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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#601

Oh God... Wot an overwhelming update.. Uve written it splendidly akka... :))

I loved how Payal so smoothly assured Khushi to just feel the naturally arising of the budding emotions... Heartwarming!!!

It was heart shattering to see such a rude swoping of the characteristics wid one life altering incident.. Was shaken to the core.. :(

Though his bhai had enclosed himself in the shell , Akash's continous n desperate attempts of relentless trying to retrieve Arnav at every given opportunity all these years shows the blind love , devotion he has got his bhai setting aside his huge heartbreak... Finally the much needed , supressed , dormented anguish of all the years has errupted n m very glad for this...

The resurrection of the abandoned bond of the brothers has started n m super joyous!! :D

Viji akka... birthday wishes to dear appa garu.. :)) i hope he has a wonderful day!!

This comment of mine is dedicated to the indomitable brother-Akash Singh Raizada.. ❤️

Edited by kooldewdrop - 11 years ago

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#602

Hum aa gaye😳

There is something I've noticed very clearly having read through your index together. You make the readers form in correct conclusions before bringing them back on track. A similar thing happened when Khushi's introduction put me off. Of course it got cleared up when her condition was revealed. and it sure did come as a shocker. but then i wondered that it was all there in the title of the story itself!

All the members of the Raizada and Gupta family are congenial and it is nice to have such people I the story.

Arnav's past is traumatic, but there is hope and I'm glad it is going to be delved.

I wish that since Khushi's loss of eyesight has come from an accident, there are chances of restoring it back😊

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#603

Beautiful story... Awesome progression... Beautiful and sweet characters and their relationships

Read all 7 chaps in one go and eagerly waiting to read more

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-HEAVEN-

@-HEAVEN-

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#604

Edited by -HEAVEN- - 11 years ago

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#605

honestly I loved akash here,there childhood and the grown up

I love it

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SViji_2706

@SViji_2706

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#606

Like button is not working for me 😕

Coming to the update...I don't feel the conversation between Arnav and Akash is not needed here...because it is much needed, to be focused...and you did good on showing their relationship before Arnav's parents alive and after they died.

Good two brother talked it out well and I do wish Arnav start focussing on his family other than just fullfilling the resposiblitly of builting an empire for them...they all looking for his love not other things like Akash said.

I'm in no hurry to see ArShi in relationship soon...their ride can be slow leading them to give much needed time to understand each other, trust each other and love each other.

Thank for the pm😊