TR ss part 50 page 103 updated 4/7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi , i hadnt realised that my ss was in fan fictions forum- i will be continuing it in d3 forum as im more comfortable here ..heres the link

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3781338/tr-ss-part-12-page-13-shifted-to-d3-forum

part 12 - page 13

index

part 13- page 1
part 14- page 3

part 15- page 5
part 16- page 8

part 17- page 9
part 18- page 11
part 18b - page 13
part 19- page 14
part 20- page 16
part 21- page 18
part 22- page 20
part 23-page 23
part 24- page 27
part 25- page 29
part 26-page 32
part 27- page36
part 28-page38
part 29- page 40
part 30- page 43
part 31-page 45
part 32- page 50
part 33- page 53
part 34- page 54
Part 35 A and B - page 57
part 36- page 60
part 37- page 62
part 38- page 67
part 39- page 69
part 40-page 72
part 41-page 75
page 42-
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/107520057
page 43- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/107738670
part 44- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/108146986
part 45- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/108303365
part 46-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/108446420
part 47-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/108537913
part 48- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/108679864
part 49- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/109304478
part50- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/109520282
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poorni_vishali thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey its superb ss
its so nice
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you will be updating here??????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yes im more comfortable in d3 forum inspite of the fights!!!
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But when it crosses pg-5 it will again be shifted to the fan fiction forum.That's what the rule is
Edited by sreeja_rox - 11 years ago
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okay...5 page? thats almost 5 parts...

i never know any rules...thanks for telling me.
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hi everyone like buttons not working- but thanks a lot for replies/likes and views...pm s later


part 13


"jabse rey aaya haina tumhaare behaviour kuch strange hogaya hain" he placed his hand on her arm and led her away .

Rey had walked off the stage to backstage and shaking hands with the dance team when he saw the guy leading taani away , his hand on her elbow. The excitement that the dance had given him vanished in a second and he went as fast as he could to the changing room.

As he came out of the changing room into the corridor full of drama teams - dress changed- the guy called him- "rey, tum mere saath chalo" and without waiting started walking rey followed him ," i don't know ki kya problem hain but kal se taani kuch strange behave karrahin hain" and stopped in front of girls room ," and i know ki wo tumhaare wajah se hain, kisliye? Kya mujhe nahin pata" rey looked at the guy , saw his concern and suddenly felt guilty- was there really something between this guy and taani? If there was...??maine yahaan aake ek aur galthi tho nahin kardi na? Agar meri wajah se taani ko ek aur problem hojaaye tho...he hadn't thought taani was interested in anyone else but...was he creating bigger confusions?

taani came out just then looking a little better but before she could catch sight of rey or talk, the guy continued,"okay taani , main abhi rey ko kehrahaan tha ki wo tumhe gar lejae" making rey look at him in relief. For a moment, he had felt extremely at fault- there was nothing .

taani looked at rey- her face without any pain or bitterness that had been present just some hours before when she fought with him though it was clear that she had been crying. Something calm in her face soothed rey. She wasn't with this guy- whoever he was.

"main khudh chali jaaoongi is act ke baad, agar kuch kaam aagaya tho.."

The guy ," nonsense, tumhaari haalat dekho..."

Rey interrupted," taani chalo" she looked up at him , opened her mouth , but couldn't get anywords out. she was suddenly the same taani whose world revolved around rey, who could never refuse him anything," cmon " and without waiting anymore, rey held her elbow and pulled her along as quickly as he could. The guy smiled at them wondering about the quiet girl he had been working with the past month and a half. She had seemed so normal all the time ..

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Swayam , gang in bharat s garage

" 24 hours ke baad police complaint de sakthe hain" rinni making everyone as usual look at her

"shut up rinni"

"but actually Sharon shes right" simmi

"haan yaar shes right" nil," for once"

" nahin... rey ki dad ko batade kya" Sharon loking at swayam. Before he could reply, Vicky who had been lying on a cars bonnet," NAHIN" everyone look at him," tum log dost ho ya enemies? Bichaara rey kitne dino baad akele time spend karrahaan hain ek new girlfriend ke saath aur..."

"Vicky seriously?" swayam," im sure rey aashi ke saath nahin hain"

"achha kyun?" Sharon aggressively

"main jaantha hoon wo aashi ke saath nahin hoga.. bas"

"wahin tho, tumhe kaise pata?" Vicky and pulling nil aside," yeh swayam ko aashi ke baare mein itna kuch kaise pata?" Sharon standing next to them , same thoughts running in her head gave them dirty looks.

"koi phir se phone lagao yaar usko" bharat ," pata chaljaayega"

Swayam dialled aashi, she received,(finally...)" hi! Boliye swayam, itne raat types ko.."

"haan...aashi , mujhe poochna tha ki...ummm...ki rey..."Vicky snatched the mobile," hi aashi, tumhe disturb nahin karna chahtha par tumhe pata hain ki rey kahaan par hain"

"haan..kyun? ya types hua?"

Vicky excited," kuch nahin, uska phone lag nahin rahaan hain.."

"haan..unka na phne switched off hain" aashi replied making Vicky do chemistry to swayam again and swayam giving him dirty looks

"tho...chalo..soory we disturbed you.." and cut the call holding it victoriously in front of swayam. Swayam still looked disbelieving.

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Edited by prtn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good ONE :)
Really liked it :)
Thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
loved taani wen she didnt say anything 2 rey and just followed him
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update ...
taarey scene nice ...
gang ...thanking funny
update soon

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