Sandhir FF: Of Mosquitoes and Madness (Chp 4 - 22/3) - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
Love it. The two-sided conscience talk was brilliant. Happy that he now got that all out of his system and realized is wrong. The way you write is beautiful.

I think you can pull it off you to do multiple characters in the story. I'm pretty sure it will turn out great.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey dii!!!
awesome update as always
u and ur vocab is always amazing and actually amazing doen't suit it is more than that
u penned it beautifully
this time randhir is wrng he hurted her alot
kastuki and jiggy should be like this
feeling sad for sanyukta
overall it was flawless
thanks for the pm!!!
love,harika
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

Love it. The two-sided conscience talk was brilliant. Happy that he now got that all out of his system and realized is wrong. The way you write is beautiful.


I think you can pull it off you to do multiple characters in the story. I'm pretty sure it will turn out great.


You do? Hmmm, lemme try it out then :P
Thanks for reviewing, feedback helps :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: themockingblue.



You're fantastic, fabulous and fawsome! (Make that fawn(ing) + awesome so you get my point .. hopefull 😆)

This is so seriously genius man :| I'd love the knock these two nuts together though, thankyouallthesame 😳 CVs! Jiggy / Kaushty SHOULD BE LIKE THIS! And see what effsome characters we actually have :||

Anyhow, your exams, my exams, I guess we all in the same boat huh? 🤓



Making your own words now? Rofl xD
I miss Jiggy too re. The old one, without the OTP double-personality syndrome -.-
I will probably retain the old elements of the show that I liked. I really did ship Kaustuki-Jiggy really hard. Yoyo has grown on me gradually too, though :P

PESKY EXAMS! Tere kab khatam honge? :O
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: yatup

As usual mindblowing. But sometimes i can't understand who is talking. Explore the plot, that would be great to know others


I tried to arrange the dialogues in a clever manner *sad face*
Read it again carefully, no? :P
Choddo, I'll do something better the next time :D
Thanks for telling me! :D :*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: federized2210

Priya,
Kya update kiya;
Dil chura liya!!!!!!
To be honest I dnt know why I didn't read this before, but read all chaps in one go jus now!!
Do I need to tell u that ur command over English language is almost like Hitler's dictatorship over Germany?(only in a good way)!!!
U are awesome girl...words fall short!
Thnx for pming!! Plz update soon! Next time I will gv a detailed comment...right nw in a hurry!
But brilliant is all I can say:)
Love, anuradha!
PS: love the title!!!!


Anu!! I have itne saare PMs tere, I have to catch up on Meant to be itni buri tarah! :O I'll give you a crazy-ass review after I complete that, just you wait :P

Anyways, thankyou for reading! I love the title too xD
Am I Grammar Nazi, then? :P I like that name too, people call me that sometimes xD
*hugs*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Mellifluous..

hey dii!!!

awesome update as always
u and ur vocab is always amazing and actually amazing doen't suit it is more than that
u penned it beautifully
this time randhir is wrng he hurted her alot
kastuki and jiggy should be like this
feeling sad for sanyukta
overall it was flawless
thanks for the pm!!!
love,harika


HK! Thankyou for not Res-ing xD
Sab paagalo ki tarah res kare jaa rahe hain xD
Half of them won't even open it :P

Thankyou for reading this! And your review means alot! Now go write yours :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
AHA.
AN UPDATE.
FINALLY 😛

do you really need me to tell you how much i loved it ? BECAUSE I LOVED IT.
majorly because it was a Randhir centric update. Reading his confused and dazed thoughts was funny😆
And Guilty conscious toh he is, toh DUH he will go behind Sanyu to beg, plead and apologise xP
*too much drama* sorry. *coffee alert* 😛

acha update soon maate.
Ek kaam kar, pehle update IMPULSE 😉

love,
Pix
(Your biggestestestest fan)
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome prt
cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
res comment soon!!
have to start from scratch!!

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