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SPraba

@SPraba

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Very emotional update uthra but this does happen in reality. Hope akash can sort out the mishaps with arnav since they had the talk now. Thanks for the pm.

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

awesome update !!! loved it.. 😃

thanks for pm 😊

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

glad it was Aakash.. such a wonderful bond going waste... hope they reconcile soon..

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esamoe

@esamoe

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#584

wow what an emotional update.

Arnav is affecting Khushi I am so happy she confided in Payal and Payal gave her good advice.

the way you described Akash"s feelings and emotions was brilliant it was good to go back to the past and see Akki and Nannavs relationship and how it changed and made Akash the person he is today. the whole outburst from Akash was so sad but it was much needed. eagerly awaiting to see how Arnav takes the first step towards his brother.

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#585

Update was Awesome!
I loved it very much!
Thnx fr pm!
Happy vishu!

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#586

Hey! Just read all the chapters
Nice concept and very nicely written
Pls do continue soon

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#587

just read your story and I have to say that i find the story beautiful. a visually challenged khushi and an emotionally challenged arnav make a compelling read

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#588

I just read all the updates in a go. Very nice concept. I like all the characters and ur writing style also.

Arnav n akashs relation was really good.

I was surprised to know that arnav kept distance fearing himself. Akash is rally sweet. I like him a l a lot

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aamshula87

@aamshula87

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#589

superb.loved akash's side of story

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#590

Lovely update and I particularly like the fact that you gave space and thought to Akaash - a chracter ofetn ignored or just placed there with little or no value... and Arnav Khushi all the time would be a lil boring :-) This helps create a proper story were you want to know what happens to evrey characters!