Arshi TS - Of Blossoms and Promises...COMPLETED! - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Firstly that beautiful ending to Along came Khushi and now this beautiful TS, are you like seriously planning to make me smile and cry at the same time!


What a beautiful story that you've weaved. The illegitimate brother of prince, that he calls himself, got hooked up with the princess!

It was eheteral yet believable. He harrassed her, yet she as a scared lamb didn't say much. But one fine day, he saves her from goons and then next time, she makes him feel good. What started of with an umbrella, ended up being a full flegged relationship in the secrecy of lakeside.:)

for Arnav, his life has always been very difficult, firstly being the illegitimate kid, then losing his father and then his mother having cancer. He is afteraall just a teen, with such hardships, anyone would become negative, as had Arnav.
Khushi brought in hope and smile in his life.

But he didn't give he chance to explain herself. Why?
I know, because he had just began to dream, to live in happiness, when suddenly he felt his bubble bursting and reacted, leaving behind his Khushi.. And moving away.. Alone!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful Beautiful story! I just loved Arnav's character here. Why didn't Khushi go with him? that was wrong of her to do so and I really hope that she have reason for that. I think Arnav will be a different person when they meet again. Update soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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an apt title even though only one half is updated. waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omggg...it was so awesome
continue soon plsss
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely start...feel sorry for arnav sufferings...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what an amazing story.. wonderful.. arnav left khushi and town.. would like to see them again in front of each other.. loved it .. 😃


thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my god! This was so emotional. Aweee... Arnav will be back all grown up and wealthy, won't he? I want to know the reason behind Khushi's decision of going to prom with Akash. Can't wait for the next one!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Well, this is interesting... Looking forward to more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was SUPERB dear👏👏 beautiful !!
beautifully describe every scene
arnav talking rudely to khushi, and soon they start dating and all...
but poor arnav's heart broke later, but I think he should've listen to her, for once atleast
continue soon and do pm
thanks aashi12 for recommending me😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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He did not gave her chance to explain...waiting for next update

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