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Simanthar

@Simanthar

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#521

Lovely update. Like the way the story is coming out...ii

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#522

no that was so needed

their relationship sure became so bad

he retreated into his shell

why because he thought he would hurt his family like his dad did

but of course akki made him see that isnt the case

all those years of pain for them both

and for this

well at least he knew why he distanced himself

damn arnav you didnt just think all that

and to think he wasted his time for this

well things can be mended

not that they were broken

but a bridge needs to be made now

guess nani was right

this time he really changed

and talked to him as his brother

told him the reason why he did what he did

oh arnav what do we do with you

those childhood memories of akki sure were cute

and in contrast to akki arnav memories akki payal sure were interesting

hmmm well that worked out well and am glad

he was right akki he was thinking of her

his angel his khushi wow sure changed him didnt she

but same was case with khushi

that was cute

cheers for pm

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#523

I am loving Akki..bas..very emotional update and you excelled it..superb

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#524

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updated here :D

Edited by kooldewdrop - 11 years ago

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Nishi

@Ni_singh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#525

wonderful update...loved the touching convo between the brothers...

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smat

@smat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Superb
loved reading it
thanks for the update

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#527

Edited.

If you have a friend like Payal, you are lucky that's what I felt after reading this update.A very sensible and lovely friend of Khushi, who understands her state of mind very well. Being a Manochikitsak and a nice friend he gave Khushi a perfect advise.

Loved the way Akash was talking about his Nannav with his Dadi and the way he talked about Khushi's condition with his mom was simply superb. This part shows how much he loves his Bro.👏

What a lovely n cute past of the siblings. But the fate has another plan and ruined this beautiful relationship between two brothers. One was highly affected by the happenings and so did Akash. He had tried to get his brother back but Arnav didn't allow him and thus Akash's heart was crying. The way he talked about how he felt with Arnav was the most emotional part of this update.

This conversation may help Arnav , there is little hope from now on he will behave nicely with Akash once he was Akki for him. And not to forget certain Ms. Gupta. 😳...

Someone is eagerly waiting to meet Shyam...that's so cute. Well Pyar toh hona hi tha.

Thanks for the pm my dear Apsara,

Lots of love, hugs and kisses with invisible Red Rose just for you.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Kripiya dhyaan rahe hum aapse Bahut Pyar karate hai.😳

Edited by Divyahet - 11 years ago