Sandhir FF: Of Mosquitoes and Madness (Chp 4 - 22/3)

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Pri! Pri! Pri! Pririririri! Tum kaisi ho? xP

Okay, I shall stop my bakwaas and come straight to the update! :D I had very lovingly typed out the longest comment I've probably ever typed, but it contained a very long word beginning with "supercali..." you get it! xP

So, I am now very lazy to type out such a long (and awesome) comment again, so I am just going to say that I have noticed every bit of this update but am just to lazy to comment again xP

The flow of your story, the hysterical battle of words that goes on in Randhir's head, the many transitions in Randhir's thoughts, Jiggy's hilarious change in behavior in front of Kaustuki and the very well portrayed Kaustuki won me over! :D

I shall promise a comment as awesome (and funny, even if I say so myself xP) as the one I had typed on your next update! I will be very careful and not use the same word again! Basically, this is an incentive for you to give us a quick and longer update! :P

Yes, you must explore the other characters as much as you like :D

Tell your Randhir that I find him delectably devilish and royally ravishing (notice the alliteration xP)!

Waiteeeng for the next update!

Lots of love always! :D

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-silhouette-

@-silhouette-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

The range of emotions I go through while reading your FF is too damn high. :p

The transition from one emotion to another is fast but not rushed or abrupt. The range of emotions you portray for each and every character is beautiful and it reflects onto the reader, at least onto me. The nicknames she gave him were hilarious and the way he thinks, 'Broken, I broke her'. Ahhh. Trust me when I say this, I was jumping on the bed and then I pillow was wet. :p

You need to write your own book, your writing style is that good!

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Vidushi

@-Kisha-TBP

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Read all chapter in one go...

Hands down u r such a flawless writer...👏

I wish i was able to write like you ... Love your writing style , neither too complicated , articulate as well as crisp..👍🏼

The one liners are amazing too.. 👍🏼

Update fast.. i will be waiting...❤️

(runs to read all your works)

😊

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Read in a go

Brilliant

You are damn good

So loved it totally

Sandhir are so perfect

And your writing style is superb

Update soon

Luv

Mahima

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asyshi

@asyshi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Superb!
Its an amzin story n venturin into oder chars would b fun!
thnx for d pm n plz update soon :)
Hope ur exams went well :))))

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.Perspective.

@.Perspective.

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

I am mesmerised by your writing!:)

I read all of this just now and it is just flawless.Seriously,your style of writing is something commendable--it makes reading such a pleasure!There are so many things that I adore about your work.First of all,the flow--so unbelievably smooth that I never get to notice the transitions from one emotion to the other.Amazing!Secondly,I love all the figures of speech you use--the alliteration,euphemisms and all of that.Somehow,that makes it more of a treat to read:)And you come up with the weirdest metaphors--and those make me laugh,I love them too.Thirdly,you bring out all the emotions in the spectrum so well--humour,sadness,anger.And the best part is that they are so well-balanced---now i understand what they say about an emotional roller-coaster:)

And I'm sure lots of people would have told you this--but you have a too-good-to-be-true vocabulary--i wish I had such mastery over English:-P

On the whole,you are an incredible writer!I would love to read anything that you write:)Reading this was such a wonderful experience for me--It was the best and least stressful part of today:-P Thank you for the PM.

Edited by .Perspective. - 11 years ago

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Sukriti

@sukriti11196

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

oye hoye...

you finally updated

MOSQUITOES and MADNESS..

was waiting desperately for it..

and my my the patience has paid off..

loved the superbly awesome chapter..

the different emotions of RANDHIR

GUILT

COCKINESS

ANGER

DEFENSE in the form of REPLYING BACK..

versatile hai bhai apna banda..😉😉

and

SAYUNKTA ke baare main toh kya kahe..

RANDHIR aa raha hai DRAMA QUEEN ko manane...

gear up SAYUNKTA...

waiting for the next...

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Priya Das

@TheDreamyKid

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: shiningstarz
AHA.
AN UPDATE.
FINALLY 😛

do you really need me to tell you how much i loved it ? BECAUSE I LOVED IT.
majorly because it was a Randhir centric update. Reading his confused and dazed thoughts was funny😆
And Guilty conscious toh he is, toh DUH he will go behind Sanyu to beg, plead and apologise xP
*too much drama* sorry. *coffee alert* 😛

acha update soon maate.
Ek kaam kar, pehle update IMPULSE 😉

love,
Pix
(Your biggestestestest fan)

Sahanaaa!! Next updatewa will be Impulsewa :P

Pakka. But! Only if you email me something that you're supposed to? Remember? *nudge nudge*

You drink too much...OOPS, I mean too little coffee. xD

Aap and aapki coffee ko mai insult karu? Ramramramramram xD

Next Accounts hai btw. Padh liya? xD

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Priya Das

@TheDreamyKid

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue
Pri! Pri! Pri! Pririririri! Tum kaisi ho? xP
Okay, I shall stop my bakwaas and come straight to the update! :D I had very lovingly typed out the longest comment I've probably ever typed, but it contained a very long word beginning with "supercali..." you get it! xP

So, I am now very lazy to type out such a long (and awesome) comment again, so I am just going to say that I have noticed every bit of this update but am just to lazy to comment again xP

The flow of your story, the hysterical battle of words that goes on in Randhir's head, the many transitions in Randhir's thoughts, Jiggy's hilarious change in behavior in front of Kaustuki and the very well portrayed Kaustuki won me over! :D

I shall promise a comment as awesome (and funny, even if I say so myself xP) as the one I had typed on your next update! I will be very careful and not use the same word again! Basically, this is an incentive for you to give us a quick and longer update! :P

Yes, you must explore the other characters as much as you like :D

Tell your Randhir that I find him delectably devilish and royally ravishing (notice the alliteration xP)!

Waiteeeng for the next update!

Lots of love always! :D

Pririri loves Arururu to the core!! It's ohk, I can wait for that awesome-blossom review. Waise bhi tere SAARE reviews hi mind-blowing hote hain. Makes my day, sachchi xD

Ahan! Alliteration has ensnared you too, I see? Ehehehe, I love it. It's too funny xD

Hugs and Kisses to you, Perky xD xD

Edited by TheDreamyKid - 11 years ago