ARSHI OS: What You Deserve - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
This is beautiful os
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
a brilliant OS which I would have loved to have seen in IPK, in one swoop you showcased Arnav's path to redemption, clearing Khushi's name and bringing to light all of Arnav's misgivings with amazing grace. Amazing job :)
Manreet :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Awesome. ...
Dis is wht khushi deserved...loved it...
Khushi shud gt all d happiness in d world. ...happie dat arnav really understud her...
I wud really loved to see it on d show to...bt...
Thnxx fr writing such a wonderful os...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
fabulous!!!!👏
hats off to yu
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Hey Riz!

So glad that I found this in my inbox and you made me super happy with your writing!

Love, love, loved it.

The drama was well potrayed and I appreciate the way you planned ane plotted Shyam's unmasking.

And last but not least, giving a reality check to everyone about their misgivings in the past.

I so badly want you to write more.

Love you!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Ritzzz 🤗 Awesome OS...I didnt know that you write so well 😃 I loved this OS.

I love how Arnav realized that Anjali had changed and Khushi wasn't and fault.

I loved how he defended her.

I love how Arnav realized that protecting Anjali from the problem won't solve it.

Rizji, this was an awesome blossom cakesome OS 😃

Write More ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
This was so so required in the serial not just for Khushi-Arnav but equally so for the viewers peace of mind! In one stroke through Arnav's actions and words you undid all the injustices meted out to Khushi - brilliantly delivered!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Risat,

I am humbled and honoured that you chose to dedicate this brilliant piece of writing to me.

I loved it. It kept me gripped and I could feel my self nodding and agreeing with excitement at your point of view and wishing that we had seen this on the show...

The way she felt when he blames her, that moment she realises that he does hold her responsible for what happened with Di, the way you described her reaction was written fabulously...and the way he did even realise the impact that his words and accusation were having.

I loved how he shut everyone up and the way he lashes out on Di for the selfishness and her blind faith, her betrayal and ungratefulness and dependency and her inability to think logically and her not even trusting him and going behind his back.

So used to is she to their pampering and giving in to her demands that she has lost any sense of wrong and right.

To not trust what he says about he saw on the terrace and still believe Shyam and fall in line with his low down plans which subsequently leads to the death of her baby and her downfall...

Loved how that phone call reveals his plans and his lies and the phone calling is finally successful in pulling off the mask of innocence that he is wearing and I loved that you had all of them present to witness it, all those who even for a second blamed Khushi.

I loved dadi 's truth coming out of how she and Shyam had met in the Ashram. I am so glad she knows that the man she trusted more than her grandson was the real culprit and not Khushi.

NK God Bless him for always supporting Khushi...loved how mami and Aakash feel hearing the truth behind the forced marriage and the blackmail, Anjali's tears were so deserving. Payal too was disappointing ...and your brought this all out so beautifully .

I loved how Khushi stops all this commotion by reminding Arnav that not too long back he was doing the same and accusing her unknowingly ...

You captured every feeling and emotion with such finesse...I am in awe.

Loved her magnanimous nature and her ability to forgive people ...( your quote so apt and perfect.) loved how she stops Nani from apologising and loved how Arnav spoke about his Khushi, his soulmate and perfect companion... I loved that he is regretful and repents how he treated her and how his love for her come out even through his hatred and she stood by him and saved him...

Seriously loved it. His getting remarried with all the rituals and with nani leaving the rest of the family...I liked that he checks with Khushi and off course Khushi understands him as always...in sync with him...always..everyone got what they deserved...such an incredible story and I enjoyed every word immensely...I felt content and peaceful...

I will wait to read more from you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
OMG THIS WAS BEYOND BEAUTIFUL 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
awesome.
one of the best.
loved it.
superb.
fantastic .

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