Arshi TS - Of Blossoms and Promises...COMPLETED!

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

How unfair life can be...a really intense story written with great finesse!

Looking forward to the next phase in their lives...

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stg1

@stg1

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

beautifully emotional start, they were so sweet and innocent together despite his 'bad boy' image, it reminded me of all my favourite teen rebel movies 😳 but judai hona tha, ab kab milenge 😭 u write wonderfully, looking forward to the next part 😃

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

This is Brilliant!!!

I am so excited to read more!

Wow, I really like the way you have shaped Arnav's character!

I cannot wait to read about what happens when Arnav and Khushi meet!

Amazing job and thank you for the pm!

😃

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

A very promising start to a different kind of story between Arnav and Khushi. So Arnav fell in love with Khushi but now he has left her and gone away. Hope they both meet sometime later. Why would Khushi want to go to prom with Akash. Definitely there is some reason for Khushi doing so. Would love to see what Khushi says to Arnav after they meet. Looking forward to the next part.

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Aparna

@-aparna-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Loved the story...beautifully written..
I think i know whats gonna happen but stilll ...
Loved how arnav changed so much for her and now we r going to see diiff arnav:)

updt soon plz

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crazyji

@crazyji

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

nice story..something different and emotional..continue soon

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ipktouch

@ipktouch

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

superb part..beautifully written..arnav was so confident in his love but not kushi?her status was the hurdle?poor arnav where did he go?when wil they meet each other?!cant wait for the next..update soon..

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Love this new story Dil... young love...yet angsty.

Now waiting for them to meet again after a long time... 😊

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

My heart is in my throat...

When I read about a renegade and adolescent ASR, I thought this might be a sexy, funny story.

But I was wrong and how! 😲

It had it all... The class divide, the stereotypes, the financial issues and the emotional responsibilities...

And an intense budding love that got nipped too soon leaving a hardened heart and crying eyes in its wake...

I can understand Arnav but I have an explanation for Khushi's stand too... I really want to know where and how you take it... Jaldi plsss

I want to say so much but I cant... I really cant

All I know is that till I dont read a happy ending to this story... and soon... I wont rest... I cant rest... Well done!

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Dillu wat a emotional story...
I lovd it very much...
pls updt next part soon...wannna c how Arshi gonna solve dis mu nd b together..
sory...lk button nt wkng