The Grease Story (Completed) - A SanDhir FF *A/N - Page 103*

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Tara

@Tara.16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Awesome yaar you wrote it so nicely that I can feel what Sanyukta was feeling.Thanks for PM.Pls PM when you upt next part.

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Anuradha

@federized2210

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Randhir's pov please😳

What the hell was he thinking introducing arohi like that? This guy just doesn't learn, does he?

Anyway, very well penned! Loved it! update soon!!!

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Shreya

@swarontruelove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Awesome!! it was really well written!👏 both chapters 11 nd 12!!!!! lovedd them! i really liked the jealous sanyukta but she got hurt yaar knowing randhir walked with that arohi's help! aww! md chapter 12 was bang on dear!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👍🏼it was too good! u did justice to sanyukta's pov!😊continue soon! will be waiting nd i guess u have boards rite? so i thnk i will have to wait a little? but koi na will wait as the reward for our patience will be awesome i knw!😃

Edited by swarontruelove - 11 years ago

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hema

@froots93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Awesome update!!!!! The way u described her feelings I am speechless😊👏

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Sukriti

@sukriti11196

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

hawww...😭

poor sayunkta...

egoistic randhir... bad manners haan...

koi nahi...

jaldi se agla update de do ab...

waiting...

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: swarontruelove
Awesome!! it was really well written!👏 both chapters 11 nd 12!!!!! lovedd them! i really liked the jealous sanyukta but she got hurt yaar knowing randhir walked with that arohi's help! aww! md chapter 12 was bang on dear!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👍🏼it was too good! u did justice to sanyukta's pov!😊continue soon! will be waiting nd i guess u have boards rite? so i thnk i will have to wait a little? but koi na will wait as the reward for our patience will be awesome i knw!😃

Hey Shreya! Thank you so much :D

Yes, I do have boards but I promise to update tomorrow :D

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

arushi... i cant wait anymore!!!

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

that was really nice !!
she's so hurt by randhir !!!
i think she has fallen too hard for randhir !!
and now she's hating him for making her feel miserable !!!
nice !!

will we get randhir's POV ???
it was really nice !!
loved it :)
continue soon :)