Arshi TS - Of Blossoms and Promises...COMPLETED!

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Jennifer

@Jennymyola

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

angst bhara ts!!! Part 2 jaldi haazir ho!!!!!

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Awesome and fantastic update

Arnav fell in love with khushi and so does Khushi. he don't have enough trust in elite people but Khushi don't belong to them, she is not rude and selfish like them or else she won't be a very good friend of Arnav and helped him.

I like Avinash Raizada who married Arnav's mother and gave her child his name. I am sure Arnav will make him proud and shine his name.

I guess in next update there will be a time gap.

I don't think Khushi and Arnav will stop loving each other. There love will increase with time.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Plz pm me when you update.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

and all was well for them
but dammit that ending was so sad
should have at least listened as to why she was going with akash
am sure it isnt because she didnt want others to know she is with you
or she is ashamed of you
oh that was heart breaking in the end
but it was so cute while they were together
so they shall meet again years later am guessing

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bob55

@bob55

Beginner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

beautiful story. make them come together

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

What a beautiful story Dil.

I loved Arnav's character.

I hated Khushi for what she did to the poor boy.

Maybe she didn't have the courage to acknowledge him as her boyfriend.

Now I'm sure Arnav will come back as a rich business tycoon and the whole town will be there to lick his boots.

Please update the next part soon. Eagerly waiting to read more.

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

absolutely brilliant! This shows how good and versatile a writer you are😊 can't wait for the next update!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Wow a new story from you, I'm expecting this story to be a ten shot.

Absolutely loved the first part, it was brilliant and absolutely amazing.

Awww poor Arnav has had a painful past and a very tough life especially regarding his poor mums illness.

I'm glad Arnav and Khushi became more than friends, love the way Arnav asked to kiss her for the first time.

Love the way they became so close and they helped each other out with there studies,

Awww the ending was so sad, I hope Khushi has a good reason for not going to the prom with him and it's such a shame Arnav has left her for good.

The update was Written exceptionally well and a fantastic read,

Can't wait to read the story further, especially to see how Arnav and Khushi will reunite again.

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

I loved to read it..and enjoyed the narration..

I am feeling so sad for both actually. Khushi , itt has to be understood that she is young, and might have said yes to go with Akash coz its nor just him but parents too are involved. She must have been scared or apprehensive rather. But Arnav is young too, faced a lot if hardships and its not a surprise that he got hurt at this behaviour of Khushi...

looking forward to read more.

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Wowww wat a beautifull start
n emotional end
pls cont soon
loved d big update
pls pls update d nxt part sooon

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

I loved this story. I can completely empathise with Arnav, life handed out really bad very bad deal for him. A guy who courageously faced all the trials that came his way...his 'cool bindaas' attitude is just a facade to face the world head on.

At the same time i can understand why khushi refused to go out with Arnav...maybe she is too scared of her parents and doesn't know how they would react. But off course Arnav who has suffered already so much will not be in a sensible frame of mind to understand that...and i do not blame him either...life has just been too tough with him.

Waiting to know how Arnav now conquers the whole world. 😃