The Grease Story (Completed) - A SanDhir FF *A/N - Page 103* - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: soumeesg

Hey gal...so sorry for nt commenting on ur previos chaps...been very busy..anyways, must say, this ff has unfolded beautifully...his concern for her, her love for him,mjealousy for arohi, their bickering yet care for each other...lovely...waiting eagerly for randhirs pov...sanyus thoughts were really painful n sad though, felt sorry for her...btw, may i suggest one thing?? Introduce arjun for aarohi!! Dnt make her a negative character😊


Hey! No problem at all! I can understand how busy life gets!
Thank you for your looong and looovely comment :D
Yes, at this point Sanyu is pretty hurt. Randhir's POV is coming up soon!
And worry not, Aarohi isn't a negative character! You'll discover more about her in the coming parts :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
As you guys had asked, here is Randhir's POV. Hope it doesn't come as too much of a surprise! Enjoy reading! Do leave comments :D

Part 13

Her unmatched intelligence. Her ceaseless courage. Her resolute confidence. Her sensitiveness. Her humanity.

Her long, dark brown hair. Her pink lips. Her brown eyes. Her tinkling laughter. Basically, all of her.

Sanyukta Agarwal has no idea about how much she has enthralled me. I will thank my stars till the day I die because I am so damn lucky to have spent so much time with her. I now know a side to her that I can't help but love. She isn't only the headstrong, feminist and annoying girl I met for the first time at FITE. She is much, much more.

Have you ever met a girl who enjoys listening to sufi music and heavy metal? If yes, you're lucky. If not, you have to meet this girl. She indulges in cooking and watching football matches! We even listened to some songs by Metallica and headbanged though it hurt like hell for me to move. That was the most alive I felt in a long, long time. Moreover, our favorite EPL and world cricket teams are the same! Ditto same! Imagine, if we get married, we wouldn't even have to fight for the TV remote! Just how peaceful would life be! Go to work with your wife, come back home with your wife, watch TV without a fight with your wife and most importantly, love your wife with all your heart! Yes, I would love for Sanyukta Agarwal to be my wife! I only have to wait for the right time to make her mine!

I can't believe I met someone like her in this lifetime. I thought one has to accumulate many good deeds over a number of lifetimes to get this lucky. But I am so fortunate all because of an earthquake! A devastating, fearful earthquake! I guess the person who said that all things happen for a reason was a real genius! If the earthquake hadn't happened, then I wouldn't have realized how protective I am of her. I could show her that I wouldn't mind getting hurt myself if it was to protect her. Only her.

Sanyukta makes me feel like I'm a good person who deserves happiness. After what my mother did to me, I believed I would never be happy again. Never feel alive again. But Sanyukta, she instills life in me each time I see her. That glimmer in eyes when she talks about machines and her dreams makes me feel like I'm a part of someone's dream. Her dream. And I have to say that there is no feeling more gratifying in the world.

I will not be able to thank her enough for traveling so much everyday just to see me. But I am glad she did. The way we have seen beyond our own veils of hatred has made us discover new people within each other. I, for one, know that I love the new part of her that I have discovered. Of late, I know that she loves me as much as I love her. She told me so herself. Or more precisely, her jealousy did when she saw me with Aarohi. Yes, I had asked Aarohi to come into my room when she was there. I had asked her to behave coyly with me, just to see how it affected Sanyukta. I must say, Aarohi would have made a very fine actress, if only life had given her a chance. As for my Sanyukta, she reacted so well that I have all my answers.

Yes, I know that it affected her badly. In fact, so badly that she hasn't come to see me in three entire days! She won't take my calls. Even if I call her using another number, she listens to my voice and cuts the call. I'm not yet permitted to leave the hospital, otherwise I would have told her everything at this very moment. Now, the only thing that I know is that I have to do something to bring her back to this hospital. And that too, quickly. Knowing my Miss Farzi, she must have already lost it at me because of Aarohi. She must be thinking that all this is just an act to deviate her from studying well. She must be calling me things like a devil, Satan and what not! God, she is so adorable even when she's angry!

Little do you know, Miss Agarwal, that you have made me fall in love with life and more importantly, with you. When I was a child, I used to love playing the guitar. I used to play songs on it just to receive appreciation and love from my parents. But the moment my mother left me, my love for guitars also left me.

But after knowing Sanyukta's love for music, I couldn't help but start playing again. In fact, I have been practicing when she isn't around. I learned her favorite Metallica song, Nothing Else Matters. I'm waiting for her to come here so I could play it for her. But only if she would come!

Come on, Randhir Singh Shekhawat! You can think of a way to bring Miss Farzi here! Think, think, think! Yes, this is a fabulous idea! See you in exactly 5 hours, my Sanyu! I have never been so pleased with myself!

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Posted: 11 years ago
🤢UFF!!!...never expected this from Randhir.. m glad he didnt allow his ego to intervene...
guitar, plan to make her jealous, determination to make her his wife... imagining her to be be with him forever... and imagining not to fight with her--during tv hrs(but that wud be tough for u Randhir)...😆😆
what do i say arushi!!... the more i read, the more i explore and the more i get involved ...
i can just say one thing... 😉plz update fast i cant w8 any longer... i know u hav ur xams but still i wud b gr8 if u cud manage... love u a lot for such an awesum ff... from update 12-pehle sanyukta phir randhir!... ab milega hume SanDhir... yipee!! thank for the pm buddy but i read b4 u messeged... coz i was stalking u since the tym u logged in 2day!😆...🤗. aaj next update karo na plz...

ALL THE BEST for boards...👍🏼
chakde phatte!!😃😃
Edited by Iptisha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg this is just awesome yaar,,,,
the way u describe both pov is lovely

sanyu is thinking that randhir is cheating her


and randhir know what was sanyu thinking about him


randhir is restless to meet sanyu he even called her but sanyu is really angry on him...

and now randhir planning something very devil which make sanyu to run to meet him

wow


do update soon i want to know what is planning



hey i forgot abut his pov as sanyu his wife...ladaka bahot hi fast hai...kaha se kaha pahoch gaya
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow yar so nice... what is the idea and when will u post next part???????
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update yaar . what an POV...
now both POV clear...please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
its amazinggg...superbbb...
so randhir is planninggg sumthinggg fishyyy...to bring her backk...welll eager to knw his plan...
update soon.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
last update ..
made me feel..
that what if RANDHIR is actually not good...
liking toh uske liye bas kam hone hi waali thi..
ki aapka UPDATE aa gaya..
aur ghati toh nahi par bhad zaroor gayi...
awesome update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey it's unfair to stop it like this 😲 Please continue until they meet 😆
So, beautifully explained that i can feel those emotions, wow 👏

And thank you for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful awesome lovely update continue soon

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