An ArHi SS:Shaadi #3 *Completed, Moved to open blog* - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update👏
you r an amazing writer and i came across this story and i loved it.
khushi have done too much for her family but they are taking her forgranted.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi prt 2 is amazing...i really felt sad that khushi's mother and sister are being selfish about themselfs...but arnav in a bling of a moment he identified that khushi is sad...i really wish khushi should be selfish...this selfishness will be benifit for both arnav and khushi...the kiss was mind blowing...even he doen't want to stop he stopped jst for khushi...
really waiting for nxt chapter...
and about ur blog decision...i will be with u whatever decision u take...i will follow u anywhere whether its IF or blog...all the best for the blog...love u...
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a great chapter 3! Wow, I feel so bad for Khushi, she's in some ways so lost. IT's funny she's found her life in terms of her professional path, but it's so heart breaking to read about her situation not only with Aman, but more so with her family. It's unfortunate, it's obvious she's such a loyal and smart woman, hopefully her family realizes just HOW much she has done.
In terms of your note, thank you for the open blog; sorry to read about all the management that you as an author have to do. Thanks for continuing to write! It is appreciated.
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Posted: 11 years ago
😡its v hurtful what happened,but i am v hapi that u will be cont shadi and giving open links,looking forward...my opinion ,wasnt khushi too emotional ya depressed asking him for a kiss?? pm me plzz
Edited by nataliya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update Juhi...
feeling so bad for khushi...why they have suddenly forgotten her,...??
what the hell is wrong with that aman..??.. why he is screaming like that..??..hope what arnav told is truth ...
arnav was helping her by askinng her help,,,how sweet...i like that..
that kiss...wow...sure...she will need more...who will stop with one..???😉 ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Comment updated for Part-2 on Pg10
Thanks 😊
Edited by aquagal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Don't worry we'll follow u on the blog.
About ur story:
All I want to say is 'Go Khushi Go for ur dreams. In the end what u make of ur self matters. What ever u did for others is best forgotten.

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Posted: 11 years ago
That was fantastic update...
I really loved the way story is progressing...

Poor Kushi, she was blamed without her concise. How can Aman think Kushi is responsible for project loss???

And coming to Kushi's family... i didnt like Payal behaviour from initial only.. She is too selfish and she wants her happy and for that she can do any thing and will blame Kushi for that...

How can her monther forgot that for Payal's marriage is happening because of kushi's sacrifices.

Fort the first time kushi did a right thing for listening her heart not than her mind...


I must say Arnav is a gentleman and he is taking care of kushi so well... Hats off to his will power, he is backed off from Kiss though he knows he can do more but he respects kushi's decision.

Regarding blog, yes i am agree with you and i will be with you in this matter.. Its a good idea to open chat club not only for Shaadi story but also for all your future stories...

But i have a request, when ever if you update or write new stories, please do pm me through If or personal mails... It will be helpful for some people like me to follow your stories.


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Posted: 11 years ago
Juhi I felt your decision was quite apt and perfectly right in the light after the whole 'spam' fiasco... you're a very strong person, and that has been shown thru' this decision... I had seen similar things happen in Sem's 'The Same Coin' and now here... i really do not understand what is the problem with freedom of exprerssion...or is it just a word... a baseless fundamental right... These things force an author out of IF, and then it it is these so called 'reporters' again compalining that stories are no longer available on IF...
Kudos to your decision 👏, and looking forward to see you on the blog... and also looking at the number of followers you have, i just thought you could have taken this decision earlier... where i think you can save a lot of time you would have generally invested by sending PM's and so on by just introducing something as simple as a Follow button...buts it never too late... i feel sorry that you had to go thru' this whole painful ordeal; when you should have writing an update and enjoying your vacations in India...

coming to the update... i liked it a lot... the feeling of being wanted by any human, to be on someone's priority list is always desired by everybody... and the same thing is happening with Khushi... i just feel, she should be a little more alert about these new feelings and not give into them, because later in time when they may not be together, these memories may haunt her and be reason for some greater pain... but then again one should live life as it comes, coz in the end, the good or bad things define a person and make the person stronger...

one thing i wanted to point out from the previous chapter 1, is that when the clause from the contract were being discussed for approval, I did not expect Khushi to ask for the fidelity of Arnav (not sleep with any one else) during the marriage course... coz they are living in a marriage of convenience... and if the partner seeks some comfort from someone else, it should have harldy bothered the other...i just found it a little confusing for me...

having said all that, as I say with all my authors, I am here to enjoy the ride, and I will go with the flow... keep writing Juhi
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Posted: 11 years ago
updated my comment on page10

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