ArHi TS: Perceptions. *Part 2. Pg 25* (Completed)

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tintin_ruble

@tintin_ruble

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Wow.

This was so emotional. Why was Arnav behaving so cold with her? Cant he just step forward and understand what she was going through.

I wish to know what they talk and what happens after that 😳

Continue soonish 😆

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jg12

@jg12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

So nice to see a new story from you . Ah Arnav - so mean & poor Khushi . Cannot wait to read the next part

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

According to me this is going to be one of the best stories that narrate post forced marriage stage of Arnav n Khushi. I am all tuned to it.

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

That was... and I am lost for words. I don't know what just happened. I feel so bad for Khushi. Arnav loves her yet he treats her so badly and he is not happy about it. Khushi is sad but trusts and understands Arnav so much that she is willing to give Arnav a chance. She knows that Arnav is not what he pretends to be. I am glad that she decided to talk to him. Loved the first part and can't wait for the next one. Hope you update soon :)

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sonal

@srain10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Interesting...why does arnav always behave like a jerk😡loved khushi's way confrontation 😉 update soon

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

welcome back

khushi is so brave and giving

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Barunz4ever

@Barunz4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Glad ur back😛. Miss ur lovely ARHI works so much

This one is different.

Hope to see u writing frequently😊

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Saiyuuu,,,,yeh tune kya kiya...I am out of words...its so beautifully written...I really feel bad for both them...Poor Arnav...hurting her out of frustration, then feeling guilty for hurting her...becoming frustrated due to his guilt...It has become a vicious cycle...and Poor Khushi...trying hard to act as happy, hiding her tears from everyone, yet hopeful that one day everything's gonna be fine...usse bharosa hain, uski Arnav ji par...she has seen the care, if not love, in his eyes... and she has seen the guilt too...and now she is determined to get an answer...and we are too...wanna know it all...continue soon Saiyu...will be waiting...

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Mints23

@mints23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Look at the amount of people who love reading you Saiyyu!!! Over twelve hours since you posted this story and I get to comment on Page 11!!! 😕 Look at how many of us crave to read your stories... and the reason being that they are absolutely fabulous...

This TS reminded me so much of IPK... Of an Arnav who should have been guilty... of a Khushi who should have just gone ahead and asked the reason for Arnav's insane behavior... Loved the way you have described their emotions... their inner battles with themselves. I keep wondering why has he married Khushi for his Di?? And then why does the guilt keep cropping up each time? I am glad Khushi has taken the first step towards reducing the distance that has been created between them... Can't wait to see what Arnav's heartbeat has to say to his Khushi!!! ❤️

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faffy

@faffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

The last scene took my breath away...

I have often wondered that in the haste of writing the screenplay day in and day out do creative writers miss out on the finer nuances and human emotions - do they forget the essence of the characters they have sketched? Well this was one of the events in the serial where I felt they slipped badly...but unlike the serial we are fortunate to have insightful writers like you who pen down scenes/situations with flawless artistry!

Looking forward to the road ahead...and please continue writing...how can you let go such a fine asset...