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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100459800

Updated here.

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

That was very well written and really enjoyed reading it :)
Thanx for the pm

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

really amazing story...

Awesome...The serial cud hav been this way instead of finshing the shyam track so abruptly...

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smiley-shiney

@smiley-shiney

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Fantastic

I wanna see this kind of scene in the show but it never happened

Loved this very much

Can u write a sequel for this that how khushi helped Arnav in bringing his family back

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

riz, that was one beautiful piece of wrok dear

sorry I commenting late as I already read last night.. but I was from phone, and I wanted to write, I mean my comment.. so didn't write from there

okay, coming to update!!

it was one heck of an OS.. sacchi yaar

it has everything, pain, guilt, pain. and most importantly, faith.. trust.. you very beautifully portrayed everything.. it was fantabulous

I think Anjali deservers this, for what she had done and kept on doing it by being blind in her so-called, -good for nothing bas***d of a husband... and she deserve this cold treatment from arnav, a brother, who was always with her, through thick and thin and always protect her, cared for her and what she did in return, betrayed him., didn't trust him.. such a selfish bitch she was, still is!

I absolutely love the cold treatment, arnav gave to Anjali after he got to know, that her di, hid such a important thing from him

I was angry at arnav first, for behaving like a jerk and hurting khushi again for saying the same thing, but he mend his mistake very well, and win her love for him all over again, mine too 😉

very beautifully os.. please do write it's sequel, like how they made their new heaven in their new world, and did arnav forgive Anjali and his family or not?

just want to read it more

thanks for writing dear and for pm too :-*

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

I am back to a stage some year and a half ago... Back to the heartbreaking time when Arnav demeaned Khushi, to the time when he refused to believe in her innocence and always thought the worst of her... Di had always been a priority for Arnav and his anger was always targeted at Khushi... 🥺

Loved how you have beautifully described the sudden shift that Arnav had in his perspective... Him realizing that only Khushi has been the constant one, supporting him, helping him, saving him and selflessly loving him... His Di, who he has always tried to protect has been selfish and blinded by the love towards her husband...

The whole family tries to demean Khushi... finally making Arnav realize that none of then deserve her selfless love and kindness... Loved how she makes him realize that he has treated her no different... But he is ready to accept his mistake and repent all his life unlike his family... 😊

Anjali deserves a little shake to realize the difference between reality and an illusion of a happy marriage that she has created around herself... It was really unbelievable of her to believe in her husband over her brother... blinded by Shyam's sweet words. She is beyond redemption and so is Subhadra... 😕

I loved Khushi throughout... she has finally had enough of all the badgering and yet understands Arnav completely... SHe supports him in his decision to move out and also hopes... just like she has always hoped... that with time, things will sort out between her family... Her husband will be able to forgive his sister and move on... 😃

This is the first time I read your story... and thanks to Vandy, that I could read such a beautiful piece... It was a wonderful read!!! 👏

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Well written... 👏 loved it 😊

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SPraba

@SPraba

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Omg dear that was such an emotional update. Loved it loads. Glad anjali, dadi, akashi, mamiji got their due. Was so happy to see arnav stand by khushi and agreed to get married to her and move out cos he felt so hurt his di had betrayed him. Hoping to read mores stories from your end. God bless

@ Vandana: Thanks for the link dear. Hugs

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

superb os ...

this anjali n dadi totally crap...😡

arnav again hurt khushi fr his family...

finally he saw true color of his family...

arnav unfold all the truth...

nani ji apologize to khushi...

arnav again married khushi...

wid naniji they left rm...

loved the os...

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Risat thank you so much dear ..
Read it , loved it and yes cried too...
you wrote this OS so brilliantly dear..👏👏👏
this is what I wanted to watch in the show and I am thankful to Vandana and others who inspired you to write more...
what I loved in this when Arnav told Akash the real reason of their marriage, Mrs. Jha ko bhi khub sunaaya 👏👏👏 jisko satya haqikat kehte hai 👏👏👏 and yes he is true only his Nani showed him the true path and double wow he left Shantivan with his life and love Khushi and his Nani..
so all I want to say I loved this OS very much..
Vandu my Kalapi thank you so much for the link.
love n hugs for you Risat I would love to read more.😛

take care.😊

Edited by Divyahet - 11 years ago

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