ArHi TS: Perceptions. *Part 2. Pg 25* (Completed)

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

For my Lovely and for Dee...Happy Birthday and love you both...

Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago

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haminasto

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Im confused coz abhi pehla pehla chapi hai
but happy coz naya naya read karne ko miling!😃

so now jaldi jaldi update!😛

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Arathy-V

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Glad to see you coming up with a TS..Its always a pleasure to read your works. Arnav is such a loser here..in order to get over his guilt, he is hurting khushi more, he didnt deserve this Khushi..Khushi is quite brave..waiting for the next part

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Aisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Superb start 👏👏
Loved it 😛
Pls continue it soon

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kclovearshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

~unres~

It feels so good to read your writing again Saiyu!!

Loved the intense emotions you portrayed in Arnav for his guilt and his lashing out at her when he thought he can't bear it any more. I loved the resilient Khushi and her resolve to confront him.

Surprisingly it was different in that she took the courage to exercise her rights over him knowing that he loved her one time, believing that he still loves her.

I'm very intrigued as to where and how will you take this forward!!

Looking forward for the next part 😃

Thanks for the pm!

Cheers

Edited by kclovearshi - 11 years ago

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Meena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

I've heard so much about your stories, and now I know why. You portray the angst and sadness khushi is feeling perfectly while also depicting Arnav's sadness. For some reason, his actions seem less mean because of your writing- you give him a reason. Although, it still
Isn't acceptable. I'm waiting for the next part :)

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_sree_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

awesome ...👏

welcome back🤗

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-bansi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Interesting start!

Cont soon!

Glad to have you write something again! :)

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vgedin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

You don't love me anymore. But main toh ILYD naa...

Oh this was the most gut wrenching part of the entire show, I could hardly get myself to watch it. I felt so terrible for Khushi.. all the broken dreams, all the fantasies that were destroyed, how cruelly her spirit was crushed.

But I see your Khushi is fighting. Me likey 😊 I like your spin on it. Your description of the angst that exists in them and between them was spot on, managed to rekindle the same pheelz the show did.

And now, since I know this will have a happy ending and because you are writing this, I am SO excited about Part 2 😃 I hope that Arnav will actually understand the extent of damage he has caused her. And not to mention himself. Sigh.

Welcome back Saiyyu! ArHi FF-sphere missed you!

Edited by vgedin - 11 years ago