An ArHi SS:Shaadi #3 *Completed, Moved to open blog* - Page 22

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Posted: 11 years ago
i dont know what to say, that was one fantbulous update!just terrific!!!
the first part, omg...i guess am still hyperventilating...it was so sensual and hot!!! the tension between them was so palpable...i could literally feel it :D

well, am kinda intrigued by the characters... nk is friendly but there is something about him that makes me wonder if there is more to him...
aman was a little too much angry and rude...
lavanya is also a little mysterious...
and who is this sheetal...who crops up everytime!!!!
and well, is arnav having to do more than what u r showing us in all this... alas, i donno n ill wait for u tell us :D
and now that khushi has tasted the forbidden fruit how can she stop herself...!! ;) and happy tht apart from the physical attraction they seem to care for the other in someways!!
am still under the rlm of the updte...

wherever u go, ill follow :D be it blog or IF
but its unfortunate that u had to do this because someone out there is jealous of ur work.. sigh!!
Edited by aarrsshhii - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...

Where to start?? The whole update was way too much sensual... Arnav can set fire through his simple stare... The scene in the kitchen was awesome... And combination of belgian chocolate and Arnav was too delicious... 😉

I loved that Arnav apologize for his earlier behavior and gave her explanation too when he didn't need to... He cares for her... His actions shows more than anything... When her own is taking for granted, he is the one who understood her...Loved them...
The zipper part was mind blowing...

Aman behaved like a TRUE jerk... Blaming khushi for his loss when she was helping him... May be his situation didn't let him think and he choose the easy way that is to blame her... But how did the news of khushi leaving reach their clients??? No one knew about it other than Aman , khushi and Arnav???

The last scene was awesome... Finally khushi submitted to her desire... What started from just one kiss, would surely lead them to their ultimate destination... I just loved it dammit!!!

PS... We have to no problem in reading your stories on blog... We will follow you where ever you go...😉
Edited by sincereme - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Absolutely Marvelous writing...
The narration is amazing...
Sad to hear abt the closure of ur thread...hope you cud continue hear on IF...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Just loved this update! As always awesome!!

And i am mad at the jerk/s who reported the thread! such jealous losers!!

anywya will look forward for the next parts.. i am not much of a fan of blogs.. but i can totally understand where u r coming from.. so yahh i will be there to read it all up in the blog 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just started reading it. Loved it :)
Please do pm me the blog link for the next update :)
Sent u a buddy request :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow lovelieee update!!!!!!
Loved how Arnav could read khushis face n how caring n considerate he was for khushi.
Loved how khushi wants to think about herself at the moment and is trying to give in to her cravings n desires.
Their first kiss was so sensual n sizzling that apart from Arnav n khushi it too left us craving for more n more😳
It would be the toughest job for Arnav to maintain such self control after their desire filled moment n not push Khushi further than her request. Completely adore him for this.
Waiting for next update...
N sorry to hear abut the spam incident. Only for a particular immature n dumb reader who could not even locate a simple thing as an index (which needs a basic common sense to find )all the others have to bear the consequences of not even commenting for an update which we are always super excited for... With u in whatever you decide for your stories but don't stop this beautiful ARHI journey of ours together...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love ur stories too much. Pls give me blog link. Don't refuse pls pls pls. Have read all ur stories by now. I am comparatively new here but u r one of my favourites. Pls pls blog link.
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Posted: 11 years ago
The recent incident was really sad..wherever u want to update..it's all ok with us..
back on the update...that was fabulous update...very close to reality...the way khushi was feeling its realistic...and i'm amazed the way he distracts khushi keeping her busy..they r perfect couple...and i'm glad that their relationship progress gradually...i like it the way u write khushi's thoughts that she wants to be someone top priority list...beautiful...so realistic..superb update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice chapter...Khushi is in a dilemma..
I was relieved that you did not make her take a decision she would regret the next morning.

As for the blog, do ask the DT what exactly spamming.
So, that we'll know clearly what spamming is and what commenting is.
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Posted: 11 years ago
With all due respect, dear mods please read between the lines as I raise my hand. I'm seriously disappointed by this trifling issue. I'm pretty sure some incompetent, complexed writer would've done this just to generate mass discontentment and chaos. They probably couldn't stand how you were getting all this feedback from your readers. Especially when you're so humble with your work, as opposed to many snooty writers who take their work away to private blogs and threaten readers for comments. Like hello? Your writing skills should speak for themselves which is why many of us who are not regular at IF still wait out on your stories and are forced to make comments because the writing is so fabulous!
Please don't let these mediocre minded folks ruin your vacay. We don't want it to over shadow your writing either. Getting back to the story, glad things are finally steaming up baby! I just don't understand, wasn't it Arnav himself who wanted no strings attached to begin with. Why is he regretting his decision? Why is pining for more and making all those caustic innuendos. He clearly doesn't WANT to feel anything with her and keep it temporary. As for khushi, she's getting bold. Please let her keep her dignity and not ask for it again. Arnav has to get off his high horse and endorse with all his heart, mind and soul his newly wedded wife.

Happy writing. Really but you're too sweet for doing all that (blog and all) just to keep us satisfied. You could've just walked away too. A million thanks!!!!'

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