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Saiyu , take a bow !!👍🏼
I am simply spell bounded by your TS now !! Such a fine piece of writing which made me empathize with Khushi and forced me to beat Arnav badly !!
There remains a mystery in the plot and i have too many questions unanswered in my mind I shall wait for your TS to answer all of them 😊
But this is the first time i am reading an angst and a serious type of story from u and through this u have once again proved your versatility 👏 Though i would really say that u are an undisputed queen of the comedy genre 😃
I just loved your Khushi . She seems to be a strong woman with some brains which has led her to the conclusion of opening up and speaking with her husband and sorting out the issue . Although Arnav's behaviour and silence and his reason for the indifference still seems to be a mystery !! Is this an AU story or u are taking a part of the show ?? Because u took me back to the show and its true essence with this piece of work and made me nostalgic!! 👏
His care and concern for her when she accidentally burns her hand and his sudden realisation of his true behaviour to her , his cold silence and his silent admiration of her beauty and personality - all of this made me so so nostalgic.😭
Now i am waiting for the much awaited conversation and a happy ending 😃
U already took me by surprise and i am still waiting for the surprise which u are planning to give the readers through this piece 😊
PS: Belated happy birthday to oopsyellow (Latha) .🥳 We havent interacted but i have seen your thoughts on various threads and u are an indispensable and a delightful reader every author wishes for 😊
PPS: Happy birthday once again Dee 🥳 I dunno the count of my wishes and the number of threads in which i have wished u 😳 I think i have wished u to last for a life time 😆
Waiting for part 2 Saiyu 😃
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
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