ArHi TS: Perceptions. *Part 2. Pg 25* (Completed)

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jtmbarun

@jtmbarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Awesome chapter dear!!

Very beautifully written!! Loved it!!😊

Hope you update soon..

Can't wait to read the next part!!!

Thank you!!

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-Saumya-

@-Saumya-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

A nice story on the 6 months marriage? Always wanted that! Also, great part. Very well written.

Will wait for the next part and then a proper comment :P

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

You can't stay away, can you? I am really glad for that and I said it before event one shots are greatly welcome from you. I don't hate this Arnav, I feel sorry for him. He is chained to the love for his sister but is not opening up to the possibility of loving himself and being loved. Yes he is hurting her just like the dude in the show but one can clearly see his love for her shining through even if he can't see it. Of course the brave titaliya will do her best to get it out of him. He may think he is in control but she can make him feel and do things he is not expecting, like telling her what is going on in their sham of a marriage. Looking forward to the chat in the next part.

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

so very happy to see a story from u...
it was really good... i loved the way khushi faces the situation never ready to give up...and also how arnav is fighting with his heart and mind...
but am intrigued about the reasons...will wait...
u write so awesome... do u really have to quit it yaar.. ;)
Also happy bday to dj and oopsy :)

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Edited my comment HERE

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ragvir92

@ragvir92

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Awesome part di

Wow Khushi is trying so hard

What is the problem of Arnav?

Why he is so cold.ok typical ASR

And in last part Khushi's attitude was rocking.Hopeful

Eagerly waiting for next part

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A_R_S

@A_R_S

Navigator

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Unres here on pg 5 😊

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devishree

@devishree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

saiyoo how r u yaar??

this is good and seriously it is painful to see arhi like this 🤢

but ur writing speaks so much

waiting eagerly for the next part and update soon

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Beautiful Story...

And Happy Birthday DJ 😊

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Goodness Saiyyu - it has to be the power of your writing that 2 years after that poolside scene (yes it was around this time in 2012), you wrote something about how Arnav was mean to Khushi during their wedding and still I am as furious as I was that day - I remember because I wrote my first piece of fiction that day - in sheer frustration!

Thank you for bringing back the nafrat - mohabbat tug of war that we all love (d?). Looking forward to where this is going

And once again - Happy Birthday, Dee

And Latha - you indeed are a precious reader. I can completely understand Saiyyu's dedication here :)

Cheers