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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#591

M in love with dis ss..its so beautifull..dis d relationshp i wanted fr aakash n arnav..a perfect bt a lil soreness btw them..which dey ill sort it out!!
😉 😆

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InvisibleSmile

@InvisibleSmile

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#592

Hi U,

This was a wonderful chapter. I didn't miss Arnav and Khushi that much. I was rather intrigued to know the bond between Nannav and Akki. I love the cute moments from their childhood. I hope they can find a way back to that relation once again.

It must have been really disheartening for Arnav to go through all that at a young age. I'd like to believe, he can heal...he has, but just needs a overcoat of love to seal the deal.

Waiting for the fundraiser now. Hurry up and Update.

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#593

Awesome chapter...thanks for the PM

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spanny93

@spanny93

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#594

very nice emotional update... Arnav and Akash's relation is very strong and once Arnav became aloof it was unberable fro Akash without his Naannav... Hope every thing goes well from now.. waiting for the changes that are going to happen in all three pairs life... a loving update...

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Pyewest

@Pyewest

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#595

Love ur story. Read all the updates in one go. 😊

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#596

WOW... Uthra Di... this came as a pleasant surprise... seeing and knowing everything between the brothers were much necessary... loved the way you have written it... emotional and beautiful... brilliant piece of work Di... loved it...

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#597

First of all, a BIG sorry for being so late... I have been busy and have been staying away from IF, in order to get stuff done.

This story just keeps getting better with each update. I really liked the flashback Now we begin to see the true Arnav. I also liked the 'Aakash' story. No one would have thought he would be affected so much by Arnav's withdrawal. That was beautifully dealt with. You have a way with human psychology, among other things... (like writing, poetry and even singing...the list seems endless, but I digress)

Can't wait for the three love stories to start blooming and growing.

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#598

Awesome...

Loved Arnav and Akash conversation... This was much needed... Arnav think that he will turn out like his father and will hurt his family... But he is so wrong about this... He can never do anything that will hurt his family... He love them too much to do something like that...

Loved the update...

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sarahjac

@sarahjac

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#599

Is this your first story ever? It's actually kind of hard to believe.

You are doing a terrific job, only a good writer who has an eye for detail, would take pains to build a proper background story for its characters.

I am happy to be here.

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88sandy

@88sandy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#600

lovd d update...
wow so khushi has startd falling for arnav...
lovd d entire convo btwn d raizadas espeicaly last part wat akash said to nani...
poor akash ...he hd flt unwantd coz of arnav n arnav didnt even realise dat!!!!
nyways nw i thnk everything wil be sorted out...actualy has sortd out btwn dem...
n ya u r ryt dat its too soon for arshi to be in a relationsh...