An ArHi SS:Shaadi #3 *Completed, Moved to open blog*

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starsarun

@starsarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

2nd part was very much intense..
Aman fired Khushi and then Payal's rishta...
That was so much for Khushi to handle..
I am glad that Arnav helped her from coming out of the thoughts.
Even he was that sucessful that Khushi's mind again diverted to last night..
At end I would say tension chal rahi hai!
About Note: I am in Dilemna now. U r not in my buddy list coz even I don't when I want a break from IF... I am in last semester of graduation naa...
I don't chatt club bcoz of a horrible incident..

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Mani

@DirtyDancing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

That was incredible...the kiss litrally blew me off.
Though asr cleared himself out of aman thing i still find it fishy...so khushi wants to 'explore' things but it is a temprory marriage i don't know where it will lead...but i need to say this...go go khushi before your sane senses kick in...afterall how long u can stand the s#@y asr...
Well for the blog thing i will welcome ur decesion bcoz even i dont like people pestering the authors for spamming.

Edited by sarun22 - 11 years ago

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

I am so glad to see Khuhsi finally thinking about herself! A physical combustion between the two was always inevitable but didnt want it to happen as a helpless Khuhsi unable to control against Arnav's onslaught! But love the way you made it all about Khuhsi's choice...

I said that before as well - Khuhsi doesnt realise but even this marriage was about pleasing her Amma and Payal and not really selfish.

What a terrible mother and sister to have! Not about checking the date but in general about forgetting to include her.

The least Payal could have done was to thank her. I hope she figures Akaash a nd his mom were not worth hankering after! A woman who agrees to get her son married off to someone just because her sister has married name & money, and, a guy who allows his mother to do that - are both best avoided. Instead both mother & daughter are rejoicing ? :-(

Strangely in all of this, despite his T&C for marriage, Arnav comes across as the nicest person in her life!

Terrible news about the bog though... I mean not terrible about opening a blog but the reasons for doing so.

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Unreserved Part 2 and my note about your note J!🤗

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/101485189

(Clarification no 2 for the reporter of Shaadi thread 2: This isn't Spam, this is me letting the author know that I have edited my first post regarding the update just incase she misses it! Please refrain from reporting this post as Spam because this writer is moving her work away from this forum anyway so there is absolutely no need for you to worry about her having more pages of comments than you.😡)

Oh and J I love the way you are portraying both Arnav and Khushi in this FF! ( This is just incase my comment is still considered spam!😉)

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Loved the update. Glad Khushi has decided to be selfish and do something for herself. Intrigued about the sheetal situation.

I agree with your decision. It seems to be a case of red tape gone wild. I don't really see the need for you to tell readers to stop spamming. But I'm happy to read the story where ever you update it.

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adhu11

@adhu11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Sometimes feels bad for khushi.her family is not understanding her

Loved the way arnav helped khushi in getting out of her stressful thoughts

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jolybudy

@jolybudy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Wonderful update. power packed as always 😊

Can understand Aman's feelings but it wld have been gud if he had been a bit more courteous having known Khushi's nature and character in general.. but gud that Khushi can now delve into her PhD word full fledged 👍🏼

That undress scene.. OMG ☺️ no words to tell how you have worded it..

Arnav luving him with every update.. how caring he has been.. just by having a look at Khushi's face he is able to understand she is goin thro something .. that was simply super cool.. 😎

Kisss.. cld the scene have been described any better at all ??? a BIG NO ...

Part3 is wonderful..

Pls do send across ur blog link.. wanting to know more on this SS

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

juhi u r sweet heart ...i can feel ur emotions through ur note...love u loads and ur stories too...and will always be there where ever and when ever u going to post in future ...

chap 3 more than awesome...the tiredness or sadness due to closure of thread two and after effects of it...trust me chap 3 brings me out of that gloomy effect some how...its awesome update...there moments together written beautifully...loved the way khushi has started responding to her own needs...i mean listening to her body first time :)...

i pity for khushi as she has done alot for her family but the loneliness she is having in return from her constant support towards others is heart breaking...happy to see arnav understanding her pain...her inner turmoil...but just hoping that arnav never breaks her trust otherwise she would be total lost soul...aman reacted so badly mayb he was having some feelings towards khushi...as i wanted to give benefit of doubt to arnav...mayb he is right in saying he has nothing to do with khushi professional commitments...

hyeee loved their first kiss :)...its written beautifully...me falling for arnav fast :)...the way he told her kissing requires much more than lips...teeth tongue...hehehe too good ...over all the update brought big smile...i am impressed by ur all styles of writing ...love u and will always be there with u ...love

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indu9

@indu9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Juhi,

I am sorry that you had to go through so much in the past couple of days. It's really sad! I hope that you come out of this soon and start your blog with all your beautiful works! Can you please PM me too whenever your blog is ready?

Coming to the update, I must say I have thoroughly enjoyed it! I was smiling through out even though I am no more a teenager! Loved the undressing part! Kudos to you for creating such beautiful stories with wonderful ideas! I some how feel Arnav has something to do with aman's project. Felt a bit sad for khushi ...however this bit of sadness made Khushi selfish and she did the most wonderful thing...go ask Arnav a kiss! How interesting can this get? I can't wait to see their future encounters...😳. Wonderful and brilliant update! Can't wait to read more!

Please don't be disheartened and please cheer up and give us more and more of your masterpieces!

Love you,

Indu

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#190

It's sad Juhi that you have to resort to this ... But respect your decision... Pls do pm the blog link... As always... Am an ardent follower of your stories ... Amazing update as usual!!!!! Chapter four already looks so interesting n promising! Hope she let's go of the one-kiss rule!!!!😉

Eager to read more!

Edited by smile1412 - 11 years ago