ARSHI OS: What You Deserve

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chandu2000

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wonderfully written !! Beautiful !! This was what Anjali, Dadi deserved !! Arnav and Khushi's love is very pure !! And they have proved it !!

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arshina223

@arshina223

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome OS!

Anjali and the other family members got what they deserved!

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

Riz,

That was superb!

I had my breath held and Arnav atoned for all his deeds in a stroke rectifying things!

He spared not one of them who had pointed finger at Khushi!

A big

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-Roshini-

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Posted: 11 years ago

Loved it
this is what i wanted in serial

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Res..

Edited!

I am not much of an emotional person, but you managed to make me cry with this OS😭 No, I seriously cried!
Whenever I read something like this, I end up sighing thinking Ye show mei kyu nahi hua?
I loved the way you made arnav redeem his actions! I am at loss of words...
And khushi, I loved her selflessness, be it what but she was her self less self always! And also the fact that she raised her voice when it got overboard, was also loved by me.
And it is say All's well that ends well, so I loved the way you ended it. With everyone knowing their mistakes, shyam's truth out and a proper ArHi marriage, just like khushi wanted😊

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

AAAPPPUUU...OMG...eta ki holo...another OS...WOW...porar aagei bolte pari, I am gonna love this...bcoz, hum e bharosa hain, aap pe, aapki writing abilities pe...and me too in dedication gang...WOW...u just made my day apu...

now coming to the story, its A.M.A.Z.I.N.G...loved how Arnav realized his fault, how he apologized to Khushi, Khushi once again forgave him...how he came to know about what his Di is doing behind his back, realized his why his dadi returned...how he told truth with every details only after taking Khushi's permission...how he showed Anjali the true face of hear DEAR HUSBAND...how he distinguished who actually are his family...and how Khushi understood him so easily like always...each and every characters are so true to themselves...every line u've written just touched my heart Di...so BEAUTIFUL...

I so wish if only such thing had happened...but at least here we can fulfill our wishes through the stories... THANK YOU Apu...for writing again...looking forward to get some more some other day...

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I CAN'T ENOUGH WORDS TO PRAISE THIS AWESOME SHOT.

FANTASTIC

WONDERFUL

STUPENDOUS

LOVE IT.

I was only half way in the part part that it caught my breath.

brilliant story line.

love the way you twisted one of the most important scenes of the IPPKND and present it brilliantly.

I love the drama and the way you describe it.

I love that as soon as Arnav realize his mistake that he wronged with khushi for people who don't deserve it all, he amend his all mistake.

Truly its was, is and will be nani and khushi in the name of family he has. All other blood relation are just for name sake. He invested his love, care and money in wrong people. They don't deserve it.

It was shyam not khushi who was great threat to his family.

He did right to show everyone their true face and leave them alone to strive to led a life which he has provided before and repent on their loss.

Anjali deserves the end she get, she should have her chotte her first priority rather than shyam.

Everyone love each other in the family but their love was fake, it wasn't done by heart and the bond between them were form out of love. In the family it was only khushi and nani who were selfless and didn't got to conclusion without judging facts.

Thumbs up for writing this awesome brilliant piece of work.

I am sure this will be awarded more.

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