Sandhir FF: Of Mosquitoes and Madness (Chp 4 - 22/3) - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -silhouette-

The range of emotions I go through while reading your FF is too damn high. :p

The transition from one emotion to another is fast but not rushed or abrupt. The range of emotions you portray for each and every character is beautiful and it reflects onto the reader, at least onto me. The nicknames she gave him were hilarious and the way he thinks, 'Broken, I broke her'. Ahhh. Trust me when I say this, I was jumping on the bed and then I pillow was wet. :p

You need to write your own book, your writing style is that good!


Shall I let you in on a secret? I always look out for your reviews whenever I update. The way you tell me what you felt about the chapter is brilliant in itself. Makes me IMMENSELY happy to be able to put my work out and have it appreciated by people who actually love it. I can't thank you enough :D :')
I never thought I could induce sorrow or passion into someone by my writing, never really thought I could reach up to that mark. So you have no idea how much your tears meant.
^Rather melancholic, don't you think? Eh well. I have my phases of pyscho-babble xD
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Kisha-TBP

Read all chapter in one go...

Hands down u r such a flawless writer...👏
I wish i was able to write like you ... Love your writing style , neither too complicated , articulate as well as crisp..👍🏼
The one liners are amazing too.. 👍🏼
Update fast.. i will be waiting...❤️
(runs to read all your works)
😊


Thankyou so much for those kind words! :D Really, I can't tell you how good that makes an author feel :D
I hope you like my other works too! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sukriti11196

oye hoye...

you finally updated
MOSQUITOES and MADNESS..
was waiting desperately for it..
and my my the patience has paid off..
loved the superbly awesome chapter..
the different emotions of RANDHIR
GUILT
COCKINESS
ANGER
DEFENSE in the form of REPLYING BACK..
versatile hai bhai apna banda..😉😉
and
SAYUNKTA ke baare main toh kya kahe..
RANDHIR aa raha hai DRAMA QUEEN ko manane...
gear up SAYUNKTA...

waiting for the next...


Thankyou for being so patient with me! The dratted exams leave me no time to do anything but suffer through all-nighters and hundred cups of coffee [which is not that bad actually. I'm an owl xD]. Achcha hai ki you weren't disappointed! Next time bhi aise hi achcha review dena xD
*hugs*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .Perspective.

I am mesmerised by your writing!:)


I read all of this just now and it is just flawless.Seriously,your style of writing is something commendable--it makes reading such a pleasure!There are so many things that I adore about your work.First of all,the flow--so unbelievably smooth that I never get to notice the transitions from one emotion to the other.Amazing!Secondly,I love all the figures of speech you use--the alliteration,euphemisms and all of that.Somehow,that makes it more of a treat to read:)And you come up with the weirdest metaphors--and those make me laugh,I love them too.Thirdly,you bring out all the emotions in the spectrum so well--humour,sadness,anger.And the best part is that they are so well-balanced---now i understand what they say about an emotional roller-coaster:)
And I'm sure lots of people would have told you this--but you have a too-good-to-be-true vocabulary--i wish I had such mastery over English:-P

On the whole,you are an incredible writer!I would love to read anything that you write:)Reading this was such a wonderful experience for me--It was the best and least stressful part of today:-P Thank you for the PM.


Ah, gosh, that was just such a treat. Itne saare compliments *blush blush*
It's hard for me to accept it all, but I'll just say that I'm glad you think I'm that good. I'm really not, trust me. But, you believing in me like that gives me immense amounts of confidence :D
You're review was such a joy to read! *kisses* Thankyou!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Read in a go

Brilliant

You are damn good

So loved it totally

Sandhir are so perfect

And your writing style is superb


Update soon


Luv

Mahima


I'm glad you think so re! I hope any future updates don't disappoint! Thankyou so much for that bling review! ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
I read all the part on one go coz I had my boards and was not bale to read up to dately!!!!! Sorry for being late!!!!!!!
Loved all the parts!!!!!!
Continue dear!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was just so AWESOME!
I can't wait for the next update.
Prii you're just soo good at writting yaar:*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashred12

cute story...pls continue soon...


Heya! Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I will update this soon, I promise! :*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rekha85

I read all the part on one go coz I had my boards and was not bale to read up to dately!!!!! Sorry for being late!!!!!!!

Loved all the parts!!!!!!
Continue dear!!!!!!!


I can empathize with the Boards part. Even I suffered through it in March :P But it's over now, so I'm free now :P
Or so I thought. :P

Anyways, thankyou for reading! Late ho yah jaldi, atleast padha toh xP
Update will be up soon! :P
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tanisha

This was just so AWESOME!

I can't wait for the next update.
Prii you're just soo good at writting yaar:*


Tanisha!! Why you no reply to my scraps? :P Jab free ho toh scrap me ohk?
Thenkoo, thenkoo, I try to write well. Bas, bhagwaan ki den hai, kabhi ghamand ni kiya xD xD

Ahahahha, what fun :P
Anyways. Horrible jokes aside, I'll update this one soon :P I guess xP

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