I am humbled and honoured that you chose to dedicate this brilliant piece of writing to me.
I loved it. It kept me gripped and I could feel my self nodding and agreeing with excitement at your point of view and wishing that we had seen this on the show...
The way she felt when he blames her, that moment she realises that he does hold her responsible for what happened with Di, the way you described her reaction was written fabulously...and the way he did even realise the impact that his words and accusation were having.
I loved how he shut everyone up and the way he lashes out on Di for the selfishness and her blind faith, her betrayal and ungratefulness and dependency and her inability to think logically and her not even trusting him and going behind his back.
So used to is she to their pampering and giving in to her demands that she has lost any sense of wrong and right.
To not trust what he says about he saw on the terrace and still believe Shyam and fall in line with his low down plans which subsequently leads to the death of her baby and her downfall...
Loved how that phone call reveals his plans and his lies and the phone calling is finally successful in pulling off the mask of innocence that he is wearing and I loved that you had all of them present to witness it, all those who even for a second blamed Khushi.
I loved dadi 's truth coming out of how she and Shyam had met in the Ashram. I am so glad she knows that the man she trusted more than her grandson was the real culprit and not Khushi.
NK God Bless him for always supporting Khushi...loved how mami and Aakash feel hearing the truth behind the forced marriage and the blackmail, Anjali's tears were so deserving. Payal too was disappointing ...and your brought this all out so beautifully .
I loved how Khushi stops all this commotion by reminding Arnav that not too long back he was doing the same and accusing her unknowingly ...
You captured every feeling and emotion with such finesse...I am in awe.
Loved her magnanimous nature and her ability to forgive people ...( your quote so apt and perfect.) loved how she stops Nani from apologising and loved how Arnav spoke about his Khushi, his soulmate and perfect companion... I loved that he is regretful and repents how he treated her and how his love for her come out even through his hatred and she stood by him and saved him...
Seriously loved it. His getting remarried with all the rituals and with nani leaving the rest of the family...I liked that he checks with Khushi and off course Khushi understands him as always...in sync with him...always..everyone got what they deserved...such an incredible story and I enjoyed every word immensely...I felt content and peaceful...
I will wait to read more from you...
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