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Posted: 11 years ago
wow amazing update...
taarey confession was awsum...
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Posted: 11 years ago

hi thanks a lot for the replies- made me happy reading those...missing TR hopelessly

Part 20

Swayams place

Swayam getting ready for college-next day- preoccupied - rey aashi ke saath ? kuch tho gadbad hain. usne mujhse kuch kyun nahin kahaan? Aur wo bhi aise, do din se gayab ? its so not like rey.

Mobile msg beep- Taani-bhai please apna mail check karke mujhe call karna

Swayam became thoughtful - taani ko batana hain ya nahin? Maybe its good to tell her , rey aur aashi ke baare mein. Its really weird though. Pata nahin kaise react karegi. Looking worried, dekhthe hain. and opened his laptop, checked her mail and frowned- par change kyun kiya? this is not good, call karke poochtha hoon

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Taani s place

Rey got up lazily and looked around, the surroundings looked unfamiliar but it didnt matter, he was feeling fresh and nice and happy. he remembered - taani s living room . taani saying yes. Taani in his arms. taani on his chest sleeping like a baby. He smiled , he wanted to laugh out loudly. He was feeling so wonderful. Taani s i love you rey. Where was she? She wasn't around, maybe in the washroom.

Mobile ranggg...he stood up ,looked around and found it on a side table- BHAI . oh Swayam! And received it happily.

"hi swayam! Itni subah subah! Watsup?"

"rey?" swayam thought he was dreaming- main itna worried hoon about rey that ab i am hearing voices.ya phir maine galthi se rey ka number dial kiya He saw the mobile , TAANI. Nahin taani ka hi hain. tho phir rey???

"hello hello swayam? Dude are you there?"

"rey? Tu sach mein rey baat karrahan hain?"

"haan..whats .."

"rey tu taani ke mobile pe kyun baat karrahaan hain? i mean tu hain kahaan? ONE SEC...TUM KYA TAANI KE SAATH HO? ITNI SUBAH SUBAH?...

Rey realised his mistake ,he had forgotten the possessive bhai completely,-shit pakde gaye.. Taani had by now come to the living room fully dressed , her hair back to original style and looking at reys trapped expressions asked ," kya hua rey? Phone kiska hain?"

"WO AWAAZ KISKI THI? TAANI HAIN WAHAAN? MATLAB TUM DONO SAATH HO? EARLY IN THE MORNING? REY WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING WITH MY SISTER SO EARLY? ? THO TUM ISILIYE TWO DAYS SE MISSING HO? BUT WAIT WAIT, AASHI NE KAHAAN KI TUM USKI SAATH HO...TU KABSE HAIN WAHAAN? MATLAB TUM KAL AASHI KE SAATH THE AUR AB...THIS IS COMPLETELY..."

Rey flinched,looked confused," aashi kya.." swayam didnt hear him at all, rey looked at taani helplessly and pointed to the phone , she held it to her ear and heard swayams angry voice on the other end , understood "bhai" she began but swayam didnt hear her. rey stood lost and helpless, cursing the moment he had happily received the call without thinking

"... NOT DONE REY. TU NIKAL WAHAAN SE ABHI KE ABHI. ISILIYE TUNE MUJHE BATAYA NAHIN KI TU KAHAAN JAA RAHAAN HAINA AND HERE I WAS , HUM SAB ACTUALLY, PAAGALON kI TARAH WORRYING ABOUT YOU "

"bhai, aisa ..." rey tried to talk but couldn't get any word inbetween

Swayam didnt hear her," I DIDNT EXPECT THIS FROM ...AUR...AUR TUMHAARA MOBILE TUNE OFF KARKE RAKHA HAIN.HOW ..."

"BHAIYYA" taani screamed," main hoon TAANI" rey moved back surprised at her sudden screaming.

Swayam stopped, looked at the phone again and wondered if he was dreaming again," taani ? abhi abhi rey.."

"haan bhai, rey ...yahin hain."

"yahin matlab? Kahaan?"

"mere saath ...mere ghar mein" Silence.taani looked at rey, rey leaned closer to listen to what swayam s reply.silence. both of them worried

"bhai? " no reply," rey mujhse milne aaye the ...aur aaj wapas jaarahen hain.bhai?" rey tried to take the mobile, she didnt give it to him but moved a step away and spoke up rapidly," aap please gussa mat hona. Wo...hum dono...ab sab teek hain and rey...matlab main...bhai aap ne bhi yahin kahaan tha ...matlab aap bhi yahin chahthe the ..." rey smiled at her and she blushed

"you guys patched up?"

"haan..." she replied her voice shy as rey blew her a kiss and placed his arm around her. she tried to shake him off, he didnt move

"really?" swayam s heart leapt up

" Yes bhai but agar aap mujhse gussa karoge tho..." she shook rey off and gave him a wait look.

"nahin taani..main tumse gussa nahin hoon " swayam cooled a little smiled ," main tho hamesha se yahin chahtha tha...congrats" rey tried taking the mobile again

"thanks bhai" she sighed," aap rey se baat...?"

"nahin " swayam replied promptly, reys face fell as he heard that," main abhi usse baat karne ki mood mein nahin hoon. but im glad for you taani."

"bhai.."

"taani mujhe usse baat nahin karna . so bye ...and ya take care"

"bye bhai. And thanks itna support ke liye" she smiled as rey made a face at her.

"you are always welcome" swayam smiled cooling a bit more and cut the call Agar rey taani ke saath hain tho aashi ne jhoot kyun kahaan? And swayam rang aashi up

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Taani and rey looked at each other , taani burst out laughing " rey aap itna darthe ho bhai se!"

"of course not " he replied obviously worried

Taani put her arms around his neck and said," unka reaction tho expected hain , so don't worry. Wo maan jaayenge." He smiled and was about to pull her into a hug when she freed her self," ab mujhe college jaana hain for some work , aapka breakfast table pe hain and mobile charge karne keliye rakha hain..." he laughed," kya?" he shook his head . she smiled , kissed his cheek and with her bag hanging by her side went out

Yeh typical housewife material hi hain! waise main aaj wapas jaa rahaan hoon? i didnt know. aur swayam...

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Edited by prtn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
swayam the typical possessive bhai is back 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
swayum possessive bro loved it
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read it in the morning without PM but got a chance to reply now. Update is very cute.
Reyam convo is very sweet. Good that Swayam is happy to know about their patch up. Lets see what happens when Rey returns.

Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
rey is so happy loved it
in exitement he forget possisive bhai hahahaha
loved the swayam angry on rey
typical housewife material awesome
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww...this was such a cute adorable update... Scared Rey and possessive bhai Swayam...!!!

Rey's best friend is Swayam yet in front of the "BHAI" Swayam,Rey turns into a 5 year old standing in front of his teacher😆

The jiju Saala scene was so damn good...!!!!

And even the sis-brother talk was soothing 😳

Lovely update.Waiting for the next
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome update
swayam was so much angry
now what rey will do
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Posted: 11 years ago
ok so ya...
part 19...
super cute... awe the confession was real cute and romantic!
i love rey and taani... finally its taarey again!!!!

part 20...
did i tell you i'm in complete love and awe with the "real possessive bhai" swayam... aweee how cute can he get...

and rey by god... i clearly imagined him and that expression ... priceless... wow...

i'm sooo happy!!! yay..

pls continue soon and ty for the pms!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely and cute update
Taarey patch up wow
Swayam knew Rey went to Taani home
Swayam happy with Taarey patch up
Update soon

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