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Raji Senthilkumar

@RajiSobtian

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Awesome Update Very nice Banner Superbb

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#322

Arnav is jealous.. Ooh la la.. 😎 Im so loving this..And introduction of many new characters.. Payal n Aakash.. NK and Lavanya.. Aha.. Waiting to see what awaits them...

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#323

So many moving parts and so many parallel love stories - Love indeed is in the air!

I love the Gupta extended household so much. Such a bunch of fun, lovely, warm people - Shashi, Bua, Khushi, Shyam, Payal and NK - how can there ever be a dull moment around them

The Raizada siblings seem to be just as close knit but there is an underlying sense of despair in that family

Keep writing, Uthra - this one has all the makings of a fun, warm read :)

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Nakshatra

@amfashionista

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#324

fantastic work.

loved desperate arnav.

NK is awsum.

lavanya and nk i can see some sparks.

loved it.

waiting for arnav and khushi1s convo.

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#325

That was excellent update...

Loved the bonding of Guptas familay very much...

every one is so concern and loved kushi so moch...

Awww Arnav is jealous of NK and NK also seemed not interesting by Arnav's liking😉

You almost write about all couples except Payaliya and Akash...

So our Arnav is eagar to talk with kushi... Awww cant wait to read more...

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narmatha biju

@narmathabiju21

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#326

nice story..i liked it very much

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meghal

@.crazzy4arshi.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#327

loved the update!

really loved khushi and payal's bonding and shyaam as a very sweet brother

amazing!

please do continue soon

will be eagerly waiting

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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#328

i liked the way diffrent people observing each other's expressions in chap..

anjali-arnav

arnav -anjali

akash-arnav etc etc...

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SViji_2706

@SViji_2706

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#329

I loved Shyam's bickering with Payal. The love between siblings in both families is showed beautifully.

Payal and NK, I loved them both. The relation they share with Gupta's.

NK dislike Arnav, isn't it? because of Arnav's first behavior with Khushi in his cabin, the MU wala.

And Arnav is feeling jealous of NK for being close to Khushi.

Anjali understood her brother, even Akash seems to catch his brothers change is behavior. Akash character too is very good.

All in all I love the way you showed their family bond. Even each pair has met, only Akash and Payal are left to see each other...so the path towards love is going to start, somewhere it started and in some it has to start...

I hope I'm making sense.

Loved this update lot. Thanks for accepting my buddy request and for PM😊