with a billionaire which might be a real reason. As she had thought it right to leave that place which doesn't deserve her service anymore she gets more hardened by the feelings from her sister's proposal. Its something like sadness strikes at us together at one time making us squirm in the pool of loneliness. Who else can heal that pain.. The unknown womanizer Jerk found it in one split of a second about her which gained some remarks for him in her good books. I like the way he tried to protect her, console her and made her comfortable. Finally madam has started to think about her leaving aside all the priorities she had imposed till date. And that cute moment was really romantic while I would like to appreciate the self control displayed by the womanizer jerk.. Now what next.?? will wait for it.

Uff did I write this much long 😲? Does length count for spamming? Never mind! 😎

ENjoy your holidays and looking forward for your scrap 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely chapter Juhi... Would love to read more 😊
Since I am fairly new here, I don't know much about the rules;
I would really appreciate it if you would do whatever is required to do for me to read the next part of your story. Please let me know if I need to do anything.
Hoping to read lots of excellent stuff from you.
Madhuri

Edited by Maprani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Juhi I just want to say that you're an amazing writer and that I've loved each and every one of your stories. I most certainly will be reading your work whether it be on a blog or on IF. Like so many have said before me, you care about your readers enough to write on an open blog. Thank you.
I'm completely baffled as to how asking you to update is not right so long as it's not aggressive hounding. Your readers care about you and love reading your stories - so where is the issue here???

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing part2 of chapter 3.khushi finally free of the job.arnav being considerate towards khushi was lovely.totally enjoyed the interaction of arnav nd khushi.so sweet of khushi asking a kiss from arnav.wonderful update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 3 is mind blowing
Khushi struggling to help Arnav undress since he is injuried
Very hot
It made my breathing acclerated

NK sounds like an interesting guy
I hope we get to see more of him

Aman is angry for losing his dream so he's blaming Khushi since her leaving was the catalyst for his downfall
Maybe Arnav can help him silently

I liked how Arnav kept Khushi busy to uplift her mood and he made her his number one priority
Her mother and sister didn't even ask her if she is free for the wedding
That's sad since she married Arnav for them

I have respect for Khushi's guts in asking for a kiss
The way you described things I don't think any girl would have been able to resist Arnav


Your note
I will follow this story to your blog since I love your stories
You're an amazing storyteller and I'm sorry this happened to you
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Posted: 11 years ago

Juhi, lovely update!😳👏

Weird things happen, don't be disheartened! Will see you on blog!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
I had to take breaks to read the undressing scene... 😳 My, my that was hot and they were not even touching..
And the kiss... sorry sweetie... I don't remember rest
Edited by SirenMitra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Great update Juhi!!!

I'm glad Khushi is taking a step towards her happiness and satisfaction. She has done all she could for her family and now it's her turn, which is anything but selfish. There's a very thin line between self-love and being selfish..and Khushi is just prioritizing the former.
It's really quite hurtful that Payal and her mother didn't ask about her availability. Both are too self-absorbed at the moment.

Arnav is a thorough gentleman. He put a stop to Khushi's exploration thinking that it may have been done on a whim..but the matter is different altogether. Khushi wants more ☺️
Plus he keeps his promises. I had doubted that he was behind BioSys' withdrawal, but thankfully, it wasn't.

Loved the update! Looking forward to chapter 4! :)

Posting on a blog and having a CC is a great idea! I have no qualms whatsoever. Sometimes the rules do get too suffocating and very incomprehensible. And I wholly support your decision 😊

Take care! :) x


Edited by .sobtian. - 11 years ago

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