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Posted: 11 years ago
What an absolutely Lovely and endearing Update!!❤️

Again, Uthra di, i Love you!👏

Some relations are made in heaven and some we make on earth and the purest of them is - True Friendship. :)

Khushi's concern over Shyam's well being, asking him to call her once in every 30 mintutes, while praying all the while for his well being speaks volume and so does Shyam's concern and list of Do's and Don'ts. Both brother and sister are completely wrapped around each other, with Payal too being an integral part of their lives. She is sister to both Shyam as well as Khushi.


She is spunky, impish, lovely and so very fun to be around. Making the atmosphere light with her nok-jhok's with Khushi, while her banter with Bua and Shyam was Hillarious too. :)

the way she held up Khushi while she was blaming her herself for the choices she and Shyam made because of her, shows the intensity of Love and Care that Payal has in her for Khushi, its beyond words. Their BFF's :)


NK is yet another very interesting charecter. He is cool, an architect himself, from sydney, staying with the Gupta's he's afun being and his so gelled up with Khushi and the way it seems he is little more protective of Khushi than even Shyam is, that is Why he was giving cold shoulder to Arnav during the meeting. :)


while Anjali battles within herself, over her own increasing feelings and Shyam's almost normal behaviour and cleverly steers Arnav away from her contourted face, she notices him pretty well. His interest in SPARC and every conversation that involves Khushi. She gauges him pretty well and has some good fun at his expense too.

While Lavanya, is right. Men with such low thinking are not worth anything, who judge girl buy her clothes, are peaheads. 😡


Aakash is a breath of fresh air. She is cute, mischievous, smart, capable, happy go lucky types! I like him already. :) ooh. So he too notices his elder's changing expressions. Lloks like Arnav needs to put a mask over his feelings, or else everyone would know before he does himself. ;)

poor NK, unbeckonist to himself is the reason behind Arnav's rage and jealousy. ;)


You left at a cliffhanger! Ye Ramanchi hai!


P.S: Beautiful banners by everyone! They are all so lovely!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for the late comment, AD + laziness had me busy! I read both chapters together.

I really like how you have etched out each character with personality of their own instead of just having to rely of their relations. It adds many layers to a character and gives them a chance to breath. Shyam, Anjali, Khushi, Arnav, NK, Payal, and Lavanya. They are all terrific people with a golden heart.

I think what I loved most about ch. 3 was Shashi. He is the epitome of a doting father for his children which makes him a great man in my eyes. His intuition may just be right after all?

It was rather sweet of Arnav to apologize for his unsolicited anger, which shows he has great character despite his other flaws. Khushi's brilliant maneuver to accept his apology and get him to attend her event was absolutely genius. I can see NK seems to have ruffled Arnav's feathers already...someone is getting a little possessive I see.

Shyam and Anjali are the cute couple and the sweet siblings. Their equation with Arnav and Khushi is rather endearing. I liked that Shyam gave Arnav a chance despite the odds not being in his favor, it worked out.There were some sparks between NK and Lavanya already...I think? Interesting.

Anjali's cute antics and your decision to end the chapter left me flummoxed. You stopped at a very crucial point...why? Please update soon.

Edited by InvisibleSmile - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I hate you for leaving off at this point.
Now we have to wait for their telephonic conversation.
Aakash too has entered the scene.
He seems like a happy go lucky guy.
It will be fun watching him with a dedicated doctor, Payal.
And loved the Rabba Vey between La and NK.
Anjali is missing Shyam!
These two seem made for each other.
Loved the update.
Now I'm waiting very impatiently for the next one.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 3:

Waow. 3rd chapter was great. I loved the way Arnav appologized and Khushi forgave him. Quite formal. And so noble of Arnav to return her book. Loved the way Shashi changed the topic and took Shyaam-Anjali to garden to pave a way for Arshi's convo. So Arnav's gonna be in the charity event.
Thanks for the dedication and wishes Snivy.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Anjali is smitten by Shyam surely. But what about Shyam???
Sparks flying between NK and Lavanya????

The way the friendship between Payal and Khushi has developed over the years was very heart warming to read.

Cant believe Arnav was jealous of NK and his closeness to Khushi.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update loving this ff so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
all that drama for a phone #.. loved the update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
marvelous update
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome chapter!
I really liked NK and Lavanya's meeting as well as the conversation between Payal and Khushi :)
Great job and thank you for the pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice and vry vry intrsting update, payal and kushi's friendship is beyond words, an amazing siblings and counsins bonding, i enjoyd it and thank u fr lovly and amazing update.

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