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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#501

Wow!!Wat a chp..m loving dis ss very much..love is in d air fr arshi..n nannav ill b back..with kkg help!!
😊 😃

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#502

wonderful part

loved it

thanks for the pm

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#503

Awesome update. Finally Arnav is opening up and loved the way Akash came all the way to make sure Khushi is the one for him. And surprise he found Payal to be his old school mate. Lovely. So now hopefully both love stories will proceed together. Khushi is very resilient - it was touching reading about Khushi's accident. Looking forward to the next part. Update soon. Thanks for the pm.

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#504

I loved your Akash&Payal. They have so much going on for them here than what they had in the show.

Their interaction was brilliant...and i am sure not before long they will be back to being good friends and later on maybe much more than that.

Moving on to our favourite...Arnav and khushi.

The attraction is building slowly and steadily between the duo. Arnav seems to be working more towards the attraction but i am not really surprised at that khushi's physical shortcomings will always inhibit her.

Fabulous update and thanks for the pm

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#505

I love payal as much as Shyam bhaiyya for the natural instinct they portray to be the silent pillars of support to Khushi...
Ha!! It was Akash n my mind went into an overdrive at the previous update... :p but i want to hold onto the words still fr the time till entire past is not revealed... :))
Ahaa!! Payal n Akash were frnz in high school n quite cloz but drifted apart due to the latter's obnoxiousness.. :D dis is kool news n the former even had pretty much drawn the right conclusion abt him accompanying his bro... :D aaannd I see strong sparks flying from this end :D

Did i mention i find men even more sexier when they sing... I fell for Arnav all over again... Sigh!!!
After learning abt Khushiz cause of blindness n Arnavz consequent chat wid her was overwhelming.. Wot ever Khushi said , i understood it only at the superficial level :(( Arnavz assurance , soothe , followed the the quite comfortable quiet which enveloped Dem where certainly a high dosage of attraction was brewing... :)) super glad... The prolonged holding of Kz hand n squeezing it tightly before leaving is not only an intimate gesture but makes Arnav already feel the pangs of all the time Arnav will be missing her ...

This update felt like all smooth flowing waves but there were turbulence of emotions here n there...

Edited by kooldewdrop - 11 years ago

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Niya

@niya55

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#506

Awesome update.

I loved it very much.

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#507

Payal could easily guess what had disturbed Khushi and was waiting to meet Arnav, the person who had entirely disturbed her best friend.
I knew that it was Akash who was waiting in the car, so he was there to spy on his brother.Nannav, Arnav is called like that by Akash and not NK here.
Sashi Gupta, he's really a good person.He has been a respectful father and successful business.
So, Khushi lost her eyesight in the accident and was in depression which her family's love and support helped her to overcome and become what she is today.
The song, it was beautifully continued by Arnav.The kids were so sweet while asking their innocent questions to Arnav.
Arnav and Khushi, what to call their relation..
They both understand eachother so well.
Loved the update.
Beautifully written..

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Hkrajan

@Hkrajan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#508

Very well written... Amazing story

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#509

Thank you all so much for your wonderful comments and continued support. This story is very close to my heart and a few incidents and characters are from my real life.

I am writing this note to let you all know that the next update is going to be delayed. I am sorry. My son's revised school schedule and his sudden aversion any of my gadgets through which i can connect to the website with red color design on both sides has left me with little time for my IF life and writing. I am trying my best to extract to write. I hope you all will understand and forgive me for this unexpected delay. I am hoping to finish the next update by this week and post it on 14th April.

Cheers

Uthra

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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#510

That is fine viji ..

I hvnt read the last two updates yet

take yur time ..

I cnt complain either as i hvnt read the previous update :-\ ..

Enjoy wth sid :-) ..