ARSHI OS: What You Deserve

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jg12

@jg12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Wonderful. Oh how I wish Arnav has said all of this in the serial.

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Farah

@.BumbleBee.

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

What an amazing OS apu !! Wow !! This is what I wanted in the show !! Purely flashing infront of my eyes !! So good !! Write more and more.. ❤️ 👏

Edited by ..SaRun.. - 11 years ago

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piggie

@piggie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

by the time u were done i was in tears..!!😳

all of it is something v hav seen... happening wid khushi but arnav's pov abt dem added stas to d narration..

thanx a ton for sharing..

😳hugs😳

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dialuvarshi

@dialuvarshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

wow!!!!!!!! just awesome,i have no words to express,mind blowing,u r fabulous really.i hope u continue it to another 1 or 2 parts like how they will be now and how his family will win him back plsss

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Awe, I didn't realize you already posted it!

Res' anyways!

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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Faaantassstic..
Sooo well written..
Im sooo glad Arnav stood by herr :')

And Khushii..thaanks alot to make ppl respect khushi for all her sacrifices..shes truly an understatemnt in ipkknd <3

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Mbean

@AmidstTheWords

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Shall i be angry that i didnt get the first res

or do a happy dance bcoz u wrote again

but i cant dance also

well certainly not in my this condition

Will be back with my blabbering later

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Okay,now that was bharibharkam OS.

High Voltage definitely.

Anjali,this woman never realised what she had in Arnav.The man who has always been there for him and the day she went on his back,she lost all the respect I had for her character.

Arnav is a complex man and the only person who could understand the man behind those veils was Khushi.

The reason of their marriage may have been quoted with so many upscales but at the core,it was their love that binded them in the sacred bond.

Khushi deserved the respect nd yes ASR the man he was would have come clean on all this and glad you did it here.

I won't say he was cruel because he wasn't,Khushi never suffered alone because in love you always suffer together.

You know abt the connection between ASR and me,so nothing needed to be said there.

Dadi,The woman who can leave her grandchildren when they needed her the most,showed that there can be women like these too.

Lastly,I loved that you included Nani here because after Arnav and Khushi,she is the most loved character of mine.A headstrong woman with an adorable heart.

Telepathy has to work somewhere right.😳

Edited by togetherforever - 11 years ago

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Res

U r awsm 👏

D way u potrayed each nd every character bought tears in eyes

More den khushi i had tears for arnav...

He was d one who was hurt more den anyone

His whole family ditched him .. For whom d whole revolved around his Dii ditched him

I loved d fact dat he stopped calling her di nd called her Mrs.Jha..

Dis d was d awsmest word in d whole update

D way he regretted everythng to khushi his di his family

Nd how he strtd repenting it

He left everyone for d self respect of khushi..

Just to gt her self respect he married her dat day

He left his house..

I enjoyed d os .. ❤️

Thnku for writing dis beautiful peice ^^

Edited by Barun_Gf - 11 years ago